"Qianshou Village Zheng actually took the initiative to admit defeat?"

Seeing Qianshou Murazheng's serious expression, Mu Fan was slightly stunned.

can make the genius light girl Senjumura Zheng take the initiative to admit defeat, which is enough to prove how wonderful the script written by the senior sister is.

After the plot of "Metamorphosis" was played, the entire venue was silent for about a minute before the judges recovered from the comic plot just now, and then pressed the rater in their hands.

At the same time, five scores appeared one after another on the big screen.

91 points, 94 points, 96 points, 92 points, 97 points -

Seeing these scores, Mu Fan's heartbeat suddenly accelerated, because in his calculations, the average score of this work had surpassed the script of Qianshou Village Zheng!

Because the rules of the competition are to remove the highest score and the lowest score to select the average score, seeing the final result, the host's voice also became high-pitched, and laughed: "I didn't expect the last work to appear, and it didn't disappoint us all, remove the highest score of 97 points, the lowest score of 91 points, and the average score of "Metamorphosis" is 94 points-"

"We would like to congratulate the short manga "Metamorphosis", which was drawn by Hideri Kashiwagi and Twilight Fanchen and written by Kasumi Shiko, won the first place in this manga festival."

Hearing this voice announcing their victory, Mu Fan's heart became completely excited at this moment.

It's really worthy of being a senior sister who has read countless famous books and books, and the senior sister has the potential to write a plot that also contains a deep meaning of life, so she will directly win the first place in this competition!

"Great!"

Ying Lili on the side screamed excitedly, and then saw Mu Fan who turned around and couldn't help but throw herself into Mu Fan's arms, and said excitedly: "Mu Fan, Mu Fan, our comics finally won the first place, we haven't worked hard in vain these days, it's really good!" That's great! ”

As she spoke, Ying Lili actually cried, her head rubbed against Mu Fan's chest, and her tears wet Mu Fan's clothes.

Mu Fan couldn't help but touch Ying Lili's hair with some distress.

These days, Ying Lili has been working hard for the things of her senior sister, and she hasn't even slept well these nights.

In fact, the success of the senior sister is not her alone, but also depends on the painting skills of Ying Lili, which completely reveals the character, demeanor, behavior and demeanor of Ichinose Rain, making the character of Ichinose Rain more vivid.

Only in everyone's memories appeared the beautiful demeanor of five Ichinose rain.

In terms of plot, the plot written by the senior sister is naturally impeccable, and the exquisite success of the comics can be attributed to Ying Lili.

As for him, he also has a great role, one is as Ying Lili's assistant, and the other is that without the cooking he does, these two girls have long been hungry and faint, how can they write such a comic?

Standing in front of the seat, looking at the big screen with a score two points higher than her script, Senjumura smiled with relief.

In fact, when she saw Kasumi Shizi write such a plot, Senjumura Sei understood that she had failed.

Although she has always been known as the youngest genius of the Dengeki Library, she has the greatest brain hole and fantasy power of the Dengeki Library, but she is only a junior high school student, and she still has a long way to go, so she can't learn everything at such an age.

Although her understanding of long stories is impeccable, compared to long plots, short stories have always been her flaw, and her understanding of short plots is not deep enough, so she lost to Xia Shizi.

But in any case, Kasumi Shiko's attainments in short stories are stronger than hers, and Senjumura Sei feels that if Kasumi Shiko can bravely get out of the difficulties she faces this time, she will definitely become her biggest enemy in the Dengeki Library ranking in the future.

Of course, Senjumura Sei is not jealous of Kasumi Shiko, but is relieved, and hopes that Kasumigaoka Shiyu can get out of the predicament, return to the Dengeki Bunko, and become friends with her.

And the audience and cartoonists in the audience did not have any objections when they heard the final result, but they agreed very much.

Although the author belongs to Kasumi Shiko, no matter from which point of view, comparing the plots of Senjumura Sei and Kasumi Shiko, they are more inclined to write the story of Kasumi Shizi's difficult life with the simplest plot.

even wrote their lives in the most straightforward way, telling them that they would be happy if they persevered.

"By the way, is the script really written by Xia Shizi this time?"

"She's been able to write such a good script, it looks like we're going to have to go back and read her 'Love Metronome' and 'The Academy of Magic's Guide to Love'."

"How could such a talented author make such a low-level mistake in the Academy of Magic's Guide to Love?"

There was a moment of silence, and the audience was talking about it.

They don't understand the reason, they don't know why Xia Shizi obviously has such a high attainment in lightness, but why she would write such a low IQ plot, which circulated on the Internet and was abused.

At this time, the senior cartoonist just now pushed his glasses and smiled: "It may be that Xia Shizi encountered some difficulties some time ago, as a cartoonist, I can also understand the writer's mentality, once the mentality is affected, the plot will also be affected accordingly." ”

Hearing this, some viewers nodded in agreement, what this cartoonist said is indeed reasonable, and mentality can indeed affect the quality of a work.

has a good mentality, even if the beginning of this work is not exciting enough, the next plot will still attract people.

It's just a mistake by Xia Shizi that caused such a serious phenomenon, which made the audience who loved her writing "Transformation" feel a little sorry for such a talented high school student.

At this moment, a gentle female voice came from the corner: "Just now I took a picture of the story written by Xia Shizi, let's all take out our mobile phones together to forward the live broadcast of today's comic festival and correct the name of Xia Shizi, right?" ”

Hearing this voice, several audience members turned their heads and saw a beautiful girl sitting in the corner, the girl was dressed in a simple beige dress, with chestnut-colored long hair scattered and then over her shoulders, flashing with crystal luster under the lights of the venue.

"This.... It's not, knotted...."

Recalling the eldest lady who occasionally appeared in the news, several people recognized the name of the girl in front of them, and were about to exclaim, the girl blinked her amber eyes, took out her mobile phone, and smiled: "Let's help Xia Shizi correct her name together!" ”

......

Mu Fan and Yingli Lili, who were sitting in the front row, didn't know what was happening in the audience, but the host on the stage took the microphone and said with a smile: "I really thank the three teachers who wrote "Transformation" for bringing us such a beautiful story, it's not too early, let us all welcome Teacher Kashiwagi Yingli, Teacher Twilight Fanchen, and Teacher Xia Shizi to the stage to receive the award with warm applause." ”

After the host finished speaking, the audience immediately set off a round of warm applause, and everyone applauded the work "Metamorphosis" from the heart, so the applause of the entire venue was as deafening as thunder.

Seeing the enthusiastic looks of the audience, the host announced that he had come to the stage to accept the award and won the first place in the comic festival, so he should go and get a medal to take back to face the senior sister, Mu Fan could only stand up and look at Ying Li Li on the left: "Ying Li Li, let's go on stage." ”

Ying Lili directly pushed Mu Fan, and said with a disgusted face: "I don't want it, do you want the world to know that I am Kashiwagi Yingli?" Come on stage, remember not to look at me on stage, I'm not with you all the way! ”

"Then you go back and go by yourself, don't ride on my motorcycle!"

Mu Fan glanced at Ying Lili, who was worried about revealing her identity, and could only walk on the stage alone.

Standing on the stage, thousands of eyes from thousands of spectators in the entire venue suddenly converged on his body, and Mu Fan suddenly felt a little uncomfortable.

As an otaku, he is somewhat crowdphobic, so many people and I don't know how many viewers in front of the TV are watching him at this moment, which makes his mood suddenly become nervous.

The host saw Mu Fan coming over, took the microphone and asked in surprise, "May I ask if you are Mr. Yingli Kashiwagi?" ”

Mu Fan took the microphone: "No, I'm Twilight Fanchen, as for Kashiwagi Yingli..... Neither she nor Ms. Kasumi Shiko came to the venue, so I had to accept the award alone. ”

Just halfway through speaking, Mu Fan suddenly saw Ying Lili in the audience gritting his teeth and glaring at him, so he could only swallow back the words he was about to say.

Hawkers, Ying Lili doesn't plan to reveal his identity, he still hasn't to expose it, otherwise it won't be fun for this eldest lady to run away in front of her.

"Oh, that's right."

The host didn't ask much, so he had to open the box, handed the medal inside to Mu Fan, and asked with a smile: "Teacher Twilight Fanchen, I have long heard that you have written two classic light, which is already a hot existence in the ACGN world, and you have won the comic festival again, do you have anything to say?" ”

Can I say that I just want to get out of power quickly now?

Can't you see that I'm nervous?

Mu Fan stood on the stage a little helpless, but after thinking about it, he suddenly thought of his senior sister, gritted his teeth and plucked up his courage, and said seriously: "I was moved from the bottom of my heart to win the first place in this manga festival with the efforts of Hideri Kashiwagi and Xia Shizi, because it proves that the efforts of the three of us are not in vain, and everyone agrees with our success..."

After saying some polite words, Mu Fan suddenly changed his words: "But..... Although it is a bit rude to change the plot of someone else's manga, I still want to give the ending to this comic. ”

"The end?"

Hearing Mu Fan's words, the host was slightly stunned, and the audience also let out an exclamation.

The audience couldn't help but wonder how the well-known writer planned to revise the plot.

The host took the lead in holding the microphone, looked at Mu Fan and asked the question that the audience wanted to ask: "In our opinion, the ending of this comic is already perfect, what kind of ending does Mr. Twilight Fanchen, as one of the writers who co-create the comics of the three of them, plan to give it what kind of ending?" ”