Yesterday's four chapters were updated, and everyone said that I didn't write well, it was too watery, especially the "glorious years" that I had been silently chasing since I opened the book, and this old friend also left a message saying that I wrote very watery.

Everyone said that I was reading and thinking seriously, and everyone said that my inner monologue was written too much, very watery, okay, then I will change it.

It's my first time writing a book, and I don't understand a lot of skills, I don't know what stuck points, settings, orgasms, etc., and I don't know how to write it all by stream-of-consciousness, and I want to write it all out if I think it's interesting.

But in any case, this is not the reason for my hydrology, and I want to get rid of it.

These are inseparable from everyone's supervision and opinions, and I hope that you will give more such opinions to Wildland in the future to help me progress.

Thank you "Glory Days" and a few book friends who gave comments, thank you, I'm reading, I'm thinking, I'm changing.

I hope you will continue to support me, thank you!

Above.

Li Ranlan

2018.4.8

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