I'm sorry, this letter of apology came too late, it's been half a year since the last text update (June 28), and I'm sorry for the fact that the update has slowed down and has stopped updating now.

There are many reasons for the suspension of the update, in order to give you an explanation, I will explain them one by one here, and one thing that must be clarified before explaining the reason for the suspension is - "This article has not been abandoned, but the update has been suspended halfway."

So let's get down to business.

——I.、Personal Factors——

1. Academic problems.

In fact, the group has talked to most of the group friends about the main reason for the stoppage, that is because the author has entered the stage of high school since the beginning of the summer vacation last year, either making up classes or going to school, and basically did not spend the summer vacation in peace, and almost all the holidays so far have been arranged clearly.

As I mentioned before, writing fiction is a hobby that I really enjoy, but it's really a hobby – a part of my life that fills in my spare time. Therefore, when the main business conflicts with it, it will inevitably squeeze its time to do what it should do, and the third year of high school is very complicated, it is not only a time to just bury your head in hard work, but also often a period of academic performance pressure and inner questioning, this period will have a lot of thinking about your future expectations, and the mental pressure is not very big or small, so when these pressures are integrated with the rest time that is not much, it often gives people a feeling of being at a loss in the background of my novel writing.

I've sworn before that I'll be able to keep it up to date after my senior year of high school and write it as I expected. But it didn't turn out to be like this, I just heard that I had to stop changing during the summer vacation when I had to make up for a month at school (and another month of making up classes outside), and I didn't even have the belief to give notice of this stop and insist on finishing it, in fact, this is a consequence of ignoring the objective conditions of writing - not considering the actual free time, always thinking that all my rest time can be used for writing. So in junior high school and the first year of high school, where there is more time, I use an hour of nap time and sleep time at night to forcibly update every day, and I barely renew, but in fact, I have already begun to procrastinate and slow down, until the third year of high school really arrives, I find that there is no so-called free time to write a novel that needs to consider a lot of indescribable factors to write a good novel.

Of course, there are many reasons why the author himself is lazy, but laziness is actually an objective reaction to the fact that there has been no return and even if there are only hundreds of people at the same time.

So to sum up this, in general, it is the third year of high school, and the author wants to take care of his own studies first, and after the college entrance examination, he will come back and fight again.

It is almost impossible to get into all the details at one point, so I will end this paragraph and move on to the next point.

2. Personal writing level and arrangement.

The beginning of this book started a month before the author's high school entrance examination.,At that time, the author was just a little addicted to the ship girl game.,Read the ship girl novels written by others and excited to follow the trend.,It's just that compared to other people's words,I may indeed write and write and slowly find my hobby now in addition to the games that boys like by nature-writing novels.。

It's a shame to say, but it's also normal, a hot-headed person who began to write novels, and started his creative career with a not very broad vision and immature thoughts, did not write very well at the beginning - although he changed every day, he thought of what was what; When you see any novel setting, whether it is suitable for your novel or not, you will put it in it; The plot is arbitrary, there is no arrangement, and it is written according to fate; The setting is clichéd and slightly cheesy; The character creation is vague, any dean, people from the social elite, and all kinds of ship girls, almost all of them are like a student's thoughts, and they can send out the ideological level of a domestic online essay written at the level of a rotten street routine. (It's not an exaggeration, even if I read the article I first wrote a year ago, the plot and characters and some settings still feel embarrassed.) ）

This is actually what I started writing in May 2016 "The Crossing of the World of the Ship Niang Ou Ti and Fei Ti", I always like to be objective in my evaluation of myself, it is indeed as mentioned above, after all, the author knows best how it was written, on this point I must admit that it did not use a lot of effort to write, and it was also very limited by my own writing level at that time, the aesthetic level at that time, the level of thought and other factors. So in 200+ chapters, when the author's thoughts slowly began to change, he rewrote the whole text, not only for the reason of the comprehensive renovation of the novel at that time - "because the foreshadowing was not written well in the early stage, it became more and more difficult to write in the later stage", but more I am afraid that I can't bear to look at such an article from my own hands, I can't bear to be embarrassed, and I don't want to give up the novel, so I quickly delete it and start over while there are not many people reading it.

In short, the old text is a sentence - Made, black history......

I know,There must still be some parts of the old text that readers love.,After all, there are still readers who think the old text is better than the current one.,But what I want to emphasize is that the reason why it's liked by everyone is because it uses a lot of routines and plots used by other authors.,It's basically some successful writing techniques.,So it's not unreasonable to be able to gain the support of readers.,But whether it's a naval battle through the world in the later period to fight the traditional world.,Or on what Admiral QQ-style dialogue tool to show the ship mother, It's all the setting of other ship girls' novels.,I'm just moving it over and using it.,Readers who like it either haven't read these novels (at least they're more famous than mine),Or they just don't mind some of the behaviors of copying the setting.,That's why I like to read it.。

I'll talk about this question later, the above is what I said about the level of writing and improper arrangement, the main thing is that the author didn't have any copyright awareness and the literacy that an author should have when he first wrote the novel, which led to a problem, and the following reasons are stated.

3. Physical reasons.

The author is actually not in very bad health, and he doesn't want to play any emotional cards, don't look at me to be in the group for a while on vacation, but it's not a fairy who stays up late at night and doesn't sleep at noon, and the serious creation and writing of novels does require a lot of updating of about 3000 words a day to think about a lot of character building, plot, setting + about an hour and a half of code words, clarifying the meaning of the sentence, re-watching and feeling, correcting the process of correcting typos and sentences and then sending them, the whole process adds up, It's almost impossible to write a chapter and make a good novel in two hours. Although the former can be done at school, the latter actually takes more time, and an hour of nap time and about an hour of evening I need to complete almost all of them efficiently and with quality and quantity, and I don't doze off, and I don't have to worry about some other objective factors that affect my writing - this is impossible, just being lazy and wanting to sleep is enough for me to work twice a week (at the beginning of the new article).

And slowly, I'm afraid that noon + night spent on writing should have a lot of time to sleep, I often go to school during the day after class to fall asleep, and I doze off in class, as soon as I have a lot of time to rest between classes (the third year of high school has become a review), I am almost sleeping, and the decline in grades is not small, and it is also worthy of the nickname given to me by some classmates - "Sleeping God".

At the same time, it was originally puberty, and the frequency of washing my hair was not high, and there were a lot of acne on my forehead and face, and the disordered work and rest gave me a strong sense of pressure and tiredness, which was not conducive to renewal, and it was not conducive to learning, just like a vicious circle that forced me to adjust my body by not updating it at some times, and this frequency was relatively high, and it was not suitable for issuing announcements and readers every time, so I didn't state these reasons, and after entering the third year of high school, it was naturally more impossible to do so. After all, writing novels is the same as studying, and the body is the capital of the revolution.

The author doesn't want to make a mess of my body right now, so that I can't support me to write a novel when I have time in the future, and that would be more than worth the cost.

To sum up, it is that the body cannot support the high-intensity renewal work when the time is not enough, so it stops changing in the third year of high school, and enters the second major point below.

——II.、The novel's own factors——

1. The awkward style at the beginning after the rewrite.

To be honest, the author's main motivation for writing a new essay is because the aesthetic and ideological level continues to grow with age, and because I have watched a lot of dramas and some movies with a relatively high depth of thought in Europe and the United States, the impact on my thoughts does not match my own writing level, and I think about the plot picture after careful consideration, and because of the excitement when I first started writing a new book, I used a kind of too detailed and perfect description of things when I didn't pay attention to the 60 chapters or even some island style chapters. Therefore, the embarrassing writing of the elegant composition causes people to look uncomfortable, and it is uncomfortable to look at themselves, and they want to change it, but they can't change it. Now that the character is complete, after stabilizing the writing in the middle and late stages of the island wind chapter, the two paragraphs before and after the novel with a new degree of renewal have produced a relatively strong contrast in writing, and this stop is intended to correct these style errors, (In fact, most of the style problems are in the first 60 chapters, and there are fewer in the middle and later paragraphs, but there are also some problems.) Get it out of the way before you start writing.

The above is a matter of style.

2. Unclear thinking.

It's true,The writing route of the new text is a more realistic fantasy novel in the future world.,And it's very original.,Less fandom content.,Although it's a novel with the existence of a non-realistic creature like a ship girl.,But ideologically, it's a text that describes a main line that connects different sub-corners in a future world to experience the misfortune and warm story of the text.,Such a type of text is very deep and stable in thought., Because the storyline of this kind of text needs to maintain a certain level of continuous quality and not change the angle of thought casually, otherwise it will become very strange - strange feels good on the whole, but it is just the feeling that some details are not quite right and cannot be remembered.

This is actually caused by the author's inappropriate arrangement between the character setting and the plot, which can be illustrated by example:

For example, Tirpitz, she was the protagonist's teacher in the early stage, and those who have played the game know that she is a kind of adult mentality with a strong homely attribute, but sometimes she is more soft and cute, likes to play with computers and mobile phones, reads or draws comics, is lazy to the extreme, and always has all kinds of unhealthy fantasies about her sister Bismarck (to put it bluntly, it is sister control + dead house + female high school student + more cute sister)

But how did the author describe Tirpitz in the text?

Dedicated, smiling is very warm-hearted, full of maturity, doing all kinds of things more smoothly, and he is also a leader of the education group of the college.

Why did such a character set up on the sister of a dead house girl high school student?

To put it bluntly, it is because of the author's follow-up arrangement, Tirpitz's experience in the plot is also very tragic, all her abnormal performance at this time is actually just a disguise, and does not show the truth, but the author did not write into the follow-up plot, and the previous plot is also far away from Tirpitz's chapter, so Rong Yi caused a feeling that the author didn't even understand Tirpitz's character, and it must have been written as a subjective judgment written by a rookie.

As mentioned above, this is the contradiction caused by the conflict between the original character design and the plot arrangement of the reader's misunderstanding of the novel, and it is also a problem that the author did not consider clearly at the beginning, and this problem is also fatal - this directly leads to the fact that this article is not too routine and no one reads it, and it also directly leads to such a double resistance that people who hate routine texts do not like to read it, which is a kind of situation where the author does not indicate the theme of a good novel, which leads to the situation that the reader quits the pit prematurely, which has a bad impact on the novel. Therefore, changes will need to be made later.

-- Dividing line --

The above is the main reason for the stoppage,In order not to expand the amount of reading that everyone reads,The details will be less talked.,After all, the above content should allow readers to understand the author's meaning when they see it here.,The following is mainly about the future whereabouts and arrangements of the novel.。

1. The time of the novel continues: After the end of the college entrance examination on June 8 (determined according to the actual date), it will be delayed by one day (the end of the exam will be rested for one day), and the update will begin.

2. The novel changes a large number of elements: the title of the book (after all, the title of the book cannot be repeated from the starting point), partition (now it is the game area, and it should have been voted in the two-dimensional area), introduction, details, perfect writing, character completion, elimination of objective factors, etc. (such as the contradiction between the character and the plot stated above).

3. New elements of the novel: Selected reading areas related to the work:

I., setting area: mainly to provide you with a detailed explanation of all the settings, it is generally very important to understand the setting to understand the setting of the plot, will be explained concisely in the text, try to improve everyone's reading experience, look less at the setting and more at the content, (generally in the form of classes to explain the setting, need one or two chapters.) Some specific setting explanations,It is specially moved to this section for detailed explanation,This is a complete optional reading area,That is, if you don't understand it in the text.,Or simply interested in reading.,Or haven't read it for a long time and simply forgot to set the reader to flip through it.,Save the trouble to flip through the time of the setting that I don't know where to hide in the previous text.,You can find the setting you want to recall here.,Improve the reading experience of readers.。

Generally speaking, when an important setting is created, it will be updated in this area, and other non-important settings will be updated from time to time.

II., supporting character chapter area: its description form is similar to the text of the ship's memories form, is a kind of character separate plot, describing whose plot, who is the protagonist, such as Ito Yuyi, that is, the plot from the perspective of Youyi, Youyi is the protagonist, this kind of chapter with a more moderate length (up to about 50 chapters) to describe the life experience of a single character, hiding a lot of foreshadowing and character setting content, the connotation level of the article is more in-depth, After reading it, you will understand the worldview and character image of this article more thoroughly, and it doesn't matter if you don't want to read it, it won't affect the reading experience of the text. (After all, I said this is an optional reading area.) ）

III., pure funny and relaxed area: The body of this article will be more warm and daily in the early stage, and there will be a lot of cruel and sadistic plots in the middle and late stages (first of all, the author is not a fool, I know what to write and what not to write, sadism and cruelty do not mean that there will be some plots that readers hate, please don't make too subjective judgments.) ),This area is a chapter presented in a purely funny and relaxed way,(The style can refer to the Japanese style) The main role is to provide treatment for the depression of the text.,But for fun.、Ridicule and stalks.,Of course, some characters won't work.,Some serious characters will naturally no longer be serious.,Please understand clearly in advance.。

4. The specific title of the book has been changed: "Future Ship Girl World"

Thinking about it, in fact, the author's book is mainly an original article based on the pathos and world view of "Attack on Titan", emphasizing the hardcore of the plot and the full image of the characters, the setting of the God of War still exists, but in fact, it is not the main theme, plus it takes about 200 chapters for the protagonist to become the God of War in the early stage, so hanging a title such as "God of War Admiral" will make readers who have read 100+ chapters and have not seen the God of War Admiral are unknown, so the "God of War Admiral" in the title of the book The elements are deleted, and it reflects more of the three elements of "future", "ship mother" and "world", which can better reflect what the author wants to write.

5. The author's pen name was changed: "Hua Gu Hua Gu Hua" (suspended, it may be changed in the future, but the word Hua Gu must be there.) ）

The word "Hua Gu" is actually called more in the group, among my classmates, this is the nickname I was given by my classmates in junior high school, the full name is actually "Flower Girl", the reason seems to be that I am more quiet, introverted, one day I wore a white T shirt with a little red flower on the shoulder as the fuse of the birth of the nickname, in order to call it smooth, classmates also called "Hua Gu", and then there are classmates (a flag team) into my novel book friend group, still call me a nickname, so the people in the group call me so, get used to it, In addition, there is a nickname called by readers, in fact, the sense of distance will be much smaller, quite kind, so I don't plan to change it, just quote the title of the book.

Of course, because of the homonym, new readers who don't know why will call me "mushroom...... Forget it, love is called that, it's all me, isn't it?

6. Cover replacement.

The novel after the college entrance examination is reflected in a form that I have very high expectations (otherwise why would I be talking so much now?). I will pay out of my own pocket to ask a professional novel cover production website to make a cover with a more depressing style that looks more in line with the content of the article, which is much better than a book title that I don't know which website to deduct a picture from and can't even see it with the Meitu Xiuxiu.

-- Dividing line --

That's all my main statement about the apology, the reason for the stoppage, and the specific changes that followed.

A more detailed update arrangement, once again, will also be stated.

After the end of the college entrance examination, take a day off, and still need everyone to give 20 days of time (anyway, most people haven't entered the summer vacation yet), so that the author can carry out 10 more novels every day, the most important content is to completely modify the content of the novel that produces problems, retain the excellent content, the plot is roughly unchanged, and the supporting characters are enriched and perfected in a process, the most important way is to carry the existing article, and then publish it after modification, but there are still quite a lot of content to be changed, and 10 still needs to burst the liver, Today's 160+ chapters take 17 days to complete, and the remaining 3 days will involve the author's own arrangements for the cover production of the novel, the construction of partition typesetting, the signing of contracts, and the voluntary filling of the college entrance examination.

After these 20 days, the author will officially enter the novel update with one update a day (maybe two updates a day, but consider my actual update ability, after all, it takes a lot of time to think about problems for quality).

As for the signing of the contract, if the editor agrees, I will keep the current 160+ chapters free, and then charge for the later, the signing is also a legal contract, which can bind the author to maintain stable updates, otherwise the consequences of the breach of contract will be more serious, and the author can also be provided with a certain subsidy, which can naturally give the author a more comfortable update environment, I hope you can understand and support.

That's pretty much it, the New Year has passed, so let's wish everyone a happy new year! Happy New Year, auspicious and healthy!

Thank you!