Well...... I don't know how friends who have seen the latest chapters feel about the last few chapters......

The last few chapters, I read it myself, and it feels strange...... The feeling is strange.,Maybe the author has little understanding of combat dramas or novels.,Prefer daily life.,So when I first started writing the battle chapter, although the setting was in place.,But the core idea is very confusing.,Originally, I wanted to highlight a very strong depressive atmosphere.,Highlight the death of war.。

But in fact, the article I wrote didn't feel that way at all, and I didn't know what to do, and I used the paragraphs that should have been used as foreshadowing here...... Before the official start of the fight, the height was raised too high.,When the battle started later,,The style can't be lowered.,First, it's hard to write an inch now.,Second, the article has become bizarre.,I want everyone to have a little more good impression of the heroine.,And I want to introduce more settings so that everyone can't understand it.,At the same time, I'm doing foreshadowing...... The superposition of these three ideas of writing and the intermingling of these three chapters at the same time make the relationship between the three very complex...... To put it simply, when the setting is introduced, because of the other two things I want to describe to you, the setting is not very clear to everyone, just like there is no introduction, just in the number of words in the water...... The same is true for the other two.

There is another thing, which is the problem of blackening.

Obviously, this setting was written early, after all, this battle is essentially just a drill battle, although it has to be blackened, it can't be too early, it is already blackened before the fight starts, so how to write the performance of the ship's mother, and look at the admiral coldly? …… Doesn't it make the protagonist very embarrassed, and the article feels even stranger.

Because maybe I'm really too impatient.,I want to make everyone a little surprised by the battle article.,I think the setting is very good.,Let everyone like it more.。

But the actual situation is that even when I rewatched it myself, I felt a very inexplicable atmosphere of the water chapter, so I had to rewrite the battle chapter.

I'm going to rewrite chapters 149-159 in a week...... In addition to the reason for being lazy, there is also the reason for the laziness of writing slowly, as mentioned above, the mind is confused, and I don't know what to highlight, so I will not make a good decision in half a day, and I can't grasp the details well, so naturally I write slowly.

I haven't had any exams or study problems lately, so I can spare more time to concentrate on writing, and I'm sorry for the readers who like this article, but you have suffered too much.

I'll do my best to make it up as soon as possible and fix the problems in these chapters with action.

In addition, all ten chapters will be sent out next Sunday, and the author had better save at least two chapters in the draft box after that, in case this situation arises like now, so that you can adjust it in advance without hindering everyone from reading, please give it some time! This time, we will definitely not let everyone pigeon! (Or else...... If you don't do it, you will apologize for the crime? …… Bah...... ）

You still have to be honest...... What has not been done so many times before, this time the author must make up for the credibility!