119 Lin Wan's smile was fading

Is this the case with the original Mo bullying young people who are poor?

After reading the chapter from Xia Ji Half-Immortal, Su Yue fell into thought.

For the god of online literature, don't bully the poor youth, Su Yue, as a reading fan, of course knows the status of this book in the earth's online literature. However, because it didn't meet his taste, from the appearance of this book to the time he crossed over, Su Yue only read three chapters and didn't read it again.

This penguin netizen named 'Xia Ji Half Immortal', when he sent this idea to Su Yue to see, Su Yue once thought that this person was the deity, but when he really saw the plot of the text, this suspicion became lower and lower, until now, Su Yue was more willing to believe that this was a coincidence.

Although Su Yue has not read the original work, judging from the information he heard from other channels, although the characters of this book are somewhat templated, the plot can be described as a climax.

For those new readers who are new to the online literature industry, such themes and plots are definitely masterpieces in their hearts.

But combined with other people's evaluations of this work, the more Su looked at it, the more he felt that the book he saw now was not bullying the poor boy, and it was a little different from the one in his memory.

When Su Yue first heard the creative setting, he thought it was that one. But after reading the first three chapters, he realized that something was wrong, and after reading the fourth chapter, he could already be sure that it was just his unilateral overthinking.

Asaokoshi: "What do you say......?"

"Half-immortal, your style is not suitable for writing about such a subject."

The more I look at it, the more strange it becomes, and in the end, Su Yue plans to persuade him, a book friend, to think about a new subject.

Don't look at this world, there is no online article similar to Mo bullying the young poor and retiring waste wood from marriage, but even if someone thinks of it, because the subject matter is not too new, it is still difficult to write well.

With such a theme, let alone Xia Ji being half an immortal, even if Su Yue is asked to write it, he probably can't guarantee that the plot he writes will be as enthusiastically sought after by readers as it is on Earth.

After all, in the online literature industry, each author has his own style, and the special style will bring a deep impression to the reader, and at the same time, it will limit the author from being destined to be bad at certain topics.

Su Yue can see that this Xia Ji half-immortal is like him, and he likes to pay attention to characters. For the plot, most of the time is in the service of the characters.

This style is destined to make her unable to write a plot like not bullying the poor boy.

Xia Ji Half Immortal: "Please tell me what kind of subject matter I am suitable for?"

The expected reply, when he saw this, Lin Yun's heart that was originally hanging in the air finally fell.

When she first thought of using this method to approach Su Yue, Lin Wan didn't consider that she would do it rashly, what if there was an accident? In her opinion, she is born again, not to say that she is incompetent, but most things are difficult for her.

But as it was written later, Lin Wan realized that just writing it made her rack her brains, and what she finally wrote was simply unreadable. Fortunately, this is just close to Su Yue's medium, if it is really uploaded to the Internet, she is estimated to be sprayed to death.

"Your style of writing is good at describing characters and paying attention to details, and you can think about the subject matter through these two aspects."

Putting aside all the factors that can directly affect the judgment.,Purely in terms of quality.,Xia Ji half-immortal's previous fan-bl text and these chapters,There are still very outstanding advantages.。

Perhaps because women are more sensitive to feelings than men, Xia Ji Banxian's characters are very delicate, and they will definitely satisfy readers who like the interaction of characters.

Xia Ji Half Immortal: "That's it...... I don't know ...... at all."

In the final analysis, it was just Lin Wan's temporary idea, if Lin Wan really wanted to choose this path to go to the black, even if she was intentional, it would be useless to not be able to enter the door.

Not to mention letting Lin Wan learn slowly, what she lacks most now is time, and she doesn't have much time to waste on learning and researching how to start writing this kind of thing.

Of course, if Su Yue taught her personally, let alone learn to write, even if it was a mountain of swords and a sea of fire, she would have to break through.

It's all a dream......

Lin Wan only thought about it in her heart, and didn't expect Su Yue to teach her to write in person. After all, not to mention that Su Yue is facing the college entrance examination now, after the college entrance examination, he still has a lot of plans, and in terms of his character, he will not waste much time on her.

Shallow Yue: "I have a few ideas here that are quite in line with your style and theme, do you want to hear about it?"

So far, Su Yue has passed the kind of class that needs to rely on creativity to eat.

Because of the relationship between the crossing, Su Yue started early, plus there is a foundation. As long as he writes in his current style, there will never be a phenomenon of no readers reading it.

In this way, some interesting ideas that Su Yue had thought of before have been placed in his computer. If it weren't for the fact that he thought Xia Ji was half immortal interesting, it is estimated that it would take for these ideas to see the light of day again.

Xia Ji Half-Immortal: "Is it okay to be bigger like this?!!

Just when Lin Wan was about to give up this path and think of other ways again, Su Yue's information made her a little incredulous.

Su Yue actually taught her personally?!!

Is this a dream?

Asaokoshi: "Of course, I don't need these ideas much anymore. Rather than letting these ideas lie on my computer, I might as well let you see if you can carry them forward."

This is only a small part of the reason, and most of the reason is that Su Yue wants to see the ideas he came up with being written and what the plot is like.

In the words of a great god of online literature, it is.

If I can write persistently for more than ten years, it means that I love writing very much, and I love writing and reading.

And the god of online literature who said such impressive words was none other than him.

Xia Ji Half Immortal: "Mmmm, the older you say, I will definitely study seriously."

If Lin Wan didn't grasp the opportunity that came to the door in front of him, then Lin Wan could really buy a piece of tofu and die.

Su Yue's message just now, in Lin Yun's opinion, is like a gold medal to avoid death. In the future, even if she does something that causes the relationship between the two to fall into a cold war, she can also use this identity to deduce whether Su Yue has lost his anger.

No, let's wait until he calms down. If you are calm and calm, then take the initiative to apologize and reconcile.

There's a lot more to it than that.

At this moment, Lin Yun felt that the goddess of love was on her side this time.

Asaokoshi: "Recently, I came up with a particularly interesting subject."

Shallow Yue: "In recent years, the Internet has not been popular for the rebirth of the male protagonist to make up for the regrets in the past, if you write a female protagonist reborn in the opposite routine, the effect is absolutely leveraged. Plus ......"

Lin Yun's smile was gradually fading.