Su Yue went back to the bedroom after eating, as if he had forgotten about the planning of the chopping hand festival, and did not mention it in the following time.

Su Qianqian, she didn't take the initiative to remind the planning plan.

This kind of thing, just stop at the point, leave a thought and continue later, if you have to consume it all at once, then what is the difference between this behavior and before?

Su Qianqian, who was washing dishes in the kitchen, remembered what Huaxinyu had said to her.

"To truly love someone is not to impose 'good' on the other person at any cost, but to provide material energy or spiritual energy in a way that understands him."

This sentence was like playing the piano to a cow to Su Qianqian, who had fallen into obsession at that time, and in Su Qianqian's opinion at that time, Hua Xinyu said this just to ridicule the loser with the winner.

However, now that Su Qianqian thinks about it, he finds that this woman has been telling the truth from beginning to end, and they are all golden sentences.

That woman is terrible......

In the past, Su Qianqian just thought that Hua Xinyu was lucky, and she got her brother's heart a little earlier than her.

But now......

Su Qianqian, who calmed down, found more and more that Hua Xinyu, a woman who seemed ordinary on the outside and had a scarce sense of existence, to a certain extent, her talent was comparable to that of her younger brother.

I'm not going to throw in the towel!

After realizing what he was wrong, Su Qianqian encouraged himself not to make the same mistake again while correcting it.

Back in the bedroom, Su Yue hurriedly turned on the computer and boarded the penguin to wait for Su Qiuwen's message.

Su Yue found that since he was a child, he had never looked forward to one thing like now.

Fiction character or something,It's not like the company's website hasn't gotten it for him before.,But due to lack of technology.,The character design that came out isn't spicy, but that's it.。

But Su Qiuwen is different.

For Su Yue, Su Qiuwen is not only his real classmate, she is also an iceberg girl who is not close to her classmates, what is surprising is that this iceberg girl is a loyal fan of Su Yue, and at the same time, she also painted a character for the characters in the novels she likes.

Regardless of whether this person is beautiful or not, the chemical effect produced by these identity factors alone is enough to arouse Su Yue's curiosity.

Soon, the penguin icon flashed in the bottom right corner of his computer.

Su Yue was a little happy and quickly clicked on the icon, and found that it was not Su Qiuwen who sent him a message.

Xia Ji Half-Immortal: "The older I get, I've already written the first three chapters of the novel, can you help me read it?"

So fast? It seems that this half-immortal boss is not slow.

Su Yue replied immediately when he saw the other party's message.

Asaokoshi: "No problem."

If it were someone else, Su Yue probably chose to ignore it, but he still couldn't ignore this Xia Ji half-immortal's novel. After all, the idea proposed before was a novel idea that Su Yue was looking forward to.

I don't know what the plot of this suspected rotten girl will be.

Xia Ji Half Immortal: "The document has been passed over, please check it as much as possible."

Su Yue received the document from the other party, unzipped it and began to watch it.

The three chapters of the novel are less than 10,000 words, and Su Yue read them for nearly ten minutes.

emmmmmmmm......

How do you say this...... Unsurprising or a little disappointed?

Xia Ji Half-Immortal: "How's it going...... The bigger?"

In the women's dormitory of Yucheng University, Lin Yun's coquettish face was a little nervous.

She had just passed Su Yue three chapters of the novel, but it took her ten hours to get it ready, and Lin Wan was nervous because she wasn't sure if the novel she wrote was the same as what Su Yue had mentioned to her.

For some reason, when Lin Wan actually wrote it, she found that the content that Su Yue had told her in her mind was always intermittent and could not become complete content. After thinking about it for a long time, Lin Wan couldn't recall it, and in the end she had to add her own ideas according to the intermittent content to complete it.

Before passing it to Su Yue, Lin Yun read it no less than ten times by himself, and after repeatedly confirming that there was no problem, he passed it to Su Yue. However, because it was almost ten minutes, Su Yue hadn't replied to her yet, which made Lin Yun, who was usually confident, nervous.

Shallow Yue: "Half-immortal, how do you gaygay?"

"Asaoshi withdrew a message"

“......”

Although Su Yue withdrew relatively quickly, Lin Wan still saw the news of his withdrawal.

Su Yue, he shouldn't treat me as a man, right......

Forget it, a man is a man, and when he meets in reality, he may be able to give him an unexpected surprise.

As a traveler who has never read and only heard of the famous online book 'Thirty Years of Hedong and Thirty Years of Hexi', Su Yue doesn't know much about the specific plot of the novel, but even so, he can be sure that the original plot is a bit different from what he sees now.

How to say it, the beginning of Mo Bully Young Man Poor written by Xia Ji Half Immortal gave Su Yue an unexpected sense of amazement, and this surprise came from her own strong writing. But after that, the more Su looked at it, the more something was wrong, and it wasn't until he finished reading the third chapter that he was sure where this error came from.

The plot is generally similar, but there are problems between the characters.

Su Yue, who has not seen the original work, although he doesn't know how the original work deals with the dialogue between the characters, but Su Yue can judge from listening to others' evaluations that the characters between the original works are by no means like what he wrote.

Where the specific problem is, Su Yue can also find it.

There is nothing wrong with this dialogue between men and women written by Xia Ji Banxian, but what about men and men......

The more Su Yue looks, the more he has the illusion that he is full of feelings, if he writes down according to this momentum, the actor Xiao Yan will not pretend to be forced to slap his face all the way to the end, but will open the door to a new world.

Asa Yue: "How can I say it, there is a problem with what you wrote, and this problem comes from the male characters......

It's okay if this Xia Ji half-immortal is really a girl, rotten girl, it's normal to like to see what and that between men and men, just like many men like to look at what and that between women.

But if it's a man......

Su Yue felt blind.

More than that, Su Yue now thought of a question.

The real identity of the other party is the one who is a sister paper......

It's not that the sister paper is a man and writes such a plot......

I rely on (‵o′) convex, this question is so frustrating not to think about it! Don't think about it!

Throwing those chaotic thoughts out of his mind, Su Yue found that he was no longer able to face this Xia Ji half-immortal with a normal attitude.

The true identity of this Xia Ji half-immortal, whether it is a man or a woman, can be regarded as a kind of torture for Su Yue.

Xia Ji Half Immortal: "Can you elaborate on the bigger question?"

For Lin Yun, writing novels is still a layman after all, and she thinks that she has read it a lot ten times and has not found a problem, but in Su Yue's eyes, he can see the problem at a glance.

Lin Wan didn't have anything to be arrogant about, she took the opportunity to humbly ask Su Yue for advice.

Asaokoshi: "This ......"

Su Yue was worried, if he really said it, would there be an act of the class to get an axe?