The fact that the young man and thief are preparing to transform into writing a plot soon caused a discussion on the forum, but, after all, the new book hasn't come out yet, and the subject matter is not even clear, so naturally there is not much to say.

Mid-February.

After stealing Chen Yulan's bra while she was taking a shower, pretending to be a salted egg Superman was discovered......

Li Xiaoci was beaten again.

Chen Yulan originally wanted to pull her stupid hair and say, "Such a big person is still pretending to be a salted egg superman, is he naïve, are you a primary school student", but, after thinking about it again, she decided to give up verbal preaching and directly let this thing use the flesh to remember the lesson.

After all, if she asked like that, this thing would definitely be very shameless to say "I was originally a primary school student", without the self-esteem and discipline of an adult at all.

However, what Chen Yulan didn't know was that Li Xiaoci's purpose in stealing her bra was actually to smell and see if the flat-chested person had the smell of milk, not to pretend to be a salted egg superman at all.

And it turns out......

You can smell it, but it's definitely not milky!

Why do you think she can judge so accurately?

Because the smell is not at all the same as her mother's milky smell, yes, this is a judgment based on her own experience!

……

Rubbing his buttocks with grinning teeth, Li Xiaoci also handed over the original manuscript of the first volume of "The Gate of Destiny Stone" to Chen Yulan.

The number of words in the first volume is not much, only about 80,000 words, which is equivalent to the amount of 30 or 40 chapters of online articles, although it is incredible that so much content can be produced in a week, but Chen Yulan and readers have long been accustomed to this speed. After all, Mo Shao's hand speed is well known in the light circle, and he can be called the fastest man in the industry.

Yes, this fastest refers to the speed of the code word, and Li Xiaoci will never admit that there is any other ambiguity in it.

Then......

Chen Yulan also quickly finished reading the original manuscript of the first volume, and then looked at Li Xiaoci blankly, looking stupid.

She will definitely not admit that she can't understand it with her low IQ, but, I have to say, after reading it, what she understands is limited to a few parts.

Say......

The actor's second illness is too stupid, and he is still like this when he is a college student, don't you really feel ashamed?

Let's say ......

The assistant's tsundere is so cute!

Dudu is so gentle and cute!

Subukako is so cute, too! It's a pity it's a man.

As for why the assistant is alive even though he is dead, and what is the worldline theory, and what is the debate on the rationality of the time machine, to be honest, she didn't understand it at all.

"You don't understand, do you? With your IQ, I guessed it. On the other side, Li Xiaoci collapsed on the sofa as if she had no bones, and pointed at Chen Yulan with her toes, humming and mocking.

Although it's a legal young girl,But,The action itself is still very lustful.,If there's any foot control or something there.,It's estimated that you can't hold it.。

Of course, Chen Yulan is definitely not foot control, and she will not be interested in this white and tender little foot at all. Therefore, she also grabbed Li Xiaoci's ankle very simply and lifted her upside down like a chicken.

"Are you still in the air?" Chen Yulan squinted.

"I'm sorry."

……

On February 19th, the first volume of the much-anticipated Demon Boy Transformation Work "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny" was finally released.

In a sense, "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny" has attracted much more attention than any previous book release. On the one hand, it is the end of "Clannad", which basically determines the fact that Mo Shao is the most popular light family, and on the other hand, the big guy in the field of love light suddenly ran to write science fiction light, which will definitely arouse the curiosity of readers.

For example, Liu Along, after hearing that "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny" was on sale, he even gave up today's fitness plan, and went to the bookstore early in the morning to queue up, and then bought the physical book of "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny".

For a fat house like Liu Along, is a fitness plan important? Of course it's important! If he wants to conquer his sister's heart, the first thing he will do is go from one ab to eight packs!

Even such an important task was abandoned, so you can imagine how important the new book of Mo Shao is to him!

But......

After reading it, he found that the content of the first volume did not seem to be as attractive as he expected.

How to say it.,The content of the entire first volume is full of a feeling of "it seems like something big news is going to happen but it's just not happening".,Although there are a lot of strange details like some big foreshadowing.,But,Look at the whole volume.,There's not a single plot explosion!

In addition, Rentaro Okabe's second secondary illness also made Liu Along, who had long been out of the second stage of secondary school, feel very embarrassed. I think that at the beginning, as a scholar and fat house, he also used to be in the second middle school, but he secretly wrote a little messy Long Aotian, and as a result, he gave up after writing a few thousand words. And the actor's middle two is a bit too much, committing the second in front of strangers, if the radio waves don't match, then the shame is simply bursting, okay?

In short, after reading a volume, it is a feeling that I don't understand the plot at all, but it seems to be so powerful!

In fact, when it comes to character shaping, the character design of those female characters is still good, after all, Mo Shao was the pioneer of cute elements such as "tsundere" and "natural stay", and these character settings are still remarkable, but, if you want to talk about the plot, it feels like it's not as interesting as the love light that Mo Shao wrote before, at least, Liu Along didn't have the feeling of wanting to watch the next volume after reading the first volume, and if you want to say that there is any motivation to continue watching, it may be the assistant's tsundere, and there is a really reasonable dulu.

You say there's still sulfur flowers?

Get lost! Even if he doesn't have a girlfriend and is single all his life, he can't like the big eagle cute girl!

He also has a similar feeling, and there is a physical education teacher surnamed Chen at Kyoto Baita Elementary School.

In the past two days, Baita Primary School has just opened, and he is still relatively leisurely, so he also took the time to finish reading the first volume of "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny".

After reading it, he felt that Mo Shao's transformation seemed to be a little unsuccessful, other people's plot flow, suspense, all kinds of reversals, people can't stop watching, why is there no highlight here in "The Gate of Destiny Stone"? Although there are a few unclear foreshadowings, the long and uneventful plot of the first volume is not good at all, is it too slow, right?

Could it be that my posture is not rich enough, so I can't see the wonderful places inside?

……

Soon, on the night of the release, there were many posts on the forums about the Gate of the Destiny Stone.

"I'll just say it directly, Maise Hongliqi is my wife, I don't accept to fight!"

"Then the Dudu is mine!"

"Huh! A bunch of rubbish! Real men all choose sulfur flowers, okay! ”

After all, the character design is still very pleasing, so after the first volume was released, the role kitchens of various parties also came into being. However, in addition to the daily fight of the character kitchen, someone also posted: "Anyway, I think the first volume is a little boring. ”

"That's right, I was a little dozing off, especially the part where Okabe and his assistant were debating in the lecture, I felt that my posture level was completely insufficient, just like a person who had just passed subject two was watching a group of old drivers flying cars, and the whole process was confused, just like a high math class, and then I fell asleep."

"There is also the male protagonist's secondary two disease, and the embarrassment of labor and management is about to come out."

"I think it's actually okay for secondary two diseases, if you can match the radio waves."

"Hey, hey, don't you see how much foreshadowing is laid out in the first volume? I'm sure that this book is absolutely a god in the later period! ”

"It's been too early to start blowing it too much, brother, this is the first time the old thief has written science fiction, are you sure he won't collapse?"

"If it's a light love, I dare to say that it will definitely be stable, and God is predetermined, but, the old thief is a work of transformation, and to be honest, I really can't draw conclusions early."

There was a lot of discussion on the forum, but most people were still looking forward to the follow-up performance of "Gate of Destiny Stone". After all, an excellent author should not be too bad at writing about any subject, especially Mo Shao is the most popular light family in the industry, even if he transforms, he should not disappoint. Although a small number of readers did not have a very good impression of the first volume, they did not say any too arbitrary comments, and most of them were more rational when discussing them.

As a matter of fact......

For this phenomenon, as a little genius, Li Xiaoci himself certainly expected it.

After all, Stone Gate is originally a slow-burning masterpiece, if there is no crazy foreshadowing in the first 12 episodes of the animation, where are the ups and downs behind? It's like a person needs to eat four buns to be full, but it doesn't mean that you can eat the fourth bun directly, not to mention that you need to before you, who can without jerking? Therefore, no matter how boring and boring the early stage is, these foreshadowings must be written and cannot be skipped.

Of course, she will definitely become a god man in the end, and this will never change!