Essay on Coke

I would like to share the interesting conversations I had with several readers before, because Cola likes to write interesting things, just like Coke's articles, I will write about interesting things, because Cola thinks that reading books is the most important thing to have fun.

Story A.

A: Coke, you have so many characters, you will definitely write a collapse.

1,000,000 words.

A: Coke, you can't control it, the character is about to collapse.

At 2,000,000 words:

A: Coke, if you write like that, it will definitely collapse.

3,000,000 word hours.

A: Coke, your world is too big, and you're going to collapse.

At 4 million words:

A: Coke, your character really collapsed, it's completely different.

B: Huh? Where?

A: For example, you Xia Xin, Xia Xin has such a deep relationship with Xia Ye, and she will watch her being taken away, I know this is the need of the plot, I didn't expect you to write such a mentally retarded plot, and the characters are completely collapsed here.

B: But at that time, didn't he just know that he had killed a lot of people, that his parents were dead, or because of his relationship, he had hurt so many people, and he was sad and guilty.

A: Didn't my parents die a long time ago, and the people in those villages, is it important to have a summer night? Death is death, Xia Xin is such a smart and wise person, calm person, you write him like this, it can't collapse here.

B: Uh... Parents, villagers, those who killed themselves, those who killed themselves, don't they matter?

A: If you die, you will die, does it matter if you have night and night, Xia Xin is such a smart person, you wrote earlier that he has such a good relationship with night and night, and here you watch him being taken away? It's too mentally retarded, and later, Xia Xin can't hear that it's a fake night and night on the phone, so many years of relationship fake?

B: It means that no matter what happens, no matter who dies, Xia Xin should be calm, wise, and see through other people's tricks at a glance.

A: Of course, isn't that the kind of person you're portraying? And Yeye is so smart, can't I hear that Xia Xin can't say that kind of thing? You don't care about the IQ of the characters for the sake of the plot?

B: Well, have your parents never beaten you, scolded you, always the same, if your parents beat you one day, will you tear his face to see if this is someone else pretending?

A: What are you talking about, don't take the topic away, and you are not only here Xia Xin collapsed, Xia Ye collapsed, Leng Xue Tong also collapsed, such a cold person in front, what is the difference between him and Xia Xin in the past few days, and ordinary little girls? Is that cold, that's not cold at all. The characters are not in shape, and Xia Xin is too, the person who is so wooden in the front, after the love with Shu Yuewu in the back, the words have become more, and they will be skinny, they will joke, they will be skinny, they will be serious, they feel like two people are writing.

B: Eh, are you facing the same face as your girlfriend, parents, classmates, and teachers? The earth will explode tomorrow, will you also sit down and analyze the cause and effect?

A: I don't understand what you're talking about, don't change the subject, it feels like this book is written by two people, the personalities are different before and after, and the characters have changed...... Look at the comment area yourself, many people say that your character has collapsed...

B:: Uh. I found that what you said made a lot of sense, and you were right!

A: Yes, I told you for your own good. You can correct it well, pay attention next time...

PS: It's to share the next essay... Let's take a look... I think it's quite interesting.

And then there's another conversation that goes like this.

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C: Let me declare first, Coke, I used to chase 5 books, but now I will chase you 1 book, and I will wait for you to update it every day, I am your fan

D: Thank you.

C: But I have to say, you're too watery.

D: Huh?

C: Take these photos of you writing about Xia Xin's cold snow pupil room, although you wrote very wonderfully, and I also read it with passion, but you see, does it give a little impetus to the storyline, no, is there any use for your plot, not at all, it's too watery, I advise you not to be so watery, otherwise the readers will run out.

D: My style is like this (this is Coke's usual answer), maybe this style of writing is not suitable for you, if you don't feel comfortable, you can read a few other books that are not watery and have a fast plot, I am generally very slow

C: No, I found that those books are not as good as what you wrote, and I don't really want to read the other ones after reading yours...

d:。。。 Should I say thank you?

C: But to get back to it, I still have to say, you are too watery, you can't be like this, these chapters can be summed up in one sentence.

D: Actually, Journey to the West, Romance of the Three Kingdoms, you can also summarize it in one sentence, which does not prove that you are smarter than Wu Chengen.

C: Don't quibble, see for yourself, you don't have a little bit of a push for the storyline, although I admit it's wonderful and exciting, but you're so good at water, others don't write like that, others are much more concise than you

D: Then why don't you go and watch other concise, plot push fast and not watery.

C: Because I found that the other books are not as good as yours, and the characters in your books are more lively...... Your disadvantage is that it's too watery, and it's not right for you to do that

D: Then why don't you go and see other ones that don't water (repeat)

C: Because it's not as good as you, I'm for your good, I kindly advise you, if you don't listen to me, if you go down like this, readers will run out sooner or later

D:: Then why don't you go and see the other ones that don't water (repeat)

C:: Although you write like this, it's too watery, everyone doesn't write like this, you won't progress in the future, I'm for your good, after reading your book, I'm not going to read your next one

d:; Then why don't you go and look at the other ones that don't water (repeat)

C: I said it, although you are watery, the characters are well written, and it feels very sincere and wonderful, but it is not right for you to write like this, and only by correcting your shortcomings can you improve

D: Then why don't you go and see other ones that don't water (repeat)

C:。。。 Are you copy-pasting

…… (The following are all copies and pastes of the same answer)

PS: To reiterate, it's an essay on Coke, I think it's quite interesting, everyone just look at it and laugh.

Coke writes things always to see what is interesting, and to write when you are happy to read,

Because reading a book, if it looks good, you can read it, if it is not good, you don't read it, how can there be so many other things, how to write, so many rules and regulations, Coke is more casual

Also, please pay attention.

Coke WeChat public account: heart coke

Coke Weibo: XD Coke 520 (newly opened, so I didn't post anything, and Coke didn't know what to post)

By the way, I have followed 1000 people on Weibo, what do you think of the more chapter?

Thank you!