Because it's a new book that was issued temporarily, it's only two chapters at most, but after reading these two chapters, Orange couldn't help but be stunned and didn't say anything for a long time.

When the first chapter is finished, in fact, she is still a little impatient, after all, this novel is really as she expected at the beginning, and it is the life of a novel that is about to hit the street, because the prelude is long and smelly, it is estimated that no one wants to read it patiently, and the content is still a 'high-end profession' that ordinary readers are not expected to come into contact with-bartending, I feel that there is such a description of a unique personality in the other world, which is simply an outlier in the online literature world, and an unpopular in the unpopular. But when she sees the end of the second chapter, Orange's curiosity is finally piqued. How to put it, because this is definitely the beginning of the most orthodox fantasy novel. And the more I read to the end of the second chapter, the more Orange felt that the book might be very stable.

Yes! The beginning of the book actually gave her a very reassuring feeling.

If you want to talk about the reason, it is probably because the first paragraph of the first chapter of the novel is written "The Five Elements Continent, the western part of the Southern Fire Empire, away from the Fire City." And the content at the end of the second chapter is "His original name is Li Jiejing, and he does not belong to the ...... of this world", yes, just by virtue of the first and last two sentences, ignore the middle, this book gives oranges the feeling, no different from the novels written by several supreme gods.

Of course!

For all fantasy authors, especially the first 30,000 words of fantasy, almost everyone can write a god-level level, and the most important thing is the plot behind it, how well the macro world of the fantasy world is shown, only the back can be written, then the front will not be in vain.

After talking about the content of the new book, let's talk about Orange's personal sense of super invincible big white long legs, first of all, super invincible big white long legs are definitely an uncle, because normal people who will write bartending, and, people who have no life experience, who can write bartending so 'professional', in fact, professional orange doesn't understand, but at least temporarily can bluff her, obviously, super invincible big white long legs are engaged in this aspect of work, or have high confidence in this aspect of things, dare to write like this.

But what is the evaluation of this new book......

To sum up, oranges can only give a four-word evaluation, and it is also the most commonly used evaluation of Long Kong: dry food is poisonous. Where is the poison point? Or where is the shortcoming, that is, it is too face-oriented. Pretty much the same as the previous book.

The last book, the content of the book itself is definitely in the direction of urban cultivation, but as soon as it comes up, there are Western papal forces, which makes the whole article seem a bit nondescript, and if the last book can delete the vampire at the beginning, the setting of the Holy See shaman, then the reader's acceptance may be much higher. And the new book is the same thing, it can obviously be written very well, "The Five Elements Continent, the western part of the Southern Fire Empire, away from the Fire City." And "His original name is Li Jiejing, and he doesn't belong to this world...... Actually, isn't this very good, but it is mainly described as a bartender, a profession that is not down-to-earth at all, it's just, hey, I don't want to say oranges, it's like stuffing in a cake. Of course! You can't help but say that this is the author's personal characteristic again.

This kind of novel, the final fate is probably only two ways, one is to fight to the end, and the other is to maybe be able to catch fire, but I feel that in the end, it can only be a small fire, after all, too unpopular themes will lose a lot of readers. So after reading the new book, Orange sighed and typed into the super invincible big white long legs, "At the beginning, it's okay to sign a contract, but I suggest you think about it." Let's see if you can replace the bartender with something else, and you're writing too much out of interest for the average reader. "Yes. It's not a wise choice to have a forest to write about, but you're limiting your future to death.

On the other hand, on Li Youyou's side, how would she know that the editor actually gave her advice.

Hawkers! But she didn't write it, even if the other party gave her advice, it wouldn't be useful.

Why did you give up Zhou Qingchou and choose the new book Yin Yang Mian, a very important reason, indeed, even if she can feel the quality of the two books.

The former,Reading can't arouse the reader's feelings at all.,The protagonist is nothing more than killing people and grabbing treasures.,It's a bit stuffy to write.,Plus a lot of unknown magic weapon nouns.,Seeing a little short leg like her, sometimes I can't help but hold my head to say that my head hurts.,And the latter,Li Youyou still has a little impression of the thing of bartending.,But the most important thing is that this book's plot, rhythm and sense of substitution are a lot stronger than the former.。

Although Li Youyou doesn't know how to write novels, and she has rarely been exposed to online novels before, as a diner, she still understands whether the chef's food is delicious or not.

Since no one has read the previous book at all, what about this one?

Speaking of which, the reason why she uploaded this new book was also an accident, because she suddenly saw this book in her dream last night.

Of course, I didn't think there was anything surprising about this book, but her little brain seemed to be starting to appear more and more recently.

This naturally aroused her attention even more, and when she looked at the book that she felt a little half-dead at the beginning, compared to the latter, the latter was naturally more to her liking.

Although, this yin and yang crown is basically about an uncle's journey through time, and the character design seems to be a little too mature, but in any case, the sense of expectation is still far stronger than the former.

So in this comparison, she planned to eunuch the previous one, and then update this new one.

As for who you want to ask from whom you learned this skillful eunuch technique, ahem...... Probably also out of instinct and intuition, yes, do things intuitively.

In a word! Let's update this new book next, what's more, in fact, she has a very good reason to update the new book, that is, the books in her head should all come from the same place, so with a little more exposure possibility, maybe it will be easier for her to find the answer.

Anyway, it's all uploaded, wouldn't it be better to upload it together, but considering that after all, the energy is limited, so the previous book will be left like that for the time being.

Well, she Li Youyou highly recommends that this book is better than the previous book, it doesn't deceive people, and if you deceive people, you will become a little short leg.