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Whew, these three games are finally finished.

Honestly, these three games will make me ...... The torture is not light.

Why is this so, it can be said that these three games deviated from what I had in mind at the beginning.

Everyone can see this short plot, which is the big climax I talked about before.

First, QG's 41-point push in the game made a strong comeback, and then Luo Xia rushed to the arena, exposed his identity, and tortured the Huaxia University team!

The idea is fine, but there are deviations in other aspects, such as the way of writing.

My initial idea was to make the game as short as possible, as short as possible, and to write about the feeling of crushing.

I've already set the lineup for the three games, and I've thought about how many chapters each game will have.

The first game is played with five chapters, the second game is played with three chapters, and the third game is played with one chapter.

In this way, step by step, you can break the mentality of the opposite side and win the game very beautifully!

In the three games, Loxia used three different positions, all of which were crushed against the opposite side.

I've thought of the chapter name of the chapter in the third game, and it's called 'Demon Leo Reappears in the Rivers and Lakes'!

However, when the first game was written, there were a lot of different voices.

A few readers said that I was writing too fast and that it was not good.

Said to write about that sadistic feeling, not fast.

This point makes me very entangled.

Because according to my idea, it is to shorten the competition, but it seems that everyone is not satisfied.

I thought about it for a long time, hesitating between changing the way I wrote it and sticking to it.

I had no choice but to go to the group and ask some seniors, after all, I was just a newcomer, and they were more experienced than me.

In the end, a few seniors gave me advice, saying that it is best to use a progressive way of writing, that is, the number of chapters occupied by the competition should not be reduced all the time, but gradually increased.

Although I was advised, my heart was still torn apart.

I'm a bit of a perfectionist, or I can say a bit obsessive-compulsive, and I want everything to be perfect.

I've always felt that such a progressive approach would make this climax useless.

At this time, there were readers who were dissatisfied in the book review area.

One of his words impressed me, saying that I used to look at you, there were many details, and it was very comfortable to watch.

Now blindly crushing, it's like the protagonist has opened a cheat plug-in, what's the point?

To the effect that you should write more details.

At this time, I deeply felt what it means to be difficult to reconcile, and it is really uncomfortable.

In the end, I took this step-by-step approach.

The first game is written simply, the second game is written in more details, and the third game is completely written from the beginning to the end.

However, this decision has raised a series of questions.

In the first two games, there was no problem, and in the third game, something went wrong.

Because in the third game, I originally set it to be a shorthand, and the chapter name directly used a 'Demon Leo reappears in the rivers and lakes', and one chapter is done.

Now let me write it out completely, how to deal with the details?

It's not because of anything else, because I have already used this lineup when I played the SF team before, and then I wrote the details that are heavier than the previous one, will readers think that you are fooling them with the previous lineup?

This series of problems really caused me great trouble.

I had no choice but to reset the set.

A little bit of pushing the lineup, the details, and finally the setting is almost done.

Shi Yan MM still uses Delevingne, while Loxia uses an assistive robot.

When the lineup was set and the details were almost pushed, I suddenly didn't want to use this lineup.

Why?

Because according to this set of settings, it is Locha's one-man performance, at most, it can be said to be the performance of Loxia and Shiyan MM.

In this case, Qiu Yunyun, Xia Rou, Zhong Xiaodie and others lost their sense of existence.

This is completely contrary to my original intention.

The last game is a five-player game, and I want all five of them to have a sense of presence and win this game beautifully.

In this way, they can draw a successful end to their team's league career.

Thinking of this, I had to choose between the two lineups, meditating all day long, and with the pressure of my studies, it would not be an exaggeration to say that I was in pain.

In the end, I still chose the set of auxiliary enchantresses, and only this set is the most suitable for the third game, the most suitable for the final game of the college league.

In this case, the details will have to be reset, and it can't be the same as the game against the SF team.

Needless to say, as you know, this is another trouble, and it is extremely troublesome......

I've made a big change overall, and I can say that it's almost completely different from the original style of play, so I'm a little satisfied.

It's just that the previous paragraph, the spider caught it in the early stage, the part of the demon queen E flash chain man, it really can't be changed.

The essence of the playing style of this lineup lies in the waves of the first and second levels in the early stage, as well as the wave of the demon Leo system in the later stage.

Everyone looks like the first few chapters of the third game have similarities with the previous SF team, and here's why.

In the first game, five chapters were written, and everyone was too fast, and in the second game, nine and a half chapters were written, and no one said anything more, and my heart was relieved.

It seems that this progressive way of writing is correct.

However, when the tenth chapter of the third game was written, some book friends said that ten chapters of a game were really too much, and nothing else was written.

I know that he has no ill intentions, and he is also an old fan of my book, and he has mentioned a lot of typos to me, and I am very grateful.

But the moment I saw his comment, my heart really broke down.

I really want to say it again, it's hard to reconcile!

According to this progressive way of writing, the first game has five chapters, the second game has nine and a half chapters, and the third game has fifteen chapters, right?

There's no way, I've written it here, so I can only write it down.

If it is deleted here, it really seems nondescript, neither progressive nor decreasing.

By the time I finished writing the last chapter of the competition, I was on the verge of collapse.

As I said at the beginning, this game deviated from what I had in mind at the beginning, and I don't know if everyone was satisfied.

It's a big climax, and I'm really worried that I'm going to scrap it, so I ended up writing in this progressive way of detailing, and I don't know if it's good or not.

Of course, as an author, I still sincerely hope that this climax is not written and wasted, and it is satisfactory to everyone.

After I finished writing, I went to the group to ask my seniors for their opinions.

I'm a newcomer, and even after writing so many words, I'm still a newcomer, and I don't understand a lot of things.

There is a senior who said something that left a deep impression on me.

He asked me: How many people see you every day now?

I said: The results are not very good, maybe I have set a lot of things that readers don't like to read, and there are only more than 200 people.

He asked me again: How many people have given you advice, is there only a few people?

I was stunned for a moment, but finally gave an affirmative answer.

The seniors said directly: How many people, what proportion of more than 200 people?

Since those 200 or so people didn't talk much, why did you be influenced by those few readers?

You must know that after you change it, it is possible that those readers are satisfied, but what you lose may be dozens of readers out of more than 200 people, or even more than 100 readers.

I was deeply impressed by his words, and I almost woke up.

I would like to tell you here that I will rarely go to the book review area in the future, or I will not read the book review area at all, because sometimes it is really easy to be affected.

This feeling, you are not the author, you will not understand.

As for the book friend group that some book friends said, it has been clearly said many times, and it will definitely not be built.

The book friends who followed me all the way know that this book has established a book friend group in the past, and it has a large group of nearly 1,000 people when it is hundreds of thousands of words, but it was finally disbanded.

I don't want to say much about the reason for the disbandment, but I can only say that if there is a book friend group, it will greatly distract my energy and my state.

In the book friend group, there are also mixed readers, and there are even authors of other books!

Everyone must be wondering, there are other authors of books?

Did your friends join in to exchange and learn?

No, those, are the trumpets of other authors!

These people, there are authors in the same group, there are also different groups, they are waiting for you to make mistakes, take screenshots and report to the editors, or even higher.

The human heart is separated from the belly, and the most poisonous thing is the human heart.

Some people's hearts are really more poisonous than the most poisonous poison in the world!

I don't have that much energy to entangle with them, so it's better not to exist in the book friend group.

To put it mildly, I consider myself a good person, not a bad person, and I have a good temper, not even the most basic scolding.

After fighting with these people for a long time, I am also worried that I will be infected with this kind of poisonous heart, and I don't want to be such a person.

Writing a book quietly every day, publishing it honestly, and waiting until the day when it is finally finished, to write a complete book, this is what I want to do most now.

That's pretty much it.

By the way, there is another point, after this plot, after a few small foreshadowings, Loxia will really form a team.

None of the early teammates who asked everyone to guess last time guessed correctly.

The focus was only on their teammates, but they ignored the word 'early'.

Luo Xia's current female teammates, except for Shi Yan MM, can be regarded as teammates before the early stage and during training.

The early teammates are one level higher than them, and if you are interested, you can guess again.

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(End of chapter)