"Do I look a lot like someone who doesn't lack money?" Su Li looked at himself.

"No, I remember what you said, you should be a rich second generation, right?" Li Mengqi tilted her head with an envious look, "I heard that your mother used to speculate in real estate, and the family had a lot of money...... Well, you're a boy again, no better than us girls, so how can you say that your parents won't lose you, right? ”

"That's right." Su Li nodded, thought for a while and said, "But I decided that I still have to move out and live, and I have to live on my own ability." ”

“……”

At this time, Li Mengqi was silent, blinking her big eyes.

After a long while, she sighed and said sincerely: "Perhaps, this is the idea of the local tyrant, not something that mortals like me can understand." ”

Su Li smiled when he heard this.

Indeed, the life of the rich is good, and most people will aspire to it.

However, that is only the glamour on the surface - if the life of a local tyrant is really as comfortable as it seems, then he will not die of overwork in his last life.

In the following time, Su Li devoted himself to the outline design.

After watching it for a while, Li Mengqi also lost interest and turned to her own business.

In this way, time passes quickly.

"Ding Dong!"

With the unfamiliar and familiar ringing of the bell, it was time for school in a blink of an eye.

Su Li stretched and cleaned up the draft in his hand.

Because it's a short story, the outline and character design add up to only a few hundred words, and in the case of setting ideas, it's still very fast to write.

After school, Su Li was "harassed" by several girls.

"Leave, are you free after school? Let's go karaoke! ”

"Lili, today's class is a bit difficult, I don't understand a lot of things, can you teach me?"

"Lili, I bought a new record, why don't you come to my house after school and listen to it together?"

"Leaving ......"

Please, can you stop calling me "leave"?

Su Li sighed inwardly and expressed helplessness at the enthusiasm of these girls.

Instead of making money, maybe it's the right choice to change your name right now? He was really fed up with the name "Su Lili".

Su Lili, this is a superimposed name.

Under what circumstances do people use overlapping words in their names?

Describe the cuteness and coquettishness of girls, such as the famous beauties in history, Li Shishi, Chen Yuanyuan, Su Xiaoxiao, these are all overlapping names.

Of course, there are also boys' names, and there may also be overlapping words, such as Lei Lei, Binbin and so on.

It is undeniable that even boys in this world are in a weaker position than girls, and many people will take such overlapping names.

But what about "separation"......

Su Li always felt that the name was weird, and he always thought of a famous poem.

Su Li decided that after returning home, the negotiation conditions with his mother, in addition to moving out to live, would add one more condition: change the name Su Li back.

Simply saying goodbye to his classmates, pushing the bicycle, Su Li rode on the very steep distance again and rushed home.

Half an hour later, Su Li returned home.

Su's father had already cooked dinner and was eating with Su Qingqing, and when he saw Su Li coming home, he beckoned him to put down his schoolbag and sit at the dining table to eat together.

"Lili, your mother will come home around ten o'clock today, and you can talk to her about that when the time comes." Father Su said while sandwiching a chicken leg between Su Li and Su Qingqing.

"yes, okay."

Su Li nodded, indicating that he had received it.

"Uh, what are you talking about? What the hell is going on? Su Qingqing said curiously beside him.

Father Su and Su Li glanced at each other, and then Su Li shook his head and said, "It's nothing, it's just some study things." ”

"Well, your brother has been a little regressed in his studies recently, and the school has made a phone call, and your mother wants to talk to him." Father Su said on the side.

The two of them tacitly agreed that it would be better not to let Qingqing know about this matter for the time being.

Don't look at the little girl's stubborn temperament, she can stick to her family in private, let her know that she may cry and make trouble, and it's not good to complicate things.

"Hahaha, brother, you also have today!"

As soon as Su Qingqing heard the news, she immediately gloated.

"What do I say on weekdays? Girls are less involved with boys! Well, you're in trouble, aren't you? You won't be allowed to touch my game in the future! ”

“……”

Well, the little girl is still thinking about yesterday.

After a brief dinner and a wash of the dishes for his father, Su Li said hello to his family and returned to his room.

Put down the school bag, take out the outline written during the day, then turn on the computer, enter the word document, and start writing the short story.

……

"Brother, I'm wetting the bed, let's change the quilt with yours."

"Brother, your toys seem to be very fun, let's exchange mine with yours."

"Brother, your bento looks delicious, let's exchange mine with yours."

"Brother, your bike is so beautiful, let's exchange mine with yours."

"Brother, your heart is broken, let's exchange mine with yours......"

This is a short family story, and Su Li named it "Change".

The whole story revolves around a pair of brothers and sisters, and the character is a naughty and willful sister who has grown up since childhood, and an older brother who is very good to his sister.

In terms of story, my sister has been robbing her brother of everything since she was a child, toys, lunches, bicycles, ......

If you just read the beginning of this story, you will definitely feel that this sister is very hateful, because Su Li will write a lot of plots where his brother humbles his sister everywhere, but this sister is still very willful, and seems to only think about herself completely, and she enjoys all good things for herself, and she will not take into account her brother's mood at all.

In the first few thousand words, the reader may be very irritated, even a little angry, and want to throw this sister into the toilet.

However, this is only the first few thousand words.

The real reversal is in the last thousand words, or the ending.

In the end, my brother contracted a severe heart disease and needed a surgical transplant, but he couldn't find a heart that was successfully matched, and my brother's life was in danger.

Here Su Li will use a montage to change the scene and write a seagull flying across the sea.

The seagull symbolizes peace.

When his brother woke up, he found that the operation had been successful, and he was happy to share it with his relatives, but he didn't see his sister who had been with him all the time.

There was only a note left at the head of the bed, which read-

Brother, your heart is broken, let's exchange mine and yours......

This is the end of the story.

To be honest, even Su Li himself, when he wrote the ending, he couldn't help but have red circles in his eyes, this family story cost him great feelings, and when he wrote it, he even put himself into the story, using a variety of techniques and descriptions in the choice of words and sentences......

Moreover, the story is written in a way that first suppresses and then rises, and reverses back and forth.

This technique gives readers a reversed concept and impacts people's emotions even more.

It fits the theme of the essay - love.

When writing a book, you must move yourself and others in order to move others.

Su Li believes that anyone who sees this story will not be stingy with tears, and he is very confident in this article and will definitely stand out in the essay.

……

PS: The prototype of this short story is a paragraph I saw when I visited a certain book review section.

At that time, I thought, I must write this paragraph into a story and write it into my novel......

Well, continue to ask for recommendations and collections!