Volume II concludes with three things
One: I would like to express my gratitude to the readers, ask for support by the way, and announce the recommendation and update mechanism.
This article has been written so far, and I think I can see that the readers here are quite fond of it.
I'm the author who prefers it and would love to finish it.
Yes, I'm not packing tickets here, because this is already the result of my third overhaul.
Happily, it still looks better after every change.
I want to write a good story, I want to write a world for myself where I can put my heart and mind, that's all.
If it's convenient for readers, you can give two recommendation votes, after all, it's free, to show support, encourage me, the author who insists on the sad wind and cold rain, and the collection is naturally wanted, but how are the spectators who have not collected here have a contradictory wait-and-see mentality?
It would be great if it was convenient to publicize it.,After all, the author in life is still close to the character of Ge Sheng's classmates.,Introverted and introverted anti-protagonist character.。
The person who asks for it, only collects and recommends the ear, rewards or something, although it is also an encouragement, but after all, you want to break the bank, and you don't want to go.
Someone recommended the addition method, so I'll try it out here.
The collection is not an intuitive embodiment, so it is subject to the recommendation, the weekly recommendation votes are more than 50, and three chapters will be added on Sunday to give the reader a gift.
Anyway, now the small door is small, and I still insist on living on Wednesdays.
As for the update, if you look at it for a long time, you can probably see the regularity, basically about 5,000 words per day, mainly with the manuscript in hand, the speed of non-professional writers is actually very remarkable, and the replacement is to write six 800-word essays every day, of course, the fluency of the writing is far better than the composition, but the story structure and plot setting are much more difficult than the composition.
2: Modify the plot timeline, if there is no change in the future, the following settings shall prevail.
Finally, for the time being, I'm here to fix a timeline mess caused by my previous changes to the outline.
Ye Qing left the palace on his ninth birthday in March 109 of the Lan calendar, returned to Lanlan City at the age of 12 and entered Ye Ye Academy in June.
This is an established plot, but because at the beginning of the revision, it was thought that the nine-year-old Ye Qing was too dazzling in the imperial oath and did not conform to logic, so her age was raised to eleven years old, which was to participate in the imperial oath after two years of filial piety, and then the plot was launched.
Another reason for this change was to consider compacting the timeline so that there would be no two-year time gap between the first and second volumes.
But now it seems that it will do more harm than good.
One of the most prominent is the change in character character.
Ye Qing's initial presumptuous lawlessness, then to the quiet self-defense of igloo life, the gradual transformation after meeting Ge Sheng, and then to the girlish posture that couldn't be cold at all after the end of the first volume.
When it comes to the second volume, her personality has returned to a normal girlish personality, strong and proud, but the hysterical paranoia hidden in her heart is an important explosion point of her character.
Just like the confrontation between her and Lan Ying at the end of the second volume.
In the middle of this, it will take time to digest this change, but according to the six months after the revision, such a change is not natural.
In the same way, there is Ao Xuehua, she is a complete fourteen-year-old princess in the city of eternal night, and the contradiction of maturity and naivety is very handsome.
But two years later, she became the head of Ye Ye Academy's Funeral Snow, and her subordinates were in charge of hundreds of elite geniuses' violent organizations, and her personality was naturally polished and calm, and the naïve elements were almost negligible.
So there is a BUG here, Ao Xuehua came to Lanye to go to the academy to study, and the blade of the green wing was also killed for this transnational robbery, in order to cater to the timeline, it was set to be Ao Xuehua's schoolwork and the arrangement of the academy before coming to Lanyin City, this reason is far-fetched, and met the three highnesses in front of the Nine Treasure Lotus lamp, pretending not to know is not in line with her character, just because the two people did not know each other at the time of the original setting.
In addition, Ge Sheng's personality has not changed much, because his three views have been almost polished by An Ning, but the core things have changed a little when he finally makes a decision.
The other more important deviation is the spring of the fourth year of Qingli, after he returned to China for a coup d'état, it took time to stabilize the situation in the national capital, and then try to quell the rebellion of the kings, according to the revised timeline, he only took a few months to complete all this, which is too much of the protagonist's aura.
At the same time, it also involves the once close comrade-in-arms relationship between him and Ye Qing, after more than two years of separation, the sense of alienation can only be reflected when they reunite in the third volume.
All in all, everything in this book that involves this timeline or has time to be modified in the future is corrected here to the fact that Ye Qing met Ge Sheng at the age of nine and a half, and then began the events of the City of Eternal Night.
Based on this timeline, the miscellaneous bugs generated can be reported to me by leaving a message, or digesting them by yourself.
Above.
Three breaks.
Take a day off today.,Tomorrow starts updating the third volume as usual.,By the way, you're welcome to apply for the trick.,And which protagonist you want to play against.。
Yes, the members of the Friends Club at the end of summer in this article are all second-level protagonists.
The first-level protagonists are: Ge Sheng, Mo Xiaojing, and the fourth spring of Qingli.
Ye Qing, Third Highness, Ao Xuehua.
Six-person protagonist.
The so-called protagonist is that as long as one person is drawn, it is impossible to find a second person replacement in the whole article.
So it's a pity that although Xingxi likes it very much, she is the second-level protagonist.
Volume 3, Campus Chapter.
Lanliu Extravaganza.
(This is a testimonial left before, so some of them are already a little outdated ==.)
But I still have a lot of things I want to say, so let's stay. )
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