After some emotion, the two girls collected their emotions and quickly calmed down.

They flipped the pages to the first few pages, stared at the title of "Change" for a while, and then re-read the story.

Short stories are different from long stories, and because they are short and well-structured, you may find more surprises if you read them more deeply.

"This story is very interesting!" After reading it again, Wen Zhiyan sighed, "I finally understand now why only those four sentences in the article are in quotation marks, which is related to the title of this "Change" to pave the way for the reversal of the ending...... I should have thought that this could have been a tragedy. ”

Zhang Ailin nodded: "That's right, and if you read it carefully, you can find that the author actually buried a lot of foreshadowing in the article." ”

"That's true, if you only look at those four sentences, the reversal of this ending is too blunt, because at first glance, it doesn't seem that there is any plot in the text where my sister thinks about my brother, as if my sister is a little devil who doesn't care about her relatives, but that's not the case."

"Well, there are a lot of such details in the article, for example, there was a Mid-Autumn Festival, the whole family was originally scheduled to go out to enjoy the moon, but my sister shirked and said that the weather was too cold and didn't want to go, in fact, there was a plot immediately after, it was written that my brother had a cold, and it was linked to the plot of enjoying the moon, which showed that my sister was worried about my brother."

"Yes, there is one more detail......"

"These details seem inconspicuous and difficult to attract attention, but they have become the clues of the article......"

"Unexpected, reasonable. This author is really attentive......"

"I guess there may be a drama ...... the essay"

Wen Zhiyan and Zhang Ailin chatted and exchanged reading experiences with each other.

To be honest, both of them are old bookworms who have read tens of millions of books, but it has been difficult to have a story recently that can make them have this desire to communicate.

The story of "Change" made them feel double shocked.

The first is the shock of reading for the first time and seeing the reversal of the ending.

The second is the repetition of reading, which is shocking to the portrayal of certain emotional details in the text.

“……”

“……”

Is this author a girl or a boy?

The two glanced at each other, and such a question burst into their minds.

If it's a girl, it's still expected, if it's a little brother...... Oh my God, this delicate style doesn't look like a boy at all!

After all, even if this society is dominated by women, many girls are mostly rough in their behavior.

However, most of the people who write youth novels are also women, and girls write emotional novels, don't they blow up the boys' eighteen streets?

Although there are also some boys who write such novels, they are just as demonic......

Look at the author's signature again: crisp pear.

Well, sweet and sour, a lot like a girl's name.

"Teacher Shuli, you are really a warrior of love!" Wen Zhiyan sighed.

Zhang Ailin, who was on the side, had already torn off the opinion card including the appendix of the magazine, and began to write feedback on this issue of "Fireworks on the Other Side", ready to be mailed to the headquarters of the magazine.

Many magazines have opinion cards like this, but many more choose to ignore them or throw them away......

In the past, Zhang Ailin also did this, because it was really troublesome to write a book review, and most readers would choose to read the book silently and rarely speak - unless it was some readers with a particularly strong desire to communicate, or people with ulterior motives, who would leave a message on the official website to talk about the advantages and disadvantages of the book.

Most readers, only when they encounter a story that can really touch people, will occasionally bubble up and express their feelings.

Zhang Ailin has not had this desire for feedback for a long time, and she has to write it down today.

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Li Mengqi, who was sitting in the front row, had just come back from vomiting in the toilet, and in a flash, he heard the whispers of the two girls sitting in the back row.

She couldn't help pouting, stretched out a green onion white finger, and teasingly poked Su Li's ribs.

"Mr. Peacock, you are not only popular, but also the stories you write!"

"Shhhh Su Li naturally heard the words of the girl behind him, he quietly pulled Li Mengqi, left from his seat, and said with a straight face.

The two of them were so close that they could even smell each other's bodies, the fragrant shampoo, the sweet shower gel......

A hint of blush crossed the girl's fair cheeks, and she glanced at Su Li: "I know, I won't publicize your writing a novel outside." ”

"Well, thank you, I'll treat you to ice cream next time."

Su Li nodded and smiled, after all, he didn't want to encounter any trouble in reality.

"Ice cream...... It's a pity to eat diarrhea. Li Mengqi smacked her lips and said regretfully, "I have a cold constitution, and I can't eat some things." ”

After a pause, she said: "Let's get down to business, are you sure about the essay on the other side of the fireworks this time?" ”

Su Li thought for a while and said, "There should be some, from the reader's point of view, there are indeed some very eye-catching works in the essay." ”

"It's true that you're under a lot of competitive pressure." Li Mengqi nodded and said, "But according to my vision, the quality of these works can only be said to be horizontal, and compared with your story, it is still a little worse...... If there are any competitors, it is probably the "Sun Rain". ”

"Well, I've read that story too, and it's really well written, whether it's creativity, writing, or plot."

Su Li sighed.

"Sun Rain", first of all, uses the idea of a very rare weather, which is very novel in youth literature.

Another is to create contradictions, the character of this article is a girl who likes cloudy days, and a boy who likes sunny days, which combines ideas and contradictions, and the plot of the whole story revolves around this contradiction.

The highlight of the novel is to create contradictions, like his "Change", in which the contradictions are the "willfulness" of his sister and the "humility" of his brother.

Then, the writing of this article is also good, and there are some beautiful sentences in the article, which shows the author's profound literary skills.

In the end, the ending, although not very stunning, is very touching, and the rain accompanied by the rainbow falls under the sunny sky, which plays another point of the question.

Su Li is very passionate about literature, and the more he analyzes, the more he feels the power of this novel.

He couldn't help but look at the name of the author of the novel: Rainbow Fish.

I don't know.

However, the possibility of the old author opening the vest is not ruled out......

"Anyway, come on, it's normal to have opponents! I've left you a five-star review on the official website. Li Mengqi encouraged, "Your novel has received a good response, there are many messages about you on the official website, and the hope of winning the jackpot is no less than that story!" ”

"Well, I'll do my best, and it depends on the destiny of heaven whether it succeeds or not." Su Li said with a smile.

"Hee-hee...... That's right! Li Mengqi smiled and blinked her eyes mischievously, "Guess, what are the comments about you that I saw in the message column of the official website?" ”

"Uh, what?" Su Li asked curiously.

He read this issue of the magazine, but he didn't have time to pay attention to the official website......

In this era, we have entered the era of Internet mobile terminals, and there are two ways to give feedback to physical literary magazines like this.

The first is to write an opinion card in the traditional way and send it to the headquarters of the magazine, like Zhang Ailin.

Second, readers can leave a message on the official website, write down their feelings after reading, rate each story or give some comments.

"They're all asking: Teacher Crisp Pear, are you a woman or a man!" Li Mengqi touched her little belly and smiled backwards, "Many readers are guessing your gender, and they all say that you are likely to be a girl!" Hahahaha, this one is so interesting, who told you to write such an abusive article! ”

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PS: Recently, the book review area said that I imitated a certain Lu more and more book reviews......

This one...... It's very uncomfortable to be beaten upside down.,There's a single chapter about washing and borrowing from the work.,If you have doubts about the subject matter, you can take a look.。

Just look at the publication time.,Which one was sent first.,I'm just writing a little slower...... If you wash the text, of course, the speed is fast, people have one or two hundred chapters, I only have a few dozen chapters, and there are two revisions...... But every chapter of this book was written by me!

Some people also say that I'm imitating a certain ke's theme.,I just want to say.,This theme has been written by a lot of people in Dianniang a long time ago.,There are a bunch of female frequency Jin x Jiang.,Much earlier than that website.,It's just that most of the words are small and they're all eunuchs.,A small number of them were reduced to small yellow texts and were deleted by the net...... And if you look closely, the style, plot, type, etc. of different stations are not the same at all......

Hey, I'm so angry, all kinds of wronged......