I adjusted my mentality today, and I went back and read it from chapter thirty-one......

And then I know why there will be no state in the back.,Because it's really written here.,It's not good.,The interaction between the characters is not strong.,It's a failure.,So I'm going to rewrite it from the end of chapter 31.。

Let's talk about it here, taking advantage of the fact that there are not many people now, and I just signed a contract and didn't recommend it, so I quickly rewrote it.

This approach is actually not advisable in online articles, but ......

Just let me be willful and lose the next discipline.,I want to make this book better and better.,You see that other people's quiet scholars have changed the book.,Just because I wrote a substitute exam plot...... Today I talked to the authors about my book, they pointed out a lot of shortcomings and points that need to be paid attention to in my book, I think I know what I should focus on in this book, I may not have gotten the gist of this book before, it should be said that the conflict between women and men is the main point of this book, and now I suddenly realize.

Sure enough, compared to short stories, there are many things to consider for long stories.

And then the outline of the back will also be changed.,The protagonist's career is to be written.,But if you focus on describing the career, it's a bit of putting the cart before the horse.,It should be through the interaction between women and men to show the protagonist's career.,The second dimension should have a two-dimensional way of writing.。

And then today's two are from the end of chapter thirty-one to chapter thirty-three.,The main thing is that the live broadcast plot needs to be rewritten.,This should be an interactive game plot with my sister.,But it's been brushed over before......

There's also the previous basketball plot.,I actually brushed it over.,There should be an interactive conflict plot with a childhood sweetheart sports girl.,As a result, a chapter was written......

The childhood sweetheart won't change it, and there will be many opportunities to describe her interaction with the protagonist in the future, but the live broadcast plot must be changed, who makes orthopedics a major feature of the second dimension?

Well, sometimes it's really useful to stop and sort out your thoughts.

In fact, I was hesitant before, whether games and basketball involve professional fields, and if they are described, will readers not understand.

Now I don't have this concern, I just have to be professional, I have to rewrite, so that I can depict the characteristics of the different types of girls I set in the article, otherwise how can the character characteristics be reflected through the plot of the article?

I was a bit of an "evil path" before, but now I'm going to turn back.

By the way, when the book was first opened, someone asked if this book was a harem text?

Now I can answer, this is not a stallion text, but it is indeed a "harem text", but it is the kind of harem text of youth campus love comedy, I have a full setting for each female character, and I will depict the characteristics of the characters through various events, not the kind of "I don't care how many women you have, as long as you have me in your heart", the kind of online harem text that sees one and receives one...... It's a bit hard to describe, but that's what it means.

This book is the kind of book of youth campus love comedy, and you can't read this book with a little bit of anger from reading other online articles.

I'm going to change the live broadcast plot, but Li Mengqi's plot is separate and doesn't need to be changed, after the live broadcast plot is rewritten, the second half of chapter 37 to chapter 38 can be connected.