Recently, I went to Longkong Essence Post to learn a classic summary of a wave of writing.,Then,Originally, I just wanted to learn the skills of learning the amazing flow of passers-by in Chendong.。

Holy Ruins, I've read two chapters before, and I just feel so atmospheric and literate, but I prefer the previous shade of the sky, and I'm going to read other books anyway.

Now looking back at the first chapter, the words used at the beginning of the scene set the tone of the wilderness and the ancient one, pointing out the Yellow River as a foreshadowing.

A round of red sun as a clue, blood red for the strange and mysterious changes to pave the way, the movement of the red sun for the time clue, the blood red sun is dyed blue by the blue fog, there are turns and changes, but not abrupt, a mysterious suspenseful beginning arouses the reader's interest, around the Yellow River.

The writing is as smooth as flowing water, coupled with gorgeous writing and concise words, making 2020 words unusually rich to read.

The first chapter was impressed by a meal.,Look at your own first chapter.。。。 Although it can't start with suspense, at least start with a normal one with a little modification.

Recently, I'm going to strengthen the foreshadowing and insertion of psychological descriptions, language descriptions, and the enrichment of character interactions.,This is the plot of Oda boss.,I felt it in the chapter of Klick but didn't learn it.。

There is also the problem of condensation of the writing, a roundabout turn, this hanging appetite is something that readers love and hate, the fluency of broken chapters, to avoid the reader's thinking from coming to a standstill, the overall layout... This one is probably the most troublesome for me.

When I come back, I'll make a leap forward.

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