Lin Xi carefully read the novels written by the black cat, at the beginning, when he read it, he was quite patient, and carefully paid attention to the large number of settings written by the black cat, because many of the stories and events in it are based on the characters and the setting of the world, if you don't understand the setting, you will feel that you can't read it no matter how you look at it, and you can't understand it.

Hawkers,It's like a black cat's style of middle two diseases.,Like many middle two diseases.,First set up what kind of person you actually are.,And then,Start fantasizing about the world.。 There are also people with quite fantastic abilities appearing.,And then the events that happened between them.,The story.,That's what the black cat wants to express.,Speaking of which,In fact, in general, the story written by the black cat is still very interesting.。 If you can understand her setting. In fact, this is also very similar to Huaxia online text, at the beginning, it gave a concept of crossing, the concept of rebirth, or genius, the plug-in of waste materials, and other settings, just like explaining skills when fighting monsters, this is the setting. When upgrading, explain how to upgrade the exercises, this is the setting. When you change the map, explain why the map changes the map, what are the benefits of changing the map, and you can't upgrade if you don't change the map, or the setting. It's basically full of a set of settings.。 However, good books will handle this aspect very well, while telling the story, while using the set number of words, after all, the feeling of empathy and progress together with the upgrade of monsters is very popular with whites.

But in what the black cat writes,Sentences,There's no problem with the writing.,It's written very smoothly.,It's estimated that I've consulted others and learned a lot.,The description is also very delicate.,Very atmospheric middle school.,Revealing some delicate details.,The problem is not the point here.,In her novel,There are two-thirds of the setting.,And this setting is different from the story.。 If you want to know the people in the story or something, you can always find a bunch of them by flipping through the set of settings. Or maybe it's like this, when a new character comes on the scene, and then the introduction to him is almost more complicated than his own story. It's embarrassing, there's no setting, you can't understand the story, the setting is out, it's too complicated, there are too many settings, it's troublesome to understand. Then the whole story is dull to read. No one wants to memorize your long and incomprehensible settings when reading novels in casual fashion, and then read your book.

Therefore, Lin Xi felt sleepy when he looked at it. Now it's tangled, and if you say it's okay to read, the more you read, the more you want to sleep, and if you fall asleep, you'll be embarrassed.

"Hey, black cat, why don't I blow a tune for you." Lin Xi suggested. In order to prevent yourself from falling asleep, it is better to change the subject.

"No, I don't." The black cat glanced at the amount that Lin Xi had read, and he saw about one-third of it, and in just one hour, he saw quite a lot. "Have you seen it all?"

"Well, I probably read some, after all, it's not just the text, there are some comics in it, so it looks faster." Lin Xi didn't dare to say that he couldn't stand it, otherwise he might lose points.

"Let me, then, hear what you think." The black cat stopped what he was doing and looked at Lin Xi.

"Eh" Lin Xi paused, thinking about how to organize the language...

"Doesn't look good?!"

"Not really. The article is well written, the sentences are smooth and fluent, the writing is delicate and beautiful, and the storyline told is also interesting with twists and turns. ”

"Uh-huh, and then what?"

"It's just that this premise is weird."

"What's weird? In order to make everyone happy to read the book, I wrote the settings in special detail. ”

"Let me put it this way, if you think about it from a reader's point of view, there is a step in anime that requires you to read a bunch of character settings in advance before you can understand what it is talking about, would you still consider watching it? In the same way, if a novel, your setting, can't be explained in the progress of the story, then the reader will not be able to read it. For a story to be appealing to watch, it must first have an interesting story to begin, like the one you write now, and it is a good point to go back to the past with memories. In the future, you need to intersperse some small settings in the story, some small stories and the like, and it doesn't matter if you use memories, fantasies, etc. Do a little more secretively tell you the characters, the setting and configuration of the world, and tell everyone a little bit, so that everyone can understand the background of the world and the characters you depict through the story, so that your role can be impressive. Instead of being like this, I need to understand your worldview and the personality of the characters before I can read your story. ”

"Hmm... There seems to be some truth. The black cat looked thoughtful.

"yes. So,Writing fanfiction,It's also an introduction to writing novels.,After all,Original anime.,Comics.,Novels,It's already shown readers the characteristics of the characters.,The background of the world.,You just need to refer to their personalities.,Write your own opinions.,Tell your own story well.,Even if it's a good fanbook.。 But in this way, people who haven't read the original book won't know why.,So if you've watched some anime fanworks you don't understand, you'll be at a loss.。 Therefore, in the setting of the fanfiction, gradually change the impression of the original characters little by little, and add their own new settings and new understandings. Let people slowly accept your setting, then the novel can be considered a success, of course, if your setting is not accepted by others, then it will be considered a failure. Of course, the above is a personal opinion. Lin Xi said with a serious face.

"Well, it makes sense, that is, actually, the novels I write are boring?" The black cat also looked at Lin Xi with a serious face.

It's over, it's too much on a whim, how to save, rush online, etc.

"When, of course not. The story you wrote is still very interesting. It's true! It's just that it's a little difficult to read and understand. But a little change would be nice! Lin Xi said confidently.

"Some comments have been said on the Internet, but they are not as detailed as you said. Every time I see it, there are only two words.,Bad reviews.,And then don't mention any opinions.,Where there's a problem and don't say it.,It's like this every time.,I don't understand it at all.,Ah.。 I don't understand...... This kind of thing, either it's too stupid, the protagonist is too frustrated, or the lines are too middle two or something. The specific place is unpleasant to see and the language is vague. When I see it, I want to hit someone. The black cat's face turned dark, and his expression revealed a thick resentment.

"Well, novels are written for people who like to read them, and it's good for someone to be happy with them. I'll sing you a tune. Lin Xi decided to comfort the black cat, so he sang a children's song, Whitewasher~