clicked on the third episode (below) that had just been transmitted to the backstage, and Minglan also began to watch it seriously.

Turn the first page.

Well...... Nothing special.

It's still the same excellent painting skills as always, or the plot of fighting witches, why do you have a bad premonition?

Probably an illusion.

Then, Minglan continued to look back, and every page was also read very seriously, much more seriously than reviewing the new words of other cartoonists.

Actually, when she reviewed the works of other cartoonists before, she just glanced at the plot casually, and then began to fish.

Yes!

You have to know how to squeeze time, so that you can have fun in time, otherwise what fun is there at work.

Learn to discover the joy of work!

Well? Can't find it?

Then you won't be creating your own fun!

Therefore, only the lewd man of Twilight and Loneliness is taken very seriously.

Of course, it's not that she fell in love with this guy with an obscene pen name, but she had to admit that although this guy has a sense of obscenity from his pen name, and his speech is not good, but "Madoka Magical Girl" is indeed a very good work.

Alas!

Why should this talent be given to a lewd man?

At this time, I can only cover my flat chest and sigh that God is really unfair (resentment).

Then.

Continue to read the latest episode of the review.

The plot is that after Sister Ba Ma Mei restricts the black long straight "Xiao Mei Yan", she takes the protagonist "Lu Mu Yuan" and her Ji friend Blue Hair to hunt the witch, of course, because the protagonist and her Ji You are ordinary people, Sister Ba Ma Mei just showed them how she solved the witch in a graceful and chic way.

Minglan especially likes to watch these battles.

On the one hand, the painting skills of Twilight Dawn Loneliness are really good, and the battle scenes can always show a very strong sense of impact.

Moreover, Sister Bamamei's fighting style is particularly beautiful, obviously shooting the enemy with countless big guns, but she feels as if she is dancing an elegant waltz, handsome and beautiful.

The second aspect is that Minglan also likes the character of Sister Bama Aesthetics, like this kind of gentle and handsome girl at critical moments is simply a goddess!

It's super good, is there any, how long has Ming Lan read the comics, among all the female characters, she thinks that Sister Bama is really the most perfect female character, handsome and gentle!

Although, she may have a new love in a month or two......

But, at least she likes Sister Bama very much now!

And then.

I read a few more pages.

Minglan froze, like a wooden man, keeping the page turning, her face full of incredulity.

Well...... Uh-huh, uh-huh?!

What the hell?!

Plot mutations?

Yes, on this page, she saw that her favorite sister Bama Mei was bitten off by a seemingly cute but actually brutal witch, and her head was bitten off, and blood flowed all over the ground.

Yes, the whole picture is extremely bloody, just like that kind of horror comic, the child can't hold it anymore, and he pees.

It's not the same as saying yes, hey!

Minglan was directly stunned.

Hello?

Said to be a healing manga?

This is a healing manga of geoduck!

In the next second, Minglan reacted, typing at QQ.

"Bastard, you come out for me!"

"Go to your uncle's Africa, you must be there, right? Don't play dead! ”

"Hurry up and change the plot for me, do you play like this? You're poisoning! No, you're murdering! ”

"What about people? I know you're here, come back to me."

Finally.

About five minutes later, Yanyun Songzi replied to her, "What's wrong?" ”

Well, it's that "ahh

I'm innocent of your sister!

Then, Minglan crackled and typed: "What the hell is your new plot!" Why was Senpai bitten off by a witch? You're doing something! ”

Twilight Dawn was lonely: "Oh, it's just a normal plot development, it's not a big deal." ”

Minglan: "Get out!" ”

Twilight is lonely: "Hehe, I can't even accept this kind of plot, how can you be the same as a virgin." ”

“？？？” Minglan.

Rub, how can this person speak so viciously!

What's in your way? Hindering you from being a virgin for life?

Minglan: "Get out!" What's wrong with the old lady virgin, aren't you a virgin? ”

Twilight is lonely: "I'm not a virgin. ”

Minglan: "......"

This venomous man!

This lewd man!

The most obscene cartoonist in history!

After scolding in her heart for a while, Minglan absolutely restrained her emotions, first took a deep breath, inhaled ~ exhaled ~ just like the cult leader Yungong, and then typed, "I don't care, you changed the plot for me!" ”

"Don't change!"

"Will you change it?" Minglan.

"I won't change it!"

"Why don't you change it?" Minglan.

"Because...... Because I have polio, I can't even pick up a pen now, really! ”

“？？？” Minglan.

"Otherwise, how could I not change?"

"Didn't you just say you were going to Africa? Are you polio and still going to Africa? Wait, what polio do you have at your age? Minglan slapped her thigh, finally found a logical loophole, and was complacent about her insight.

Yes! This kind of bad excuse, how can you deceive this baby?

Then, Yanyun Songzi said, "Actually, I'm embarrassed to say the real situation, because in fact, ...... I had cancer, uterine cancer, and the doctor told me there was no cure. ”

"Fuck off, what kind of uterine cancer do you guy, do you have that thing?!" Minglan.

Yanyun Songzi was also shocked, thinking yes, how did I forget this, I am obviously a big man.

So she said, "Actually, I was going to the hospital for circumcision recently......

"You're enough, can you change it or not!"

"Don't change! This is a masterpiece! Then, Songzi pulled Minglan into the blacklist, hey, it was finally quiet.

On the other side, Minglan also calmed down and began to think about countermeasures.

Actually, in a sense, she also felt that it was a bit of a miracle to suddenly play such a play in such a seemingly healing plot.

If!

Putting aside the emotional factor, dare to suddenly add such a dark scene in the familiar magical girl theme, no matter what the results are later, the topicality will definitely not be able to run, if the results can be stabilized later, relying on this unexpected bridge alone, the U-turn of Sister Ba Ma will not only not affect the results, but will attract more admiring readers.

This is a gamble, if the follow-up collapses, then it is garbage, if the follow-up stabilizes and does not collapse, then it may become a milestone-level work.

But!

Minglan's own emotions really can't accept this plot.

So.

She will ask Twilight Dawn Loneliness to change the plot.

On the one hand, the risk is small and relatively stable after the change.

On the other hand, it takes care of a lot of readers who like the character of Asami as much as her, so as not to explode everyone's mentality, abandon it directly, or send the blade, which is not the result that everyone wants to see.

But.

Come on!

This grandson refuses to change at all, it's just doing something!

Never mind!

Minglan decided to show it to the editor-in-chief Liu Yuanbiao to see how the editor-in-chief Liu decided, after all, she didn't dare to call the shots about this kind of thing, and as long as she showed it to the editor-in-chief Liu, no matter what she sent at that time, she could say, "Eh?" I showed it to the editor-in-chief, and he told me to do it."

Yes!

This way you can shake the pot!

I'm so witty!