Yanyun Songzi naturally also saw the words of falling into the water without a trace.

However, how to say it, since the popularity of live broadcast eating Xiang, everyone has begun to use this kind of talk as a mantra, and if you don't agree with each other, you will live broadcast Xiangxiang, but in fact, it will really be fulfilled, almost zero, right?

Therefore, seeing the water without a trace cheating over there, she didn't have any special feelings.

Cut.

It's not as practical as live women's clothing.

If you talk about live women's clothing, then she will probably get serious, and cultivate the originator of a certain genre for China Literature Group in minutes, what a platinum writer!

Then again.

After all, Songzi came from the online literature circle after ten years of leading the industry, and her vision is more accurate than those great god authors in this year, and in the long run, in a sense, the taste is also so picky.

Falling into the water without a trace, the "Demon King of the Other World", the cool point that Xiaobaiwen should have in these years, what harem stallions, what mythical beast babies, what monster upgrades, what heroes save beauty, basically it is all available.

Perhaps, these things will become the poisonous point of the old whites in the future, but it is still cool now, this! There is no doubt about it.

So, she didn't complain about this either.

She will comment on "The Demon King of the Other World" poisonously, because this scientific and cultural knowledge that has fallen into the water without a trace is too rubbish, giving people the feeling that they dare to come out to write before they finish elementary school.

It's obviously a magical civilization, and it forcibly pulls science for you, and the most terrifying thing is that you haven't learned science well and come out to show off, it's painful to watch.

As for falling into the water without a trace will scold her under the post, this is also human nature, a normal reaction, nothing to be reasonable about.

Of course!

The face still has to be punched!

If she doesn't fight, wouldn't she be a good bully?

While thinking so, she also clicked on "Knife Cutting the Sky", which was the first to ask for a book review.

Title: "The Knife Slashes the Sky"

Author: Xia Wuyi

After reading it carefully, I was a little forced in my heart.

This book is currently only 30,000 words, a total of only 11 chapters, in essence, it is a work of "Dou Po", after crossing over, he obtained a god-defying knife, and used the spirit of the knife to replace the medicine elder in Xiao Yan's ring, and then the family strife that he likes to see, and the waste wood counterattacks or something......

After reading the first 11 chapters, Yanyun Songzi also saw the problem.

Actually, if it was placed around October last year, it was still very marketable to imitate "Dou Po", everyone had never heard of the setting of Grandpa Ring at that time, as soon as I saw Grandpa Ring, this kind of super awesome character hiding by his side as a teacher, I felt that it was so powerful, so this setting belonged to a big cool point.

However, since she finished writing "Dou Po", and this year she wrote another book "Panlong", and she is the favorite ring grandfather, readers are tired of this genre.

Looking at it, the entire market is full of old men who write rings, and the beginning is counterattacking, even white readers are reluctant to read it.

Although, because of this, there is also an evolution of the old man of the machine spirit and the like, similar to this "Sword Cutting the Sky", but it is also the same.

What readers need now is innovation, not to continue to eat the old routines, and the cool points have become poisonous points.

Of course!

If it's just a creative problem, this "Knife Cutting the Sky" is actually not very bad, although it is an old book that eats Xiaobai routines, but 500~1000 is evenly set, there should be a chance.

However.

After reading the beginning, Yanyun Songzi almost didn't have a mouthful of poisonous blood rushing out.

Oh, it's poisonous!

This book is highly poisonous!

That's right.

The entire first two chapters.

It's all about the pre-time crossing?!

Bah you!

She doesn't know if the author has integrated his own experience in the first two chapters or what, and he used two whole chapters to tell how frustrated the male protagonist was before he crossed over, how unlucky, how complaining, what entrepreneurial failure, his wife ran away with his sister-in-law, and owed 350 million or something.

She almost thought that this author had been cheated by the Jiangnan Leather Factory back then!

What's even more terrifying is that the plot after crossing has nothing to do with the beginning half a dime.

The first two chapters were completely deleted, and there was no sense of disobedience!

Because of the third chapter, I have traveled to a place called the Yuanqi Continent......

Brother, you wrote the first two chapters just to dissuade readers, right?

As for the content of the back, it's not much of a problem, after all, it's an imitation of Dou Po, and it's still an imitation of pretending to be forced to slap your face.

So, Yanyun Songzi also replied later:

"Uncreative followers can still be useful for fooling novice readers, but what are you writing about in the first two chapters? It's normal for AV to have foreplay, but you're stuck at the beginning of this 'fast broadcast', right? Foreplay is a fart, no one is moving! It makes people want to smash the computer every minute! Fast food online article, where are you cooking fast food, you are simply constipated! Lao Tie, do you want me to bring you a box of intestinal tongs? Really, delete the first two chapters, and I promise you'll double your grades! In addition, the settings of your supporting roles are really amazing, and I can see my old blood......"

Within a few minutes, the following series of replies appeared.

"Hahaha, brother, cut the landlord, right?"

"When I saw this 'sincere advice', I laughed out loud in the middle of the night!"

"Xia Wuyi, everyone is hitting the street, what about fighting? Let's walk the rivers and lakes of online literature, the focus is on happiness and revenge! So, put Shennong's anus 2333"

"Xia Wuyi, be strong, look at how many popular authors have been on Shennong's poisonous herb book list, what are you who have been poisoned?"

"That's right, brother, you don't even have the qualifications to be on the book list hahahaha"

Yanyun Songzi also sighed when he saw these replies.

It's all a bunch of schadenfreude, and they can't see the essence of their book reviews.

Is she talking nonsense?

Sling the bull!

She is clearly serious and really making suggestions, okay!

Really, if you accept her suggestion and modify it modestly, you can ensure that this little street named Xia Wuyi will become a big street, that is, everyone is on the street, and this buddy's posture is even better.

But!

She's not going to argue with these street fights.

What she said is all about experience, but experience is such a thing that can only accumulate lessons by yourself, and if you teach others, it is better to let people suffer losses and have a long memory.

On the other hand, as the author of "Knife Cutting the Sky", Xia Wuyi also saw these suggestions.

Yes!

He almost smashed the monitor.

Grass, what is the beginning useless, he is clearly very serious at the beginning of shaping the character personality of the protagonist, okay?

I can't even see this, why are you, Shennong, so famous in Longkong, and your true talent?

You still dislike my thin supporting roles?

your fart!

Of course.

Because he asked for drug reviews by himself, Xia Wuyi would not show his resistance.

So, he also replied with an "Oh, got it, thank you." "There is no then.

Though.

He's here for book reviews.

But as a rookie author, he felt a long time ago that if he wrote it himself, he would definitely be able to become a god in one book.

Those so-called great god authors, what kind of madness, blood tyrant knife, theirs is nothing more than that!

I can write a book like this myself!

Therefore, Xia Wuyi was actually not ready to adopt these suggestions from the beginning.

Yes, he believes that it is simply simple for him to want a book to become a god, and the story in his head is so exciting, how can anyone not like it?