Is it a coincidence Although Lin Weiwei is very strange, but after thinking about it, she didn't come up with anything, Lin Weiwei didn't care too much, anyway, as long as it wasn't exactly the same, as long as their works weren't exactly the same, they could use it to pretend to be thirteen!

And when everyone heard Ji Yiyi's words, they were all stunned, similar to Tegel's poetic style? Who is this Tegel? This is a famous Indian poet and a well-known poet in China!

The people of the Ancient Poetry Association didn't believe that Lin Weiwei's poetic style was similar to Tegel's, so they searched for Tegel's works with their mobile phones

"The green trees grew to my door, like the hoarse sound of anticipation from the earth."

"God's own morning, He Himself thinks it is a novelty."

......

Sure enough, the same nonsense, the same ...... The last two sentences of Lin Weiwei's poem are really similar to Tegel's poetic style!

Ji Yiyi continued: "For example, the last few lines of this poem: "Mother, if you see a very small white boat in your dream", "Don't be surprised that it falls into a dream for no reason", "This is your beloved daughter with tears in her eyes"

The poet thought, when will these fragile and fragile paper boats carrying her daughter's wish reach her mother's side, and how good it would be if you could meet it in your dreams, mother, this paper boat has your daughter's wish for you!

Mother, don't be surprised that she comes into your dream, which expresses the poet's strong homesickness, and "thousands of rivers and mountains", this sentence is used just right in the poem, which enhances the appeal of the poem's sentences.

The two sentences "Ask it to carry her love" and "return with sorrow" are actually originally one sentence, and the poet expresses them here in interlacing the words of the poem, which also plays a role in enhancing the appeal of the poem, which also leaves room for the reader to recall. ”

Ji Yiyi talked eloquently and said the appreciation of this song, and many modern poets present suddenly realized after this appreciation, but those ancient poetry associations are still dead pigs who are not afraid of boiling water, Yuan Zhou said: "You are right, these last few sentences do have extremely high literary value, but why does the author spend so much pen and ink to write the things that seem useless in front of me, such as: "Mother, for a long time, I want to write a poem for you......"? ”

Ji Yiyi said: "In order to create a feeling of longing, mother, I have wanted to write a poem for you for a long time, which shows that the author has missed his mother for a long time......."

Ji Yiyi explained again, and Yuan Zhou was speechless.

After finishing speaking, Ji Yiyi looked at Lin Weiwei: "Let's ask the original author of this poem!" Vivi, what did you think when you wrote this poem? ”

"This ......." Lin Weiwei is really hard to answer, she can't say that there are a lot of poems in her head, but all she remembered was that this poem was twenty lines, in order to complete the composition requirements, the poem was at least twenty lines, and this poem was written in order to make up enough twenty lines, right?

"You've told you everything I thought!" Lin Weiwei could only say this.

Ji Yiyi smiled, and then said: "This poem is very good, but I think there is still a little shortcoming, not perfect, but if I were asked to say which point is not perfect, I really can't say!" ”

Lin Weiwei sweated profusely, when she wrote this poem, in order to be more in line with the environment she lives in now, Lin Weiwei changed a few words to this poem, maybe Ji Yiyi's shortcomings are these, right?

The people of the Ancient Poetry Association said:

"There are still shortcomings!"

"That's it, it's not as godly as Ji Yiyi said!"

"After all, she's just a fifteen-year-old girl!"

"That's it, I'll just say, how could Lin Weiwei write any perfect poetry?"

.......

However, Ji Yiyi said: "Although there are some shortcomings, it is already very good, after all, this is the first poem I have seen in so many years, and the poem that carries forward Tegel's poetic style to the fullest!" ”

Lin Weiwei sweated profusely again, and played to the fullest? You have won the award, although Bingxin's poems are greatly influenced by Tagore's poetic style, but Bingxin's poems only have the shadow of Tagore, in general, Bingxin's poems are quite self-contained, but Lin Weiwei has not read the poems of Tegel in this world, so she doesn't know..... Could it be that Bingxin's poetic style is really exactly the same as this Tegel's poetic style?

But when Ji Yiyi said this, some people were unhappy, and a man in his thirties spoke: "Carry forward Tegel's poetic style to the fullest?" ”

The man who spoke was called Wang Hui, a member of the Huaxia Poetry Association, and most of his poems imitated Tegel's poetic style, and were called the Oriental Tegel by people in the circle, but no one said that he carried forward Tegel's poetic style to the fullest, and Ji Yiyi admired Lin Weiwei so much......

Of course, I don't think it's anything to admire Lin Weiwei and Wang Hui, but you say that Lin Weiwei's poems carry forward Tegel's poetic style to the fullest? Or is it the first poem you've seen in years that carries forward Tegel's poetic style to the fullest? This Eastern Tegel is naturally not happy!

Wang Hui said: "Most of Tegel's poems contain profound religious and philosophical insights, and for Tegel, his poems are his gift to God, and he himself is God's suitor!" But Lin Weiwei's poem has no religious or philosophical opinions........ Hehe...... Besides, you also said that Lin Weiwei's poem has shortcomings and is not perfect, and I think so too. ”

Before Ji Yiyi could speak, Lin Weiwei said: "Actually, what I wrote before was not like this!" With that, Lin Weiwei brought out the original version of the poem.

After Lin Weiwei read the original version written by Bingxin, Ji Yiyi was amazed: "I said why I always feel that something is wrong, so it is!" ”

Ji Yiyi said: "Your previous poem, although it seems to be fine, but in fact, there is a big loophole, that is, you may never be able to read this poem if you are busy, but your mother is busy, and she can't see it all day, how can you express that deep longing?" But after the change, his mother is in his hometown, and the poet, as a wanderer, naturally misses his mother very much! ”

"Although it has only changed a few words, it has raised the artistic conception of this poem to a higher level, wonderful, wonderful!"

Wang Hui is still disdainful: "But Lin Weiwei's poems don't show that kind of religious and philosophical meaning!" ”

Ji Yiyi said: "Philosophy? What is Philosophy? There are thousands of philosophical explanations, and I think that the love of a child for his mother is not a great philosophy. ”