Chapter 30 The evening classmates read Su Ye's novel, and Su Ye read the evening classmates

Su Ye immediately handed the novel he had written to Dusk Xizi.

Although he is quite confident in this novel, Enma also said that he likes to read it very much, but when he handed it over to Dusk Xizi, he still felt a little apprehensive.

After all, everyone will have a different opinion on such a thing as a novel.

As the saying goes, even if it's a very good novel with a lot of praise, there will be people who don't want to like it.

A novel that everyone will love cannot exist.

So Su Ye's novel, Dusk Xizi's evaluation, is still unknown.

Dusk took the novel and asked curiously; "What's the name of this novel?"

"I haven't thought about this yet......" Su Ye shook his head and said.

"That's right." Dusk opened the manuscript paper, looked at the beautiful text, and immediately felt very pleasing to the eye, and at the same time a little surprised that this manuscript was actually written by hand.

In an age when writers usually use computers to work and type out manuscripts on keyboards, handwritten manuscripts are generally only done by some older writers.

After all, the habits accumulated over decades are difficult to change, and even if you learn how to use the computer, you will have an empty head when you sit in front of the computer, and you don't know what to write.

The novels written by Dusk Xizi, starting from the first novel, and the novels she is writing now, are all written on the computer, she has never thought of writing by hand, and when she saw Su Ye's manuscript, it was actually written by hand, and she immediately felt very novel.

Of course, the novelty was only a matter of moments, and she quickly threw the thought out of her mind and looked at it seriously.

It's just that he hasn't read half a page, and Dusk Xizi raised his head and looked at Su Ye with some surprise.

Su Ye was looked at like this, a little strange, and couldn't help muttering in his heart, could it be that this novel is not the type that Dusk Xizi likes?

"What's wrong?"

After hesitating, Su Ye still asked strangely.

"I didn't ...... It's nothing. Dusk shook her head, did not say what was in her heart, and continued to look down.

This time, after reading a page of the manuscript of the novel, she couldn't help but look up again.

"Su Ye, you wrote this novel?" Dusk hesitated for a moment, but couldn't help but ask.

"Huh? Yes, of course. Su Ye was stunned for a moment, and then asked a little inexplicably, "Why do you ask like that?" ”

"Because the pen power of this novel is too strong, without more than ten years of writing, there is no way to have such pen power, right?" Dusk Yuko directly said her thoughts.

"The writing is also very good, and the plot is very innovative!"

"Although I only read the beginning, there are still very few novels that can do this level at the beginning, this is not like a high school student can write it at all, so I can't believe it, this is really a novel written by Su Ye."

Saying this, Dusk Xizi looked straight at Su Ye, as if he wanted to see through Su Ye directly.

"That's a compliment?" Su Ye was stunned for a moment, then smiled and asked.

Dusk Yuko is not like an Enma, just a simple reader, she is a best-selling novelist, a veteran author.

From the author's point of view, she was able to see more than the Enma.

Enma just thought it was "good-looking", but he couldn't say why.

But Dusk Yuko is different, she is very professional, and she can almost see at a glance that this novel is completely different from other novels.

The profound pen power of this novel makes her very comfortable to read, and she feels like a spring breeze.

If it was written by a master writer who was over half a hundred years old, she would not find it strange.

But this turned out to be the work of a classmate, so naturally I couldn't believe it.

She originally thought that Su Ye would come up with a very light novel-style novel, after all, teenagers and girls of this age are exposed to these.

Even, it may come up with a self-explanatory novel that moans painlessly, and has no substance at all.

Of course, if Su Ye is a little more professional and does not have the above two problems, but it will be more or less exposed, and many problems of newcomers will be exposed.

So, Dusk Yuko is ready to give him some pointers and make him understand that the novel is not written like this.

Who knows, just after watching the beginning, Dusk has a feeling of being amazed.

The subject matter of the novel is biased towards narrative, giving people the feeling of looking at a picture scroll, all scenes, close at hand, all stories, tell a story.

Such a novel cannot be summed up in a simple "good-looking".

"Really...... Did you write it? Dusk Xizi was still a little incredulous, and couldn't help but ask again.

"Yes. You mean, am I writing too badly, or is it too good? Su Ye asked curiously.

In fact, this is asking knowingly, just to hear the appreciation of the evening classmates.

"Of course it's so well written." Dusk Yuko said as a matter of course.

"That's right, but you just read the beginning, this evaluation is not accurate, let's talk about it after reading it." Su Ye listened to the appreciation, was in a good mood, and said with a smile.

One of my favorite things about being a fiction writer is, of course, being recognized by readers, and being praised.

What's more, the other party is still a reader like Dusk Xizi?

"Well, yes." Dusk Xizi also knew that his evaluation was unfair, so he only read a page of manuscript paper, about a thousand words, although the beginning was really good, but it should also be read and then evaluated, nodded at the moment, and read it again.

Dusk Yuko began to read Su Ye's novel.

And Su Ye had nothing to do for a while, so he changed his posture, lay on the table, and looked at the side face of his classmates reading books in the evening not far away.

The evening classmates read books, and Su Ye watched the evening classmates.

The school in the morning, quietly, the occasional birdsong outside the window, everything seemed so cozy.

Su Ye had a little less time to sleep last night because of writing novels and telling stories to Enma, and when he got up, he woke up because of Enma's cuteness, but he was lying on the table at this time, but he was a little sleepy, and he couldn't help but yawn silently, and his consciousness was a little dull. In addition, the praise of his classmates in the evening also made him completely relieved.

In a daze, half-asleep, Su Ye felt that his cheek was poked, and again.

Su Ye slowly opened his eyes, and there was a cute and beautiful face in front of him.

"Ah, evening classmate, have you finished reading the novel?" Su Ye subconsciously said the name in his heart.

"Dusk is not evening." Dusk corrected.

"Hmm...... I know this, but it's a nickname......" Su Ye knew that he had lost his words, and hurriedly said.

"Well, if you like it, call it whatever you want." Dusk Xizi lowered her head, as if thinking about something, and after a while, raised her head and said.

"Huh? May I? To be honest, Su Ye didn't expect Dusk Xizi to agree to him call him so, after all, Dusk Xizi didn't like this nickname very much.

"Saliva." Dusk Xizi pointed at her pink lips with her finger and gestured to Su Ye.

"Hmm!" Su Ye's old face turned red, and he immediately wiped the corners of his mouth, and sure enough, there was a trace of saliva.

I just slept on the table, and I actually drooled out!

Su Ye didn't expect that he would lose his temper like this, and he was very embarrassed and embarrassed for a while.

To die or to die......