Chapter Seventy-Four: The Plot of the First Three Episodes of "The Zodiac".
(In the previous chapter, Ji Ruyan was written as Ji Bingya, which has been changed.) It does not affect reading. )
"What? What do you say!? Absolutely frightened, feeling the excitement in Xu Zheng's tone, a little scalp tingling.
"Kill Ji Ruyan and Tu Qing." Xu Zheng repeated what he had just said again, and after saying it, he also imagined the plot in his mind, and the more he thought about it, the more excited he became, and the more he felt that this was feasible.
When he first wrote in front of the computer, he just wrote based on the ideas that came to him. But now after saying it, I suddenly have a feeling in my heart that this adaptation should be possible.
"Big guy, calm down." I couldn't say a word, and hurriedly persuaded, "These are the two women I finally wrote... No, a heroine and a supporting actress, you're just going to kill them? ”
As an author, in addition to the dragon set, as long as it is a supporting role. I have more or less feelings for the characters in it.
Thinking about it, he continued, "And Tu Qing, as Niu Li's childhood sweetheart, although his personality is flawed, he is still good overall." She married Su Qilin just because she was a concubine. If you really want to talk about it, Niu Li was incapable in the early stage, so Tu Qing succumbed to fate. ”
The corners of Xu Zheng's mouth twitched, according to the absolute statement, the other party of "Zodiac" intends to write a real-world story.
What is a real-world story? That is, all the characters are flesh and blood, and their fate is not in the hands of the author, but in the hands of the characters of the novel. For example, although Niu Li was a genius of the Niu family in the early stage, he didn't do what he could do, so when his childhood sweetheart Tu Qing was promised to Su Qilin, the second son of the Su family, Niu Li was powerless.
This is the reality, this is the story of a real world that I absolutely want to write, and even Niu Li doesn't even have a golden finger, but he is just a genius and hard work, and he has gone through hardships to preach the strongest at the end.
Of course, it's okay to impose the setting if you have to do it, but the novel collapses.
"I remember that Tu Qing's personality is not very good, right? Although she and Niu Li are childhood sweethearts, they naturally have a relationship, but Tu Qing, as a concubine, has the greatest hope of marrying Niu Li, the eldest son, and becoming the wife of the Niu family. Xu Zheng said speechlessly.
"But that's the reality!" Who is not selfish. Tu Qing's thoughts are very normal, she married Niu Li just to want to be prosperous and rich, and let Niu Li protect her. That's normal, isn't it? ”
"It's quite normal, Tu Qing learned that Niu Li was going to marry Ji Ruyan. Take the initiative to propose to the family to marry Su Qilin? Are you sure this is not green tea? Xu Zheng was speechless, there is actually no poison in this place, after all, many novels and childhood sweethearts are the targets of slaps in the face, but the poison is poison in Niu Li and does nothing, and when Tu Qing and Su Qilin enter the cave room, they blow the phoenix and ask for the phoenix.
Together, these two plots are particularly poisonous.
It's embarrassing, and now that I think about it, this plot is really bad, and I don't know what I thought at the beginning. But he still said, "Tu Qing is just a supporting actress, but the heroine is Ji Ruyan!" ”
Speaking of the heroine, Xu Zheng really admires it, and the other party deserves to be the author of the great god. Reach the pinnacle in the grasp of the character's character. According to the absolute statement, the character of the heroine Ji Ruyan is borrowed from the character of Lu Pheasant in the Han Dynasty, that is, Liu Bang's wife. But Ji Ruyan was exterminated, and was set to be more ruthless than Lu Pheasant.
Ji Ruyan, as the second lady of the Youji family, is only outstanding in talent, and has been suppressed by the eldest sister, so her personality has gradually distorted and changed, although she looks beautiful, she is a femme fatale.
Before marrying Niu Li, he had been making things difficult for Niu Li, and it was not pleasing to the eye when he looked at it horizontally and vertically. And after marrying Niu Li, he didn't have any feelings for Niu Li, or Ji Ruyan, like Tu Qing, was just succumbed to fate.
Of course, that's all. In the absolute pen, after Ji Ruyan gave birth to a son for Niu Li, she actually began to design and frame Niu Li, wanting to get rid of the protagonist and then control the Niu family.
This stunned many people, and this kind of operation? There is really no most poisonous, only more poisonous!
"The immortality of these two daughters is not enough to make people angry!" Xu Zhengwen came with a crepe sentence, and then said, "I've been thinking a lot about it in the past two days, but I don't have a clue. Maybe there is a better direction for adaptation, but now I think it's best to kill these two girls. ”
"Boss, let's calm down first." He said with a wry smile, "With Niu Li's character, unless he encounters something big, how can he kill his sister?" ”
"Yes, that's the most humiliating part of your novel. The character of the protagonist is too painful. Xu Zheng lashed out mercilessly, and when he still had to say...
"Stop, stop!" Jue was obviously succumbing in his heart, but he smiled bitterly, "Okay, if you want to kill my sister, I won't stop it." But there has to be a reasonable plot, it's too far-fetched to kill Ji Ruyan just because she was making things difficult. ”
Xu Zheng groaned slightly, "I set two hatred points for Ji Ruyan. It's also something you didn't write in the novel, so it's an original plot adapted from your novel. ”
"You say." These are absolutely interested, curious.
"First, Ji Ruyan quit the marriage."
"What do you mean?" As soon as he heard it, the plot scene instantly appeared in his mind, which was a huge humiliation for the Niu family. As long as he thinks about this plot, he is aggrieved. I thought of something, but I suddenly frowned, "This paragraph is really aggrieved, and the hatred is also very much." But Ji Ruyan still won't die! It's just a divorce. ”
"Who said this plot was aggrieved?" Xu Zheng smiled and said, "Ji Ruyan wants to withdraw from the marriage, can't the protagonist divorce his wife?" ”
"This...", his eyes were stunned, and his heart suddenly became excited, he thought that Ji Ruyan came to the door to withdraw from the marriage, but the protagonist learned of this situation and divorced his wife very decisively.
The more I thought about it, the more excited I became. You must know that in today's novels, it is not too late for ten years to take revenge on any gentleman, and now the protagonist has been wronged, so he has to take revenge on the spot and slap his face back.
Undoubtedly, divorce is the greatest humiliation for a man, and it is also contempt for the Niu family. But when Niu Li came to Ji Ruyan to withdraw from the marriage, he divorced his wife! The plot has become a proper cool article, and it is very uplifting.
And this part of Xu Zheng's plot is simply a textbook-like face-slapping tutorial in the eyes of the absolute.
Seeing that he didn't speak, Xu Zheng continued, "The first point is really not enough for Niu Li to kill Ji Ruyan. So I set up two points.,I remember in the first chapter.,A little bit of the protagonist's life experience.,It seems that the protagonist had a younger brother when he was a child.,Because of the death of the younger brother.,The protagonist's personality has become taciturn.,Perseverance, right? ”
"Yes, that's right."
"My idea is that the protagonist's younger brother is not dead, but grows up with the protagonist, brother and brother. But because he has no cultivation talent, he is not valued by the family. And after Ji Ruyan was divorced, she was resentful in her heart, but because Niu Li was the eldest son of the ugly Niu family, she was not easy to do, so she was discouraged by the protagonist's younger brother. Saying that, Xu Zheng was also more and more excited in his heart, and he said, "My brother's death is just the right time to change Niu Li's personality, your personality is too fucked!" ”
"My idea is to divorce and divorce his wife in the first episode, Ji Ruyan killed the protagonist's younger brother in the second episode, and let Niu Li kill Ji Ruyan in the third episode. What do you think? ”
“6666666666”
Absolutely already kneeling.
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