Chapter 220: The Birth of Tomie

Li Ze told a horror story, and the consequence of this horror story was that Yuzi was directly scared and cried.

Li Ze, who has thick lines, would never have thought of his horror story, and the power was so strong.

Yuzi fled home while crying, and according to the feedback the next day, Yuzi washed her face and washed for more than two hours at night.

The skin of the face has been washed thin!

Afterwards, Li Ze, who couldn't get over his conscience, apologized to Yuzi very sincerely.

Li Ze assured: "The above story is pure fiction and will never be a coincidence. ”

In retrospect, this was indeed an inappropriate joke.

The girl was just confused by sesame seeds, and then Li Ze used sesame seeds to wash her face and tell such a terrible story, it is still a big problem related to the face, and it is normal for other girls to collapse.

But such a joke is not without benefits.

Because, after Li Ze told this story, after Yuzi cried and fled, Li Ze was pleasantly surprised to find that he was born!

No, it's up!

The inspiration value of the little shrimp brothers and sisters has soared to 30 points!

It seems that 30 inspiration points is the upper limit, otherwise, I am afraid that there will be more inspiration!

During the next day's working hours, after Li Ze apologized to Yuzi, Li Ze noticed that the Nangong brothers and sisters were all working hard to write.

It seems that only with inspiration can there be work efficiency.

The shrimp brothers and sisters work hard to overcome the difficulties about the dismemberment of the corpse.

Li Ze also went up to look at the draft and found:

Wow!

Very good!

It's scary!

And it looks scalp-tingling!

Li Ze smiled and praised while holding his goosebumps: "Today's painting is good, I feel very infiltrating when I see it." ”

Xiaomi responded to Li Ze's smile and said: "It's all thanks to you, boss, after we watched some bloody videos yesterday, we still don't have a clue how to show the bloody horror through comics and impress readers." ”

"But after listening to the story of Sesame, we suddenly understood how to draw."

"On the basis of realistic depictions of corpses and wounds, a large number of elements of dense phobias are added. Cells, blood stains, eyeballs, hair, ...... Use the most realistic picture of wounds and corpses, with dense phobias, so as to maximize the visual impact that horror comics should have. ”

"We were worried that adding an element of intense fear would be too detached from reality and offensive to readers."

"But we remembered the words of you, boss, and let us not be rigid and try to impress the readers. So in the end, we decided to be bold and use more dense fear elements. ”

I see, Li Ze couldn't help but be happy, it turned out that he had made great contributions!

And, the results are great! At the very least, this kind of realistic horror corpse wound, coupled with a large number of dense phobia elements, makes Li Zedu, who has a big heart, numb his scalp!

Li Ze nodded and said affirmatively: "Very good, your ideas are really good." I'm sure that this realistic style of painting, coupled with dense fear, will definitely make some readers scold, and definitely some people will give up because of it. ”

"But that's the feature, that's the impression! That's the label of our work. As long as we do a good job in other aspects, these disgusting and terrifying dense phobia elements will be a huge plus. ”

Li Ze gave a thumbs up: "You guys are doing a good job, come on!" ”

After determining the final style of dismemberment, the completion of the entire comic is a matter of great speed.

Storyboarding, drafting, drawing, revision.

After a period of revision, the first work of Xiaoxiaomi Comic Studio, "Tomie", is about to be completed, because there are more revisions and improvements in the later stage, so it takes a little longer than usual, but it is still within the controllable range.

Moreover, after all, they are all novice cartoonists, and it is also the right choice to work slowly, do a good job of the work, and strive for a one-time draft.

With Zhou Yu drawing the last manuscript paper that needs to be polished, it's done!

Zhou Mi came to Li Ze's office with the manuscript in his arms and knocked on the door: "Boss, it's okay!" It's done! This is our sibling's 15th short manga, and I'm looking forward to it this time! ”

Li Ze was making up for his knowledge of comics, and nodded with a smile when he heard this: "Well, it's finally this day, and I'm also very confident in this comic." ”

"Hehe, after all, it's your script, boss." Zhou Mi patted his ass very well and said: "The boss produces it, it must be a high-quality product." ”

After Xiaomi withdrew, Li Ze used the system to check the attributes of the work, to be reasonable, I am really looking forward to it!

And the attribute values of this work are:

"Tomie": 20 painting skills, 47 characters, 101 plots, and 33 personalities!

β€œNice!” Li Ze let out an excited roar.

Not bad, really good!

In addition to the fact that they are all newcomers, their drawing skills are insufficient, and they are only 20 points, and the other 3 attributes feel very good!

This short comic is not long, about 18 pages in a mainstream magazine.

In such a short story, the character attribute value has reached a high level of 47, and it can be said that the portrayal of the heroine Tomie is definitely very successful.

Anyone who has read this comic will definitely be interested in this mysterious, beautiful, innocent but debauched girl, vicious in heart but shy with a young daughter.

This is still limited by space, so it can't be in-depth to shape the character, if the market response is good, if there is a follow-up short story, the shaping of the role will be further deepened.

33's personality is not high, but this is mainly because the rookie cartoonist Xiami brother and sister, the personal style is not yet formed. If it weren't for everyone's efforts to create a realistic painting style, as well as a large number of dense phobias that poison the reader's eyes, I'm afraid 33's personality would not have been obtained.

However, Li Ze is already very satisfied with 33's personality.

The 18-page short comic is a newcomer's work, and it can have 33, which is already good!

Of course, the most powerful thing is the plot of 101.

Short comics, limited by space, are very difficult to express in the plot.

And thanks to Li Ze's "originality", the newcomer's comic work "Tomie" has reached a fairly high height in terms of plot.

If Li Ze can check the attributes of other people's works, Li Ze will find that the plot of "Tomie" has killed a large number of short stories and even medium and long comics!

Seeing this plot of up to 101, Li Ze also nodded with satisfaction, "Well, the script I worked so hard to write was not in vain." ”

At this time, the system Cairo-kun also came out, bringing good news: "The comic work has been completed, and 50 experience points have been obtained." ”

Experience points?

What is it? Li Ze hurriedly asked Cairo-kun.