After a pause, Li Ze said in a leading manner: "Dragon Ball's first words, okay?" ”

"Good!"

"Dragon Ball first word, is it bad?"

"Very poor!"

"From the point of view of the absolute quality of the work, the first episode of Dragon Ball is really good! This level of comics, coupled with the strong strength of Foot River, is definitely a frequent visitor to the first place on the hot list, and the sales champion is like a bag to pick up things! ”

"However, the first episode of this Dragon Ball is still far from my goal and my expectations!"

"My ideal Dragon Ball is to become a global pop and a super-palace-level manga that has been growing for decades!"

"My goal is not just to win a few domestic sales championships."

"The Dragon Ball I want is to be the first in the country, the forefront of history, and popular worldwide. To put it a little more vulgarly, I want to use this Dragon Ball to make myself a billionaire. ”

"And I feel that the current level of this Dragon Ball is not up to my standards."

After listening to Li Ze's somewhat arrogant speech, everyone fell into thinking, if the goal of Dragon Ball is upgraded from the annual champion manga to the palace-level manga that will leave a name in history.

If you want Dragon Ball to completely crush the competitors of the same period. Popular all over the world.

Well indeed, it doesn't seem to be enough at the moment......

But then again, whether a comic will be popular or not, you can guess in advance. After all, some comics, with plot, production, and publicity, can at least keep a small fire.

But it seems difficult to determine whether a manga can become popular all over the world.

Even if you draw a super comic, you don't dare to say that it will become popular all over the world, right?

So Tianniu asked with some doubts: "The script of Dragon Ball was personally presided over by Mr. Li, and it is very exciting and detailed. Shouldn't the problem be in the plot? ”

Yuzi also said: "Brother shrimp and Xiaomi, there has been a lot of progress in painting skills, I think this Dragon Ball painting skills are full of content, and it shouldn't be a problem in painting skills, right?"

"Is it a lack of character portrayal? Or is it a question of the rhythm of the overall character? ”

Li Ze smiled and shook his head, "What everyone said is very good, but it's not what I'm not satisfied with." ”

In fact, what Li Ze wants to say has a little to do with painting skills, but it is not pure painting skills.

"Storyboard!"

Li Ze pushed the glasses frame that didn't exist on the bridge of his nose, and said sharply: "There is only one problem, the storyboard is not palace level enough!" ”

"Great work, there should be great storyboards."

Storyboard, also known as storyboard, refers to the use of charts to illustrate the composition of images.

In comics, storyboards play the role of "interpreters", which is intended to show the sequence, perspective, connection, fiction and reality, atmosphere and other elements of the comic plot story.

A good storyboard can make the reader read very easily, naturally and immersively.

If it is used to describe it, it is equivalent to an author, he has a wonderful story in his heart, and his words and sentences are also very skillful and gorgeous, but if you can't organize the text and performance rhythm, no matter how good the plot and writing, it will be empty talk!

As a serious and hard-working cartoonist, the storyboard of the Xiami brothers and sisters is actually very good, and among cartoonists of the same age, it is definitely the king level.

But who are they comparing?

It is the manga artist Akira Toriyama, who claims to be the second oldest in the history of the island nation!

Dragon Ball, a manga, can stand out among the manga and achieve epic success, but not only because of the bloody comedy and plot.

Akira Toriyama's storyboard level and smooth storyboard processing!

It's almost unbelievable!

Dragon Ball can be seen very smoothly from beginning to end, whether it is a literary drama or a martial arts drama.

This silky smoothness is a great reading experience that makes the reader feel very comfortable.

For example, when you see this picture, you make up what the next picture should be, and the result is that he will only be better than your brain, the splitting, distance, and details of the shot are quite good, and this kind of thing can be best reflected in martial arts.

When readers read comics, even if it is just a static dialogue chat, it can form a picture in their minds, which makes the reader's brain very enjoyable.

In the battle scenes, the attacks are fist-to-flesh, the moves are simple and clear, and the sense of power and explosiveness is full. After reading a few manga of Dragon Ball, readers can easily make up the complete battle scenes in their minds.

Compared with Akira Toriyama's storyboard, the storyboard of the shrimp brothers and sisters is still far behind!

Of course, in addition to the smooth and refreshing storyboard, Akira Toriyama also pays great attention to the grasp of details, every movement, every posture and expression will fit the identity and mood of the character: the noble tsundere prince Vegeta, the optimistic Goku, the energetic Boomer, the sexy No. 18, and the bewildered passerby......

This is also what the shrimp brothers and sisters lack.

"The quality of our Dragon Ball, the quality of the storyboard can only be said to be mid-to-high-grade, but if you can't draw a palace-level storyboard, then you will be ashamed of Dragon Ball and Toriyama!"

"Uh...... Who is Akira Toriyama? ”

Realizing that he had slipped his mouth, Li Ze covered his mouth and said, "Well, it's a cartoonist who has recently been said to be Jiang Lang's talent, but don't care about these details." ”

At Li Ze's request, Brother Shrimp took Xiaomi to work overtime crazily, struggling for seven consecutive working days to re-screen the comics.

The amount of work is so great that it's almost equivalent to redrawing the first sentence.

But the hard work is also worth it, this time the storyboard pays more attention to fluency and reading experience on the basis of the original.

In order to confirm the re-storyboard of Dragon Ball, so that readers can read it without difficulty, Li Ze deliberately drank a few more glasses of wine.

That night, Li Ze drank too much, took Xiaomi's hand, and talked nonsense.

While talking nonsense, Li Ze was also very dutiful and did not forget his work, and despite the trouble of alcohol, Li Ze read the first word of the entire Dragon Ball in one go!

Read it all in one sitting! There are no reading difficulties whatsoever!

This kind of refreshment is definitely a kind of enjoyment at the pinnacle level of life.

Even though his mind was a little confused, Li Ze, who had drunk too much, confirmed the good news, that is, the new Dragon Ball, which can be regarded as truly born!

Early the next morning, Li Ze threw himself into work again.

The first thing is to use the system to check the attributes of the first episode of Dragon Ball that has been re-storyboarded.

And this time, the nuclear bomb exploded!

The previous Dragon Ball, the attributes were: 309 drawing skills, 355 characters, 401 plots, and 198 personalities.

And now in the first episode of Dragon Ball, the attributes are directly exploded: 679 painting skills, 555 characters, 401 plots, and 498 personalities!

Draw skills directly doubled!

Personality is directly doubled!

The plot hasn't changed, but the characters have also soared by 200 points!

While Li Ze exclaimed the BUG, he also guessed in his heart the reason why the attribute was so explosive.