A description of the plot confusion

I'm sorry for that, because when I was writing the novel, I just thought the first few chapters were interesting, so I uploaded it. I didn't fully consider the plot later, for the whole novel, I only had a general idea of the trend, and I was really clear about the general direction, but the problem was how to push the plot in the direction I wanted.

Every time I write a new chapter, I worry about how to expand the volume from an abstract sentence to fill a volume of 40 chapters. As you can see from the number of the first volume, I failed. I have no experience with this, and I don't know how to move the plot forward.

Ridiculously funny, I was naïve enough to think that I could conceive a world just by imagining it. But even the simple question of space and time made me anxious, and I didn't know what the effective distance of their attack should be, although I checked it, but to no avail. I don't know how fast these are literally and how long it should take to get from Ebben-Emir to Liège. These are very small details, but they are enough to affect the novel.

The whole first volume I wrote was very confusing, because I was trying to expand the Els Conference to 40 chapters, but the truth was that I couldn't describe the confrontation so hard that I couldn't even write three chapters. So there are a lot of chapters that seem to have nothing to do with the plot, or some foreshadowing that I may forget about later.

After removing some chapters and some foreshadowing that I don't even know the role of in the first volume, the plot is also very simple. It was Sukhbaatar who crossed into the world of this ship girl, and then ran out of her base because of Xiao Luo's relationship, but was accidentally attacked by the deep sea on the way to England, and accidentally caught Eugen by fishing on the wreckage of the deep sea, but because Eugen was unidentified, he was arrested while passing through France, and then it was an emergency meeting to discuss the legitimacy of similar ship mothers. After that, it's time for the second volume of the story.

Oh yes, for the weird country names, what Ingilia, Farrancy, América, Sauvier, etc., it's all because I think too much。。。。。。

In the rest of the story, I tried to better integrate the timeline issues. But I won't change the timeline that has been chaotic, such as the plot of the Celestial Empire (which should have happened before France), I really don't know how to write it, and I can't let Yuzheng keep playing soy sauce.