Chapter 7 Piao's Journey Uploaded
Qi Chen created a novel, finished lunch, and coded words for four hours in the afternoon, a full ten chapters.
"This level is high, and the hand speed is so much faster."
Qi Chen sighed with emotion, and released ten chapters in one breath.
System: Release Tasks [Compete for the first place in the list of newcomers and new books]
Please check it out in the Task Manager.
Qi Chen is too lazy to complain, this online game, every time he asks for the first, sooner or later he will be killed.
Come back after dinner and look at the data.
Collection: 10.
"That's too little. There are more than 200 new books on the list. ”
Although Qi Chen knew that the number of words in the new book issue was not much, he couldn't accept this collection.
"Add a group of authors to learn from the scriptures."
Qi Chen searched for the author group on the Internet and quickly found a starting point to hit the street group.
Qi Chenbao applied for the title of the book, and soon passed the request to join the group.
"Welcome to the newlyweds"
"Women's photos, men's chrysanthemums"
"Don't make trouble, don't scare newcomers."
As soon as Qi Chen entered the group, he saw this pile of information, and he wondered if he had entered the wrong group.
"Hello everyone, my pen name is Wen Zhaogong, and I just released a new book [Piao Miao Journey] at the starting point, welcome to everyone's poisonous tongue."
Qi Chen typed with a smile, as a fat house, the Internet was like water to fish to him.
Suddenly, the group was silent, it should have been to test the poison.
Half an hour later
"You should be a newcomer, Wen Copyist."
A person with the screen name [Starting Point No. 1 Street] replied.
"Yes, you don't need to call me Wen Copy, just call me Chenzi (blush)"
Qi Chen typed.
The first point of departure hit the street: "Then it's no wonder, then I have a few comments for you." ”
"Big you're talking about."
"In my opinion, there are at least three major problems with your article."
The starting point of the first street is called Luo Zhen, and he has been in the mixed network literary circle for three or four years, and he has already had a book into the boutique, and everyone in the group likes to call him Luo Shen, and he usually likes to help newcomers in the group.
Hearing that there were three major questions, Qi Chen was a little unconvinced in his heart. Although he had never written an online article before, he had been reading online articles for six or seven years.
"The first question,Just your update,You should have saved the draft.,It's only the first day of posting today.,You directly uploaded ten chapters at once.。 This is very wasteful. First of all, you upload it all at once, and it can only appear once in the update list. You're still in the new book period, and you haven't signed a contract, and you can't see too many readers if you don't have a recommended update. What's more, you update so much at once. As soon as the reader saw that the data was still so bad after ten chapters, he gave up directly. ”
Roselle said.
Qi Chen thought in his heart, and it was indeed a great god. It's really like this, let's just say that he used to read novels, and books with less than one million words would never be read.
"The second question is the title of your book. Piao Miao's journey, the name, makes the reader completely confused. And it's also very literate. Now it's almost all the world of Xiaobaiwen. Your topic of literary youth will not be too acceptable to the market. ”
Roselle continued.
"The third problem is the issue of the three golden chapters, although it is not necessary to abide by the three golden chapters. But you have a big poison spot in the first chapter, you don't find it. ”
Qi Chen was stunned by what he said, and couldn't help but ask.
"Yes?"
"You see, your first chapter is the betrayal of brothers, and the woman being green. These are the three taboos. ”
Roselle finally noted.
"Thank you for your guidance, although I feel that the three points you said are very reasonable, but I still want to try it in my own way."
Qi Chen humbly thanked him, but his situation was different, not to mention this update, he was completely transcribing it in his head. After that, the speed is faster, and twenty or thirty chapters a day are normal.
And the title of the book is not a problem, you know, the word [ethereal]. It is precisely the true meaning of cultivating the truth, cultivating a true self that is at ease, pure and free.
"Well, I'm just giving advice, the text is still yours, you make your own decisions."
Roselle replied.
"Ha, Roselle has greatly helped newcomers."
"Sure enough, it's Roselle, this comment is really to the point, I just felt something was wrong when I saw it, but I couldn't say it."
"Newcomers have time to change it, Roselle's comments are very accurate."
Qi Chen smiled slightly, feeling that everyone in the author group was very kind.
"Thank you Roselle, thank you for your big comments, I'm going to eat first, let's talk!"
Qi Chen turned off the buckle and prepared to code out the first big plot as soon as possible.
Nothing was said all night.
It's almost the New Year. Qi Chen plans to get the new book on the right track as soon as possible during this time.
During the day the next day, Qi Chen updated another ten chapters, but this time he used his witty use to automatically release chapters, releasing them once an hour.
It wasn't until noon that he walked out of the room to brush his teeth.
"Qi Chen, when you come back from this holiday, you will hide in the room and sleep every day, and you won't help when the New Year is about to come."
Li Yue'e couldn't help but nag.
"Okay, Mom, what's going on in the afternoon."
"Your dad too, it's almost the New Year, and he still works outside all day, so he can't take a few days off. I'll do the rest. Your sister took the high school entrance examination in the first half of this year, and you are a college student, go teach her. ”
Li Yue'e said.
"Mom...... Just like my sister, where did I teach! What's more, I'm an art student, and cultural classes are not my specialty. ”
Qi Chen thought of Tong Xinyu, who looked like a gothic loli on the outside, and didn't know what devil lived in his heart, and said with a headache.
"If you want to go, you will go, no matter how art students are. Can't teach junior high school students? Get out of here! ”
Li Yue'e glared at him.
Qi Chen came to the living room. Tong Xinyu quietly wrote her homework on the coffee table.
Dressed in a black gothic loli outfit with a skull ornament around her neck.
"Tong Xinyu, what's not going to happen? Mom told me to teach you. ”
Tong Xinyu raised her head, and a sneer appeared on her porcelain doll-like face.
"Huh!"
Qi Chen's head is full of black lines, this bear child is really angry.
He lowered his head and looked at Tong Xinyu's test paper.
"Oh my God, don't tell me, you're doing this math."
Qi Chen was dumbfounded, this kid was much more talented than he was at the beginning. She filled all the blanks, still in the order of one, two, three, four. Multiple choice questions are directly filled in ABCD.
Tong Xinyu's face was slightly red. Hurry up and cover the test paper.
When he raised his head, a pair of good-looking eyes widened, and the blood bar on his head became more and more pink.
Qi Chen knew that she was shy.
But the next moment, Qi Chen's face changed.
"What mortal wisdom!"
Tong Xinyu sneered.
"Whoever dies in this family, I won't teach it."
Qi Chen shook his face and slipped into his room.
Tong Xinyu stared at Qi Chen's back inexplicably.
in the room.
Qi Chen suddenly felt the pocket phone vibrate slightly.
"Hey, who are you?"
Seeing that it was an unknown number, Qi Chen thought about it and connected it.
"Hello, is it Mr. Qi Chenqi?"
"I am, who are you?"
Qi Chen was puzzled.
"I'm Li Bin, I saw it at your company's annual meeting, and I want to buy your song!"
"Li Dada, I remember making it clear that I won't sell that song."
Qi Chen was a little displeased.
"Mr. Qi, I think you misunderstood, I invited you to participate in the talent show [Super Idol] talent show held by Kyoto Lexiang Media Company, are you willing to participate?"
Li Bin said.
"Talent show? Why did Li Dada invite me? ”
Qi Chen didn't understand.
"Haha, Qi Chen, don't be modest, I understand your strength, I think it's too wasteful for you not to develop on the road of music. By the way, I also invited Liang Tian from your company. ”
Li Bin gave Qi Chen a small hand.