Although he was happy to hear these words, Kaoru Miyazono insisted on seeing what Arima Xiandong had written, rather than wanting to hear the stories he dictated.

"I can help you take a look at it then, after all, as a genius girl, I can also help you check it!" Kaoru Miyazono said.

When his girlfriend said this, he didn't speak anymore, but just steered the topic elsewhere.

His girlfriend's words were very warm, and if time permitted, he must be with the girl for a long time.

No, it's a more intimate state than this.

Relying only on video calls, people's lovesickness is difficult to solve.

When ten o'clock came, Arima Xiandong consciously turned off the video call, although both of them were very reluctant.

At this time, Ma Xiandong had time to take out his mobile phone to take a look.

The time it took to hand over the document to Megumi Kamino was also not short, and it stands to reason that the number of words in those lines could be read in half an hour at most.

Kaoru Miyazono wanted to tell his thoughts directly to Arima Xiandong, so he didn't reply by email.

What about Megumi Kamino?

In fact, Megumi Kamino's evaluation was sent when she was chatting with Kaoru. However, at that time, Arima Xiandong was busy talking to Kaoru, so he didn't notice Megumi Kanno's email.

Now when I see the content of the email, there is no doubt that it is all praise.

However, because she is a novice to light reading, Megumi Kanno can't comment on what are the good things in it.

Kaoru Miyazono is the same, although she has already seen some of the Internet, but it is the first time to read lightly.

However, both of them gave good-looking evaluations, which made Arima Xiandong's heart settle down a little.

Even if I knew that the idea would never fail, it was hard to control the nervousness in my heart.

It's like you have a cheating method that no one knows about, and no one will notice it.

But cheating is cheating, no matter how good the psychological quality is, you will always feel a trace of nervousness and a sense of betrayal.

That's pretty much how it feels!

Of course, the evaluation of these two people is only the first level, and they draw conclusions from the perspective of the reader, his girlfriend and sister.

What really needs to be paid attention to is the evaluation of Izumi Masamune and the people on their side.

Especially Yamada Fairy, a best-selling writer of the same age who dropped out of school and stayed at home, the agreement between them, Arima Xiandong has not forgotten.

Agreeing to someone else on a condition is not something to be happy about, no matter how you look at it.

Even if the Yamada goblin doesn't have too bad intentions, Arima Xiandong also feels that something is wrong.

After all, I have seen other people's clothes and fruits.

Although it wasn't intentional, but seeing it was seeing it, and Ma Xiandong didn't want to quibble.

I saw someone's clothes and fruits, and then I was in that kind of performance that I didn't care about.

Girls must be annoyed! Then, no amount of use of that condition is too much.

However, Arima Xiandong also wants to be wronged.

If he doesn't look indifferent, do you want him to show a hentai infatuation?

This way things can get worse.

In general, no matter how Arima Xiandong behaves, he can't escape the concern of the Yamada fairy.

Being remembered by a beautiful girl like this, Arima Xiandong is also under a lot of pressure in his heart.

Sighing slightly, Arima Xiandong took out his mobile phone and sent an email back to Megumi Kanno, thanking him for comments and support.

Megumi Kamino is also a second return, and at the same time expressed a strong expectation for the follow-up story, and wants to see the plot development in the back immediately.

Arima Xiandong hesitated slightly, then agreed, saying that when he finished writing the first volume, he could let her read it first.

However, he didn't forget to tell Megumi Kanno not to show it to others, because his book was the first step to make a name for himself!

If there is a series of troubles because of the leakage of content, Arima Xiandong will also feel very upset.

After reining in his mind a little, Arima Xiandong began to check the emails sent by Izumi Masamune and others.

"Arima-kun, you're a genius! It's a great way to connect dating with a big event that saves the world! Especially the setting of this first elf, I love it! If the follow-up plot is written, please be sure to show it to me!! Please! ”

Of course, there is also a downside, and that is the problem of writing. I think Arima-kun also realized it, otherwise he wouldn't have asked me for advice. Rest assured! I will definitely do my best to help you, and I will definitely not put this excellent work to shame! ”

This is the evaluation of Izumi Masamune, and only he, a good old man, would be so enthusiastic about Arima Xiandong, whom he just met.

"Arima-san, yours are very good! I want to see the following, but there are some places that read weirdly. It's here、、、 and here、、、 if you can change it, it will definitely be more comfortable to read. I also know about you, and I give full marks in terms of creativity, but when it comes to writing, I still need a lot of practice! ”

This is an email from Tomoe Takasago in reply, which is very polite and to the point.

Arima Xiandong naturally thanked him, and told the other party that his bet this time was to improve his writing style and writing.

Although I haven't met Tomoe Takasago himself, it can be seen from these words that he is also a very good person.

Takasago Tomoe is also a professional, and her family runs a bookstore after all, so her opinion is very important to Arima Xiandong.

Izumi Saki also sent an email, "Look at it! I love it! If there's a need for illustration in the future.,Well, I mean, if it's really possible.,I can、、Can I draw your illustrations? I'm amazing! ”

The girl's response made Arima Xiandong very happy.

Because I didn't see the figure of Izumi Sawu today, Arima Xiandong thought that Izumi Sawu's opinion would be conveyed through Izumi Masamune, but I didn't expect her to add her email address directly.

It seems that the girl really likes to look down on it.,That's why I took the initiative to draw some illustrations for it when I saw excellent works.。

However, the true level of the girl's illustration is not clear to Arima Xiandong, so he did not agree immediately.

Instead, tell the other person that the next time I go to her house, look at her work before making a decision.

For a light, illustration is very important.

This is equivalent to a natural beauty, if you can also wear makeup, it will directly become the existence of the city.

But if you don't know how to wear makeup, your beauty will drop by several levels.

Therefore, the illustrations of "The Covenant War" must also be carefully considered, and you can't just make promises to others.

Izumi Sawu also understands this, and she is not entangled, she believes that as long as Ma Xiandong sees her work, she will definitely not refuse.

My drawings are amazing!

It's the confidence of being an illustrator.

And now, only Yamada Fairy has not sent her evaluation, although it doesn't matter anymore, Arima Xiandong has already won.

Thank you for the reward of 100 starting coins from the book friend 'Fuhuang', thank you for your support!!