"In general, it just can't be on the stage."

Pudding, no, it's a ghost.

The ghost said with a straight face:

"I think that's a matter of course, because you haven't been to the final selection of the Newcomer Award, and of course it's impossible to reach the level of publication, so it stands to reason that our conversation here is based on an impossible premise."

Every word of the pudding made the black cat's already weak and thin body tremble lightly again.

"I don't know which one of the publishers you asked to get you to skip the pre-trial and put it in front of us, but it would be a big mistake to want to have special treatment by relying on your relationship like this."

In the fragile body and mind of the black cat, the ghost continues to play the role of a cruel abuser:

"If this can be easily passed, wouldn't it be too rude for the others who participated in our publishing house newcomer award?"

“...... I'm sorry. ”

The black cat lowered its head and whispered an apology.

Hearing this, Luo Tianshu's head became bigger.

This guy seems to have been cheated because of my relationship.

Skipped the pre-trial, ?

In this way, most of the black cats sent it in their own name, right? Although there are only a handful of people in the publishing house who know him, he has been "educated" by Kuroda and knows that the owner of the publishing house is a Chinese.

I'm afraid that the pre-review editor is one of them.,That's why I passed it by mistake.,But the final review editor turned out to be a "newcomer" from the deneki library.。

Is that why this conversation as a whole looks so strange?

The other editors gave the problem to the "newcomer" Pudding because they were worried about the complicated relationship, and Pudding did not know the specific situation although he saw some clues, so he could not hesitate to give the black cat a heavy "verdict".

Although there is no big change in terms of results, Luo Tianshu is still a little unhappy to let the black cat carry the black pot for himself for no reason.

But having said that, he can't explain everything now, otherwise wouldn't this guy's efforts so far be in vain?

"It's only one time to rely on relationships, so the next part is the content part."

The pudding's stern gaze made the black cat embarrassed, her closed lips slightly pale, and she couldn't say anything.

“...... Some of the dialogues between the characters are interesting, but they are limited to the fun level. ”

Pudding flipped through the photocopy of the manuscript, and unlike Luo Tianshu's copy, the copy he had had parts marked with a bright red pen.

To put it bluntly, almost an entire page has his mark.

Are these all "problems"?!

Luo Tianshu was a little incredulous, although he could also see that there were a lot of problems with the black cat, but so much was a bit too much!

How long does it take to get all said and done?

No, the question now is, if you say all of this, will the black cat really be able to accept it?

The pudding editor taps his pen on the A4 paper with a clattering sound.

"First of all, there's the question of setting, there are so many settings to add, of course, it's not a bad thing to add a novel setting in itself, but for you, you can't use it skillfully, so the result is that it doesn't make sense except that the composition becomes long and complicated."

“......”

The black cat's body trembled, and the pudding's last words pierced her soul like a sharp sword, but it was far from over.

"The description is too exaggerated, to put it bluntly, this is infinitely close to pure YY, to be honest, this level of original manuscript, I doubt that it can pass the second review, this is a pretty bad work, there is still a long way to go before it can be sold."

Hearing Pudding's harsh, even harsh evaluation, the black cat's face turned incomparably pale, and she clung to the corner of her clothes, as if this was the only way to keep her from escaping.

In the face of this kind of evaluation, which is almost negative from beginning to end, the black cat can still refute it quietly at first.

For example, "I prepared the setting here to highlight the strength of the characters...... but it was immediately edited by Pudding as "a meaningless setting just adds to the difficulty of the reader's reading." This argument was dismissed.

Slowly, the black cat couldn't say a word, and she could only keep a shivering look, struggling to support herself under the cruel words of the pudding editor.

Judging by the thickness, their discussion process has not exceeded a tenth, but the black cat has collapsed.

Luo Tianshu closed his eyes gently, he had no doubt that if he continued to wait, this guy would definitely be able to cry out by the ghost here.

He stretched out his hand and slammed it on the table, not loud or small, just enough to interrupt the pudding's editing.

“...... Can I help you? ”

The pudding editor shifted his gaze to Luo Tianshu's body, and there was no disgruntled expression on his face.

Luo Tianshu raised his eyebrows, shrugged his shoulders and said:

"It's nothing, but I think your evaluation is too much? The subject is just a high school student. ”

"Since she is the one who aims to become a family and comes to the publishing house with the manuscript, I judge that I can treat her with the same attitude as a writer, which is a sign of respect for a creator."

"I don't deny your point of view."

Glancing at the black cat whose eyes were still godless, Luo Tianshu pouted and said:

"But is that what you call respect to make all of a person's efforts worthless?"

Looking down at the red stains in front of him, the pudding editor said unhurriedly.

"Effort is the inevitable process of achieving results, but the results of failure cannot be covered up by the brilliance of the process."

What about standard editorial thinking.

Sighing, Luo Tianshu made the last effort:

"Wouldn't it be too arbitrary to use the word failure so quickly? I think that even if your work has failed, she has a shining point, and she is successful in one aspect or another. ”

“......”

After a moment of silence, the pudding editor said lightly:

“...... Here is the publishing house. ”

In just one sentence, his position was explained, and at the same time, all the words of opposition from Luo Tianshu were blocked.

"Any questions?"

"No, it's nerve-wracking, you're so right, I have nothing to refute."

"So ......"

"Hey, Ghost."

Interrupting the pudding editor, Luo Tianshu suddenly said a digression:

"You misunderstood just now, I and this guy are not boyfriend and girlfriend, today, I am here as this guy's brother."

“...... So what? ”

"In terms of evaluation, all your actions can be justified in your capacity as a 'publisher editor', and I admit that I have nothing more to say, but-"

As soon as the words turned, in the surprised gaze of the black cat, Luo Tianshu's hand lightly pressed on her head:

"As this guy's older brother, I have a word I have to say."

As he spoke, Luo Tianshu cocked his legs, hung his eyes, and glared at the other party with a completely bad expression and said:

"Hey-you guy! Bullying my sister like this, do you want to fight—ah——?! ”