Original text –

The excitement in my heart could not be subsided for a long time, and it lasted for several hours.

The sky gradually appeared red, a few birds flew by, the sunset and the lonely bird flew together, and the autumn water grew together in the sky. ”

Add a paragraph in between.

The present text——

The excitement in my heart could not be subsided for a long time, and it lasted for several hours.

Of course, since the research on immortal reincarnation is still in the experimental stage, I have to say that the personality of the soul of the earth may also have affected the personality of Orochimaru. People's minds change according to knowledge, experience, and accidents, and perhaps, philosophically speaking, Orochimaru's "self" has also changed.

However, Orochimaru is not worried about this.

Philosophically, as long as the ids and superids do not change, then he remains him.

The sky gradually appeared red, a few birds flew by, the sunset and the lonely bird flew together, and the autumn water grew together in the sky. ”

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A description of the "id, ego, superego" was added.

It's not about changing the setting, it's about rounding out the character settings.

This is a psychological, or philosophical, concept, from the famous psychologist Sigmund Freud.

"Id" refers to the subconscious thoughts, representing the most primitive and instinctual desires of people, similar to hunger, anger, **, etc. For example, if a person is frigidity (physiological), this will not change even if he suffers from schizophrenia. Replaced by Orochimaru in this book, "My self remains the same" is simply to accept the memory of the traverser, even if there are many girls in this book who like him, and he has become a heartthrob star, he will not miss any girl.

The "ego" refers to the primary consciousness that is responsible for dealing with things in the real world. For example, people's habits, specialties, hobbies, and behaviors are all self-expressions. Replacing Orochimaru in this book, he is still passionate about researching science. However, due to accepting the memories of the time-traveler, his "self" will undergo some changes, for example, his behavior and habits will begin to be interested in movies and entertainment industry (mainly this, some people always complain and are more annoying), his knowledge and experience will be richer than in the past, and there will be some subtle changes in his behavior.

The "superego" refers to the judicial branch of the personality system that is responsible for morality. It is composed of people's moral law and self-ideal, and can be simply divided into two levels: "ideal" and "conscience", in which both self-ideal and social ideal are included. Replaced by Orochimaru, "the superego does not change", in simple terms, it means that his ideal goal in the past will not change, that is, the goal of "changing the world" deduced in my book.

OK, I added a few words a little bit and rounded out the character setting.

In fact, there is no need, the article is very clear: vision and thought are linked, people will not remain the same, accept the memory and knowledge of the earth, Orochimaru must have changed.

But there are always readers who ignore these descriptions, or don't recognize the author's way of writing, really, too much. I have to face a lot every day, a lot of complaints about how this book is Orochimaru, and the pressure is too great. Of course, many readers have advised me not to pay attention to these opinions and write according to my own ideas. This is true, but this is the case with online essays, or literature, if you write "no teacher", readers may not admit it. Once there are more people like this, what kind of mountains will be formed?

Think about it, it's one person who writes a book, but you have to deal with so many people...... Maybe those who have written books will have this experience.

Whether it's fans or black fans, the pressure is great. I'm afraid that if I don't write well, I will be complained about again.

I thought about it, and the reader doesn't admit it, and a more "pretending" version may be needed......

So I added a more popular concept of philosophical psychology.

In this way, the character setting is "famous".

Regarding the setting of Orochimaru, in fact, there is a metaphor in the first two chapters.

The Barnum effect, people often think that a general, general description of personality reveals their own characteristics very accurately, and when people use some common, vague, and broad adjectives to describe a person, the person tends to easily accept these descriptions and think that what the description says is themselves.

Commenting on his performance, Shawman Barnum's famous acrobat said he was popular because the show included ingredients that everyone loved, so he made "every minute someone get scammed."

Readers' impressions of Orochimaru are also like this. Readers will only go to places where they like Orochimaru, and they can only see where they see Orochimaru manifest.

As a reader of the Hokage, therefore, I can only write my own Orochimaru, and analyze this character as comprehensively as possible, but I can't write Orochimaru that every reader wants. The big snake pill in this book, there are thoughts, knowledge, feelings, and some warmth, this is my big snake pill.

What I hope is that readers will think of this book as a "novel" and not just a "fan fiction". There's no point in focusing all your attention on a few settings.

I think, in novels, it's important to write about feelings.

Well, Rory said it again.

The update is slow, it's quite slow, and it's not very good in the web article. A reader once said that he heard an author say that if you don't have 6,000 words a day, it's not a matter of ability, it's a matter of attitude.

Speechless...... But I still want to refute it.

Attitude and updating the word count really don't matter.

For example, I wrote this single chapter, almost 2,000 words, and it took me less than half an hour.

But for the same number of words, in a novel, I might have to write for two or three hours. Because I'm writing a book, I want to put emotions into it.

The main character I wrote about is Orochimaru, but I'm not Orochimaru myself. If you can't write emotions, isn't a 2,000-word text just like garbage? This is the main reason, and there are some reasons, such as checking information and condensing private goods...... Yes, there are a lot of "private goods" in this book, in fact, "private goods" are a way for the author to express his emotions in the novel through the characters.

That's a lot to say, let's all laugh and take a look.