At half past five, Sun Jing finished all the scenes in the script.

It took an hour and a half, and Sun Jing finally went through all the clips.

At this moment, Sun Jing felt that she was about to collapse from exhaustion, she sat on the side, and drank water regardless of her image.

The notepad in Mr. Huang's hand was already full of two pages, and he picked out a lot of problems about Sun Jing's performance.

Of course, this is also related to Sun Jing's lack of special training, and most of the problems are small problems that can be solved quickly. Mr. Huang believes that under his guidance, although Sun Jing cannot reach the level of a professional actor within a month, it is more than enough to perform this stage play well.

After Mr. Huang told Sun Jing about his thoughts, Sun Jing, who had already realized his shortcomings, gladly accepted the other party's proposal.

Putting the performance aside, Mr. Huang moved the stool, and in the face of this river fire, he pointed out a fatal problem.

"At first, I thought there was no problem with the script, but after watching your performance, I felt that this script had a fatal problem, and if it was not solved, it would have a huge impact on the whole show."

Teacher Huang said seriously, and the four people present also had serious faces.

"The storyline of the script has a fatal problem." Teacher Huang's gaze swept over the four people, and finally fell on Jiang Huo's body, he said in a deep voice: "You want to make it clear in the form of a stage play in 1.5 million words, this is simply impossible, you know this matter in your heart, so you have listed the important scenes in the whole book, and composed the entire stage play......" Teacher Huang said this, he paused, took a deep breath, and then continued: "But! You only singled out the roles of the three main characters, and many of the characters who promoted the plot did not appear...... Jiang Huo, don't you think that if the whole stage play is interpreted in the way in the script, is there something missing? ”

Although Jiang Huo clearly marked in the script that all plot transitions were presented in the form of narration and VCR, Mr. Huang still felt that this method was a little inappropriate. In the entire stage play, there are only four actors, of course, strictly speaking, Zhao Xuan can't be regarded as an actor! It's so hard to hold up an entire stage show with only three lead actors!

"What do you mean, Mr. Huang?" Jiang Huo took a deep breath and asked in a low voice without emotion.

"My suggestion is to increase group performances to make the whole stage play more fulfilling." Mr. Huang poked the notepad in his hand with the tip of his pen and said, "With the group performance, although it will increase the time of the stage play, but for the three of you, the pressure on your body should be reduced a lot, I think, you can think about it......"

However, before Mr. Huang could finish his words, Jiang Huo interrupted, "Is there any other way?" ”

Teacher Huang was not angry, he glanced at Jiang Huo deeply, nodded slightly, and said, "Of course, of course there are other ways." ”

"What is it?" Jiang Huo took out a notebook and pen from his backpack before Teacher Huang answered. "Mr. Huang, I also have a new idea now, how about the two of us write down our thoughts at the same time and compare them with each other?"

"Jiang Huo." Hearing Jiang Huo's words, Qian Lei immediately glared at her.

Teacher Huang was invited by Qian Lei to help, even if Jiang Huo had an opinion, he just went back to the dormitory and said it slowly, there was no need to point it out on the spot. If there is a stalemate, both sides will not come down to the stage.

"It's okay, I love this way of exchanging ideas."

Teacher Huang smiled and waved his hand, not caring at all.

Actor, singer, teacher, screenwriter, director, writer...... These are the identities of Mr. Huang. In terms of creation, Mr. Huang always has his own ideas, and it is precisely because he has written scripts and directed filming that he can better understand Jiang Huo's mood at this moment. As the highest-grossing writer today, Jiang Huo has her own persistence. If the two swapped identities, Mr. Huang believed that if someone pointed out the problem with the work in front of him, his reaction would definitely be more fierce than Jiang Huo.

"I'm starting to write." After Mr. Huang agreed, Jiang Huo picked up the pen and wrote quickly in the notebook.

Hearing Jiang Huo's words, Mr. Huang did not hesitate, and quickly wrote down his thoughts in the draft book.

When the two finished writing and showed each other, the expressions of the two people were very calm.

Jiang Huo and Teacher Huang have almost the same idea.

"You ......" Zhao Xuan didn't know how to say after seeing the idea of the two.

And after Jiang Huo and Teacher Huang saw each other's writing, they both laughed at the same time.

"It seems that I have wasted my talent, why should I be a teacher! I sat at home and wrote it, and maybe I would be the most popular author in the world. When Mr. Huang spoke, his tone was very relaxed.

Jiang Huo also breathed a sigh of relief, she was also worried that she would have serious disagreements with the other party on this issue.

"Since the two of us think the same thing, then this matter is very easy to handle." After Jiang Huo added a name to the list of personnel in the script, he turned his head to look at Zhao Xuan and said, "Zhao Xuan, are you willing to play the role of Tian Ling'er in the stage play?" ”

That's right, since Jiang Huo is unwilling to add too many group performances to promote the development of the plot, but in order for the plot not to stagnate, she took out another supporting actress in the book and wanted Zhao Xuan to participate in the performance!

If Baguio played by Qian Lei and Lu Xueqi played by Sun Jing are the key to the whole book, then the senior sister of Da Zhufeng is the original beauty! This is the protagonist's first love when he was young!

Instead of having a lot of characters mixed in, it's better to highlight the theme of the book directly!

This is the unanimous idea of Jiang Huo and Mr. Huang!

"May I?" Zhao Xuan was a little surprised. From the moment she saw the script, Zhao Xuan actually had her own thoughts in her heart. She also wants to play a role in the show! However, Zhao Xuan didn't know how to open his mouth to Jiang Huo and ask for the role.

Now in the face of Jiang Huo's proposal, Zhao Xuan, who was about to be able to realize his idea, suddenly hesitated again.

"Of course, no problem, I think you're the most suitable person right now."

Jiang Huo directly patted the script and made a final decision: "Okay, that's all for today, I'll go back and rewrite the script, add Tian Ling'er's role, and then see if I want to cut something." ”

Teacher Huang nodded with a smile and said, "I'll take the score back, it's a week long, three days short, and I'll leave the dance to me." ”