Chapter 47: The Great Demon King of the Industry (Part II)

Maeda Jun, that is, the Great Demon King of Maeda, flipped through the printed draft brought by Mo Wangqiu, pondered for a while, and then said to Mo Wangqiu: "The stock market is novel, the writing is good, to be honest, whether it is a galgame or a light novel, it is qualified, but ...... The guy who wrote you the script for the game used to be an animate, right? ”

Umetaro Nozaki said that he was mentored by the first floor of Okochi, a killer in the industry, and the other party was engaged in script writing for TV animation. I can see it at a glance.

"Isn't that obvious? Come, boy, let me tell you what are the differences between the script of the anime and the script of the game. Jun Maeda sighed, looking like he was about to make a tirade.

According to Jun Maeda's description, the script of the anime and the script of the game are two completely different concepts, and although the plot is exactly the same, they are two completely different concepts for the person who wrote the script. To put it simply, for players who play the game, the most important thing in addition to watching the story is to interact with the characters, such as pushing the plot with a mouse click, triggering different endings according to different options, and so on.

A good game script is not only strict about the characters and plot, but also more important in terms of interaction with players, such as whether blind text scrolling will make players feel bored, whether to add some mini-games and the like. There is also dialogue, which is different from animation, in a galgame, the details of the dialogue between characters are often the key to the development of the plot.

This is completely unimaginable in animation, if you think about it, if in an episode of 24 minutes of animation, 18 minutes are characters blowing each other, and the remaining 4 minutes are OPED, who can stand it? (Note)

Jun Maeda pointed out the shortcomings in Nozaki's script very bluntly, maybe he can write an excellent animation script under the guidance of Okochi, but if the script in front of him is made into a game, it is undoubtedly a very painful thing, both for players and production staff.

"You said it was written by your classmate? Peers? Hiss...... Now high school students, let's let your classmates come to me for a while. Maeda Jun was a little amazed, and then looked at Mo Wangqiu seriously: "The next is just a little suggestion from me." Now that you've decided to write such an ending, why don't you add some more joyful elements to the early plot, or even ...... Isn't there a tsundere character here, you can even open a separate route out. ”

"Isn't that okay?" Mo Wangqiu wiped the cold sweat on his head, although the other party was an industry boss and the advice he gave was very pertinent, Mo Wangqiu was still unwilling to destroy the overall tone of the game.

However, it is not impossible to add some daily interactions to the plot in the early stage, after all, the deeper the love and hatred...... Phew, it should be said that the foreshadowing is enough to achieve the effect of deafening.

It's just that these daily plots, how can they be increased...... Mo Wangqiu glanced at Jun Maeda, who was frowning incessantly at the outline, isn't this just a master-level figure? If you can really get Umetaro Nozaki to Jun Maeda's company, even if it is a key apprenticeship, then all the problems will be solved!

"Wouldn't that be a bit of a problem?" Mo Wangqiu smiled very secretly, but he still wanted to be polite.

"Oh, it's okay, I was going to grab a few coolies...... Hmm~ Find a few trainees, when you were introduced by Ryoko, it's no problem to be your own person. Jun Maeda said as he spoke, and after a while he muttered to himself, "This plot development is unexpectedly interesting...... Let's just add it in the next TV anime. ”

"Or don't!"

It's 2009 now, and even if you say that Jun Ma Zhi has almost started writing the animation script of "Angel Beats", Mo Wangqiu doesn't want to see the white school scene played by Otoha, Yuri Nakamura and Angel Rika.

"Okay, the matter is settled, Xiaohui, come over for a while." Jun Maeda smiled, and I didn't know where to put out a nurse's uniform, and placed it in front of Megumi Kato: "Changing this outfit feels like it can bring a lot of inspiration." ”

"Hey, you're enough." Mo Wangqiu hurriedly stopped, and then asked with some doubts: "Mr. Maeda, you and Aunt Ryoko...... Ahem, I mean, between you? ”

For some reason, Mo Wangqiu wanted to buy a hat for Kato Uchihui, to be honest, compared with the young and golden, talented, and able to eat with his face, the little brother-in-law is really a scum with only five combat power.

"Well, it's better for you to ask Ryoko." Jun Maeda also seemed a little embarrassed, and he sighed softly: "To be honest, it was really a bad relationship...... Hey, boy, are you trying to be crooked. How to put it, at first this, then that, and then I received a student card. ”

I always felt that there was a story about the Great Demon King, but seeing that the other party was unwilling to tell it, Mo Wangqiu stopped asking.

looked at the time, after some idle talk, it was almost nine o'clock in the evening, although the Kato couple were not necessarily at home, but Mo Wangqiu still didn't want to go back too late, and finally said a few words to Maeda Jun before leaving.

"That's right." Mo Wangqiu turned around again and looked at Maeda Jun seriously: "Mr. Maeda, please take care of your body and take this opportunity to rest more...... Do you do a full body check-up or something? ”

"Tsk, you're a little long-winded, boy." Jun Maeda waved his hand impatiently, and then smiled at Megumi Kato: "But I'll accept the kindness, Megumi-chan, see you next time, huh...... This outfit for you? ”

"So why do you hide a nurse's sister's uniform under the bed?"

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When he walked out of the hospital, Mo Wangqiu remembered that he had forgotten to go to the shopping street to get cat food again, and when he thought of cat food, Mo Wangqiu remembered the white-eyed cat again. If you starve that cat to death...... Don't talk about her own little vault, let's just say that under the snow, she will definitely hack herself to death.

I don't know if it's an illusion, the character of Hei Changzhi is easily associated with the word blackening.

"Don't worry, Mom went back in the afternoon." Kato Megumi is not as careless as Mo Wangqiu, she arranged everything at the beginning, and then added very intimately: "Cat food...... In the afternoon, when my mother came back, she also took the invoice to get it back. Do not worry. ”

"Xiaohui, you are such a good secretary." Mo Wangqiu couldn't help but sigh.

“？”

To be honest, Mo Wangqiu didn't expect that he would meet the big demon king of the industry under such a coincidence, and he was lucky to get his guidance to improve the game's script. The next thing is to ask Nozaki Metaro if he would like to go to the Key Club as a trainee.,I don't know if the manga on his side has started.。

"Are you saying I can do an apprenticeship at Key Society? That's great! No problem. Umetaro Nozaki on the other side of the phone seemed excited: "I've been wanting to meet this legendary company for a long time, and I can make a game like Clannad...... Well, it feels like I can pinch him a lot more. ”

Hearing Nozaki Metaro say this, Mo Wangqiu was also relieved, according to the other party's meaning, although he is already a shoujo manga festival that has made his debut, but he will not be able to start official serialization until there is a gap in the serialized work, and even if there is a comic to be cut in half, he will have to wait until the end of the year if he wants to officially serialize.

I really envy the identity of a cartoonist.,I feel like I can make an agreement with a girl of the same age.,When your comics are animated.,The girl will be a voice actor to dub the animation.,And then I'll get married or something.。

Damn, what a winner in life.

"Cousin, you've spoken everything in your heart." Megumi Kato persuaded on the side: "Cousin, you're just an ordinary person, it's better not to think too much, huh...... Mom said that most cartoonists are so busy that they don't even have time to fall in love. ”

"Xiaohui, are you really going to comfort me? I understand the reason, but think that people like Yoshihiro Fujian can marry Naoko Takeuchi and become a winner in life, and I am so unwilling to play mahjong every day without drawing comics! Mo Wangqiu pointed to the jump poster pasted on the bookstore on the side, full of resentment: "The old thief of Fujian has changed again, I can already imagine that the old thief plays mahjong during the day and plays Naoko Takeuchi at night, phew!" ”

"Uh." Kato Megumi didn't know much about this, but she also felt that Mo Wangqiu was very rude like this, so she quickly grabbed his hand and left in a hurry.

And shortly after they left, a pair of junior high school boys and women in the same uniform as Megumi Kato stood in front of the poster arguing about something.

"I said a long time ago, the old thief of Fujian is not so easy to resume the update." The girl with beautiful blonde hair and a double ponytail looked at the word JUPM on the poster with an unwilling face.

"I understand everything." Next to the girl, the male student wearing black-rimmed glasses defended: "But didn't you force me over?" I was asked to pretend I didn't know you at school, and as soon as I got out of school, I was stuck on the way home and said that I wanted to buy this issue of JUMP......"

"Long-winded! What's wrong with letting you play with you once? Don't forget, the signed poster in your room is the one who got you there. The blonde double ponytail looked indignant, and when he came, he glared at the male student with a very dangerous gaze: "I'm really sorry, I disturbed the time for you and my sister to kiss me, hum!" ”

"Ying Lili, did you misunderstand anything, it's all because you didn't let me stop talking to you at school, so I went to discuss this new ...... Don't slap me in the face! Do you use your double ponytail as a weapon? The male student let out a burst of screams.

"Long-winded! It was even called out to sea. The double ponytail girl's voice was a little choked: "Obviously I came first, obviously I came first......"