Written at the end of the second volume
In fact, for this plot in the second volume, the author is really a little angry. In the original setting, Gao Jinlei was a person who was good at criminal psychology and good at portrait painting. He can draw a portrait of a person through the clues left by his behavior, and predict the next move of the other person. So much so that he can be counted in front of Nanxiang at every step. But in the end, due to her own two-facedness, Gao Jinlei was unable to "draw" the true face of Nanxiang, and finally lost.
But in reality, it's not the same thing at all. And when the plot involves very realistic episodes such as gun trading and criminal police roundup, the shortcomings of the author's own bacteria are exposed. One is that his own experience is not enough, and the other is that his description skills are poor, which makes this plot completely unable to go to the route he predicted. And the disadvantage of serial updates is also this, once some events are written in the front, you have to keep writing them later, and you can't go back to the front to dig a small pit, let alone overturn the small pit in front and reset.
For example, in this section of Gao Jinlei's private jet, the original setting, Nanxiang and the others learned that Gao Jinlei's ticket time and the time of his boarding must not exceed four hours, and only in this way can the whole search and arrest be more tense, and the setting that they can only wait for the rabbit at the transfer place is more reasonable. However, because Nan Xiang learned of the existence of the ticket two days in advance (also because the author was too presumptuous when he wrote it, he didn't expect it at all), which made the whole incident drag on, without any tension, and also left the bug of police inefficiency. Although this plot is still full of two incidents, gun trading and kidnapping, which makes this bug not so obvious, it is still more than one step worse than the original plot rhythm.
Of course, in this short fifty chapters, he can write such a story that he is not good at, and the author himself is still quite proud. [Hold your head and roll away]
The story of the second volume [Stranger] ends here, and the third volume is called "The Wanderer".
The timeline of the third volume will be longer, and a lot of unimportant time will be skipped, and it will not be like the first two volumes, such a long plot period, and the timeline has only just advanced by just a few months. The real-world Nanxiang will continue to be entangled with the case in the Liberty River Valley, and this entanglement will be two years. And Nanxiang in the inner world will take Shota Ikoma to Kyoto, and of course he will meet all kinds of big people. When the third volume ends, Nanxiang from both worlds will return to her homeland to continue her journey.
However, the author is going to take a break for a while. The first is because the project has been too busy recently.,It's been so busy that I don't even have time to think about the plot.,The updates during this time are barely coping with the saved manuscript.,As a result, there is no energy to proofread when the manuscript is published.,There is an oolong with duplicate chapter names.。 Second, although there is an outline of the third volume, I am not even clear about the specific context. I don't want to write casually and end up stuck.
In any case, I have been accompanied by everyone during this time, and I am really grateful~ When I take a break for a while and sort out the whole story, I will definitely continue to update.
Well...... Although the average set of 100 is really sad, haha~