"The author is a student of the directing department of a film school, but before writing a review, the author first talks about the book from the perspective of an ordinary book friend."

Is Xiaoao Jianghu a good book?

No!

I can say it out loud for sure, Xiaoao Jianghu is not a good book!

It has a large number of descriptions of scenes, which makes people drowsy, for today's online literature circle, its writing can no longer be described as cumbersome, just ask which online novel will describe the scene characters with 70% of the length of each chapter?

Therefore, Xiaoao Jianghu is not even a novel!

But Xiaoao Jianghu is a very careful script and script sub-shot!

Many book friends have already discovered this, the author of Xiaoao Jianghu [Get Out] The boss is written in the way of film and television drama screenwriters routinely writing scripts and storyboard scripts, as a student of the directing department of the film school, my evaluation of Xiaoao Jianghu is: careful conception, layman's handwriting.

The author is sure that the boss is by no means a graduate of a film school, and he is likely to have been slightly exposed to scripts and the like.

After the book is finished, the author will talk about the content of Xiaoao Jianghu.

Before I talk about it, I would like to talk about a few key points that can make a novel successful.

1. The story arrangement must be appropriate and reasonable. 2. The ups and downs of the plot, looking forward to the high dynasty. 3. Character shaping and planning. 4. It is necessary to have a grand and complete world view.

Any book that can grasp these four points is likely to become a god in one book! But being able to grasp one or two of these points makes the work a fire is nothing.

Xiaoao Jianghu deeply grasped one of the key points: [character building]!

You can think about it, can you find a character as brilliant as Dongfang Undefeated in the book in the online articles, movies and TV series you have contacted?

In the book, the little sister's coquettishness, Ling Hu Chong's free and easy, Ren Yingying's righteousness, the ruthless hero who can do what I do, and the soul of the book, the undefeated peerless double pride in the East, as long as you look into it, the pictures will automatically make up for it.

I even felt that I was watching a movie called "Smiling Proud Jianghu" to write this novel.

That's why his writing style is unique, so his characters have such a strong visual sense!

The above are some of the author's feelings after reading Xiaoaojianghu.

1st floor: a lot of words...... Top first, but don't look at it, look at the comments!

Second floor: The first floor of Lanzhou baked cakes, doesn't it mean that the second floor is yours?

You just talk about his books, and we condemn his character! It's shameful to use illegal means to swipe tickets!

Endorse Upstairs!

Are there any highlights in this book? The whole description has no content at all, anyway, I can't stand it!

Reply to the third floor.,It's not right to say it's a ticket brush.,If you really brush the website, it won't care.,It's ridiculous that the rivers and lakes are still serialized.,Could it be that the data is wrong?

The landlord's bosom friend! But I have to complain that Xiaoao Jianghu is good-looking, but the content of each chapter is too little, every time I get excited, I come out with a blockbuster description of Zhang Fu, which gives me the feeling that my pants are off, you show me this?

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As soon as Tan Ming's post was published, it was drowned out by scolding. However, as one of the few posts with content in the book review area, it is a long review, or it is pushed to the back of the crane, and one or two will disappear from the first page of the book review.

Many people read the post and then the idea of reading the novel seriously, but more people still can't bear to read it.

When Tang Wen finished this month's manuscript and planned to read Qi Jie's novel, he was suddenly jumped by the fierce posture of the Blood Slaughter Book Review.

He took a closer look and understood the ins and outs of the matter, and then realized the seriousness of the matter.

He mingled in this circle and knew what it would be like to be labeled by readers, so after he couldn't get through to the really good hotel, he went out in a hurry.

When he found Qi Jie, Qi Jie was sitting on a green rock at the crosswalk.

The red incubator was placed at her feet, and Qi Jie ate today's lunch while waiting for the traffic light.

She tore off a large piece of bread in one gulp and poured a few sips of water with a "goo-dong-goo-dong".

The posture of eating is wild!

"Qi Jie!"

Just after being busy settling lunch, Qi Jie suddenly heard someone calling her.

She straightened up and looked around, when the green light cleared her way, and the pedestrians waiting outside the zebra crossing swarmed to the opposite side.

"Qi Jie, Qi Jie, Qi Jie!!"

Qi Jie was puzzled.

Did you hear it wrong?

When she got across the road, she saw a pair of hands waving in the crowd.

"Great writer, poof!"

Qi Jie showed a big smile heartily, and then waved at Tang Wen, who had already passed her.

"I'll go!"

Just hearing a foul word from the other side, Qi Jie saw the great writer turn back again, like a headless fly.

"No, look at you sweating profusely, thirsty."

Tang Wen came to Qi Jie, supported his knees with his hands, and gasped for breath.

A bottle of water suddenly appeared in front of him, held by a fair-skinned slender hand.

"Give...... Give me a drink!? There was only half a bottle of water left, and it was clear that it had been drunk by the girl in front of her.

"Well, what's wrong?"

"No ......"

Tang Wen felt hotter for a while, he took the water, hesitated, but couldn't help but say: "If I drink like this, will we be considered an indirect kiss?" ”

Qi Jie rolled her eyes: "Don't drink it, bring it!" ”

"Drink, drink, why don't you drink, I'm dying of thirst."

Qi Jie saw that the great writer drank all the mineral water in one gulp, and said, "How do you think of looking for me at this time, you don't know that I am at work." ”

"By the way, are you really a girl?"

Tang Wen hiccuped and answered the question.

“？？”

"I mean, girls are like that...... Well, it's ...... You know what I mean. ”

Qi Jie thought for a moment and said uncertainly: "Reserved? ”

"Not really, but it's about the same, if other girls were I'd die of thirst, they wouldn't give me a sip of their water."

"Are you interesting to me?"

Qi Jie turned around and left.

"Oops, I'm talking nonsense, don't be angry, don't be angry."

Qi Jie tilted her head to look at him.

Tang Wen gradually did not dare to look at her, and avoided his gaze.

Qi Jie pursed her lips and smiled: "I treat you as a friend, you can just don't treat me as the opposite sex." ”

Tang Wen opened his mouth, he wanted to say that "the friendship between men is all about hooking shoulders and backs", and then put his hand on Qi Jie's thin shoulder.

But he didn't dare.

I can't tell why, it's just the subconscious that gave birth to this idea.

"By the way, great writer, do you have something to do with me?"

"Oh yes, look at my brain."

Tang Wen patted his head.

"Your book has been washed, do you know?"

"......" Qi Jie was confused.

"It's just that your book is scolded miserably..."...... That's how it happened. ”

Qi Jie finally understood what was going on, probably because of some reason, Xiaoao Jianghu was suspected of illegal ticket swiping, and then some people made trouble in the book review area.

"But what does this have to do with me!?"

"What's the matter?"

"That's right."

Qi Jie looked serious and nodded.

"I didn't swipe any tickets in violation of regulations, and now the extra data has been cleared, and I was scolded for some reason, what else do you want me to do?"

"You're going to make a statement! You have to tell those book friends that this matter has nothing to do with you, and then apologize, and you will have nothing to lose. Tang Wen took out the experience he had accumulated and said bitterly.

"Don't!"

Qi Jie shook his head.

"Why?"

"Because I'm not wrong!"

On the street, people come and go. Qi Jie carried a red incubator printed with the words "really good" and stood on the side of the road with a serious and stubborn face.

High-rise buildings, bustling crowds, and traffic...... At this moment, time seems to be frozen, everything around her is changing rapidly, as if it has the attribute of roundness, only she, like a crystal standing still.