016 [Aba's Response]
Eight o'clock in the evening.
Young Master Aba's new work "The Sixth Knife" was officially released on the Frog Chinese Network Martial Arts Channel.
The title of the book has been hanging for several days.,It's just that the official chapter hasn't been uploaded.,It's been a long time coming.,I can search for it.,And only one chapter was posted.γ
Almost at the same time, thousands of rewards smashed to the page of the novel, including more than a dozen alliance leaders, most of the IDs are garbled, and the truth and falsehood are intriguing. Fans in the comment area left a message, clapping and shouting "good-looking", "wonderful", "online legend", "the end of the book must be god" or something.
Soon, the online literature circle heard the news, and writers and readers flocked to watch, wanting to see how much this novel, which is similar to "Sword Pointing to the Sky" in terms of creativity, is really written. Subsequently, some entities also came to join in the fun, glanced at Ah Ba's novel page, hastily read the content of a chapter sent out twice, muttered a few sentences, and then read the comments. Young Master Ah Ba actually doesn't have many fans around his neck, more than 80,000, but since he started the scolding battle with "Sword Pointing to the Sky", the influence of his new book has upgraded several levels.
Not to mention anything else, the question of "whether traditional physical writers can eat well in the online literature circle" is the main factor that attracts these peers to watch. Now that the reading market is sluggish, many students and young people have gotten the domain names of various mysterious websites through some channels, and have gone to watch Jianguo's light novels, H novels and anime. If Ah Ba can open up the market in the online literature circle, it means that as long as those who engage in entities are willing to work hard, they can also be mixed in the online literature circle. At this time, it doesn't matter what kind of literati you have, you have to eat.
People have left a voice, geese have left a name, the Internet is different, these people who are engaged in entities have not left a message. is the same as the down-and-out aristocracy, life is no longer twisted, and her bearing is still very arrogant, and no one wants to be recognized, saying that she is too angry and is investigating this line of work.
The book review area was full of applause, and occasionally one or two expressed doubts and sprayed directly, and when they were refreshed, they disappeared, and if they were refreshed again, they would pop up again or twice, or they were accusing the administrator of deleting comments. At this time, several of Ah Ba's friends, regardless of whether they were around or not, went into battle to help him manage the book review area and delete the banned negative comments and speakers.
However, as time went on, more and more readers poured into the novel pages, and more and more trolls spoke in the book review section, and it was clear that there was a shortage of manpower. The moderator layout design of the frog novel network is primitive and primitive.,If you want to delete a post.,You have to click in to delete it.,You have to click on the ban before deleting it.,There's no batch management.γ Ten hundred can be managed, and tens of thousands are directly confused, and there are a lot of mistakes in deletion and banning.
Ah Ba is locking himself in the room and frantically coding on the keyboard, in the past for a long time in his writing life, he really didn't use much thought on creation, he was enjoying life. Like those students and young people, I got the domain names of various mysterious websites through some channels, and I watched **chasing games or something) in it, which was quite homely.
Before publishing, he saved a manuscript of more than 30,000 words and made an outline, from the beginning to the end, more than 600,000 words, and everything should be written. The problem is that after reading the book "Sword Pointing at the Sky", he was inspired by some inspiration, coupled with the observation and analysis of the comments of netizens in the forum steel bar, so he killed the manuscript he had previously drafted.
In fact, he doesn't know how to write martial arts at all. I only found out after I started writing. The fight scene is too difficult to write, so let's describe and portray it well, the kung fu of a move, it seems like a few minutes have passed when written down, and I don't feel it at all. It's a brushstroke, I don't have that foundation, it looks like child's play. He likes the chivalrous tenderness in martial arts stories. At that time, it was also poisoned by the plot of the female protagonist cuckolding the male protagonist in a martial arts work, and the creative impulse was born.
The original manuscript is a romance story dressed in martial arts. The so-called "sixth knife" in the "hidden box" is nothing more than a flintlock pistol with the appearance of a gun blade. Like those online novels that rely on modern knowledge to crush historical figures, use this setting as a cool point, a good martial arts, just rely on a gun to turn over what southern fists and northern legs, and flirt with the cuties here and there, the overall tone is very relaxed and freehand. Those who follow him and follow him to Frog Network are also audience readers of romance. Originally, he thought that he could still eat by writing this, but after reading "Sword Pointing at the Sky", analyzing the market comments, and reflecting on the history of fighting on the street, Ah Bacai decided to face the problem of the weakness of the fighting scene and seek to change the situation.
If you want to restore the gas of your debut novel, it will definitely not work to follow the old path of romance, you can't support yourself with those thousands of readers, and the online audience doesn't seem to be interested in romance. The bloody fight scenes in "Sword Pointing to the Sky" are worth learning from. The female protagonist in it directly divorced the male protagonist, a group of big men called back and forth, and there were many readers who supported the payment.
Ah Ba carefully studied the writing style of "Sister come and lick my feet", and he found that the fight scenes were not as difficult to write as he imagined, and the reason why he did not write well was because he did not find the right narrative perspective. In "Sword Pointing to the Sky", the fight is a group of onlookers laughing and doubting on the side, and then exclaiming or something, and the whole picture of the fight is immediately plump. Find the right narrative perspective, even if you don't directly describe the fight scenes, the fight scenes can be written well.
Speaking of which, this story is really good-looking, very bloody. Xiao Yan's three views are very positive, although he has been ridiculed, but unless someone deliberately provokes trouble, he generally will not get along with others, the villain Qiu Ji's brother Qiu Ziya is weak and sickly, and if he fights with Xiao Yan, Xiao Yan will keep his hand...... According to this blueprint, it seems that writing a bloody story or something will work.
In the new version of the manuscript, Ah Ba borrowed the style of "Sword Pointing to the Sky", he drew out the small amount of reading in his head, and added a lot of traditional science fiction elements on the basis of the background of the Great Song Dynasty, which can be regarded as science fiction martial arts.
The newly released chapter was written by him in a hurry. I have long had a basic understanding of the rules of online texts, such as fast updates, large amounts of updates or something, and those who are engaged in entity retreat by themselves, not to mention three changes a day, one more must be guaranteed. Looking at the momentum of "Sword Pointing to the Sky", if you want to win the support of more readers in the future, you may have to have two more.
More than 600,000 words, two more than 6,000 words a day, it seems that it can't be sent for a few days......
There are no examples to refer to this problem, and the novel with the largest number of words in the online literature circle is only more than 900,000 words, which largely retains the structural framework of traditional novels. tide, ending, six or seven hundred thousand words is almost over. Unlike Jianguo's side, the most shameless, the protagonist from a small soldier to the supreme god, endless watering, wrote nearly 10 million words.
Ah Ba didn't want to write so long, too tired, but the mechanism of the public chapter of the online article made him very painful, he used to contribute to the magazine, and the longest work was only more than 300,000 words, and it was almost the same to write 30,000 or 40,000 words a month. The rule of online articles, which is free chapters first and then put them on the shelves, makes Ah Ba a little uneasy. It is said that at least 150,000 words will be required, and if the results are not good, it may drag on to 200,000 words. According to the more than 600,000 words he expects to be completed, the paid chapter is only four or five hundred thousand words.
Ah Ba didn't think about the long-term value, he has a very clear understanding of his works, not those famous books, the completion of the manuscript and even the author can create extremely high value for a long time after the death of the author, what he writes, just for entertainment, only during the serialization period, there are readers to pay, and there are few examples of income generation after the completion of the book.
Through reading and thinking about "Sword Pointing to the Sky", he found that this novel should be written at the current pace, and the number of words in the finished book should be more than one million. One million words, printed into a book, are almost half a person tall, how can you write so long?
Ah Ba has a headache, and he still despises the online literature circle, and many problems are still unclear. Maybe he is looking for a senior online writer to chat with and learn from experience, but he has a small social face, and his name is a false name arranged by the magazine, what brokerage company and what team are all spread from the outside, and they don't exist at all, so the difficult brothers and sisters in the same city help each other, and there is no way to connect with those online writers.
In fact, he really wants to talk to "Sister, come and lick my feet", which is a popular figure, the focus of the online literature circle. Inspired by the comments of netizens, he felt that it was really necessary to cooperate with the author or something, stir up the topic, improve the popularity of the work, and achieve a win-win situation. The other party seems to be changing the text, and he didn't mention any plagiarism, he should be the same as himself, an ordinary person who looks glamorous, can hear tens of thousands of people when he says a word, but has not much money in his hand.
Like Ah Ba himself, he released a new book and the whole announcement, which caused heated discussions on the Internet, and the battle was like a king in the world. In fact, almost all of this grand occasion was created by him at his expense and by the navy. It cost more than 20,000 yuan to ask the water army to publicize in the steel bar, and a new chapter was issued at eight o'clock to reward the alliance leader, and ten of the more than ten were paid by himself. The fan preview page shows ten by default, so you have to fill the faΓ§ade. Don't look at his high topicality on the Internet in the past two days, in fact, the living money in his hands is only fifty or sixty thousand, compared with those real social elites, he is a clown who jumps off the beam if he doesn't sound good.
At a quarter past nine, Ah Ba saved the second chapter and pasted a copy into the manuscript box in the author's background. Click on the page of the work and look at it, the data results are OK, the collection is more than 4,000, more than 30,000 readers, which has greatly exceeded the standard of "3,000 collections and 20,000 readings in a single day" that I spent money on. But looking at Yishui's concise comments in the comment area, Ah Ba was a little sad. Real readers and book friends, either don't comment, or give opinions directly, how can he be so sorry for words like gold, this is all his own brush. Those who claim to be his fans, it seems that few of them leave messages in the book review area, did they write poorly, or did they let their friends delete it by mistake?
Doubting one's own talent is a problem that every creator has, and Ah Ba is no exception.
Lifting his glasses and rubbing his temples, Ah Ba was going to relax, he opened the mysterious website, looked at the new preview table on the homepage, and Kiyu sent him a message on DuDu.
"People say they want to scare you, what's the matter?"
On the text message, there is also a link to the live broadcast room.
"I'll take a look first." Eight replied.
Let's broadcast this line of life, Ah Ba also has a little simple understanding, limited by the policy, it has always been the nature of a small fight, no better than the undressing live battle on Jianguo's side, and the broadcast is basically a game.
After the browser automatically popped up the page, Ah Ba was taken aback, there were a lot of barrages in the live broadcast room, a little stuck, and there were as many as 160,000 viewers, ranking first in popularity on the shrimp fighting platform. The anchor is a soft girl, she looks like she is only thirteen or fourteen years old, she appears without makeup, and she looks very beautiful. An orange T-shirt on the upper body, a little skinny, and the bottom? Wearing a short skirt cut short, two white legs on the corner of the table, and black leggings showing a corner, she was talking while tapping on the keyboard and operating the character handover tasks in the game.
The barrage was all shouting that as long as the young lady gave an order, they would collectively set out to level the book review area of "The Sixth Knife" or something, which was quite infuriating and made Ah Ba a little nervous.
The soft girl looked not very interested, lazily playing the game, her eyelids were half-drooping, her eyes seemed to be big, and she replied to the audience without a word.
"What are you doing to such extremes?"
"It's to be scared. But we need to fight, not fight. β
"What do you say when you go to someone's place, isn't it, people have to be quality."
"Doesn't he have a lot of readers to reward the alliance leader? It should be on the sales list, if you want to help my friend get angry, you can go and give a reward, right? β
"I'll set an example and reward a silver league, okay."
Soft girl said, open the favorites in the browser, enter the "Sword Pointing to the Sky" page, reward, recharge, bang, one million frog coins shot.
Hachi felt his heart shrink sharply.
The soft girl said with a lack of interest: "...... Everyone, look at it, don't learn from me, don't force it, just mean it. β
Ah Ba went to the homepage of Frog Network to take a look, and sure enough, "The Sixth Knife" had fallen from the top position of the daily sales list and became the second. In the live broadcast room, many viewers swiped the barrage, saying that one hundred frog coins have been offered, five hundred frog coins have been offered, please check the ten thousand frog coins, and one alliance leader, please click on it...... Ah Ba had some chest tightness and shortness of breath, and he felt better after pouring a glass of water and drinking it. Wipe your mouth, look at the barrage remarks, and pay attention to the bad wind direction. Some viewers asked where the anchor friend was, if she could get in touch, and if she had the opportunity to come to the live broadcast to show everyone, and the application for the book friend group would be passed quickly.
Live broadcast is roughly a kind of projective entertainment, where you are, what your identity is, and what you are doing doesn't matter, your mind is all on the anchor. Watching the beautiful soft girl lazily playing games and chatting in the barrage, this kind of life is very demagogic...... Ah Ba sat up suddenly, and he was originally slumped in the chair, looking at the barrage, and suddenly became energetic.
He opened the novel page of "Sword Pointing to the Sky", and in the DuDu group search, enter the search according to the group number related to the work, and the group information shows that the group is the "Sword Pointing to the Sky" book friend group, and the conditions for joining the group are more than 1,000 fans and more than 1,300 group members. The group leader is a girl with a rabbit head with drooping ears.,The information shows that she is thirteen years old.,Now living in Luoshui.,Maybe it's the soft girl anchor.,Maybe it's the author.γ
Ah Ba looked at the balance in the online shopping treasure, more than 20,000 yuan, he thought for a while, then switched to the "Sword Pointing to the Sky" novel page, re-registered an account, thought about it again, clicked on reward, selected 100,000 frog coins, confirmed.
(To be continued...) οΌ