Saturday and Sunday passed in the blink of an eye.

Looking back on what Li Yuwei has done in the past two days, one is to take the beautiful and delicate girl and the little Lori to enjoy the rich material and spiritual culture of this world as always, and the second is to help the beautiful and delicate girl change the story.

Title: "Proud Phoenix"

Introduction: TBD

Storyline: It tells the story of an assertive and thoughtful girl who is unwilling to become a man's appendage and a family's marriage bargaining chip and rises up in the hope of changing her fate with her own hands, and finally becomes undoubtedly the strongest person in the Douqi Continent.

Of course!

Among them, there is certainly no shortage of love between men and women.

Merely......

Li Yuwei defines this novel as a very light romance novel.

The love between men and women only exists to promote the plot of the story, and the protagonist does not say that she doesn't like men, but that there is no man in this world that she will like.

That's right!

She is the phoenix who stands proudly on the plane tree, trying to find someone who loves her, but she can never find it.

The reason why this is the main purpose is undoubtedly Li Yuwei's own psychology is at work.

Of course!

When she went to work this morning, Li Yuwei reflected on the consequences of writing like this again, and she felt that in fact, she could still add a male protagonist to it, because ......

She can write herself as the male protagonist.

Such a desperate idea, why didn't she think of it at the time! After all...... Blowing how handsome she is, she's good at this.

But these are not important now, because the actor is not too late to come out slowly, and the most important thing now is that Li Yuwei needs to see what other people have to say about herself after such modifications.

After revising it last night, I wrote about the first 20,000 words.

finished writing, and then, Li Yuwei sent it to the hands of one of her editors.

Her ID on the Internet is called Sister Zhu, does she feel very old, in fact, she is half a year older than Li Yuwei, but in terms of appearance, she is indeed much worse than Li Yuwei, and she is short, looking middle-aged and fat, giving people the feeling of a peasant woman coming out of the countryside. is like Li Yuwei, who is delicate, and doesn't know how to kill chickens and ducks at first glance, and people are obviously the type of people who can get out of the kitchen and enter the hall. Li Yuwei obviously can't enter the hall, because it's too beautiful and easy to hook people into crimes.

If you have a wife like Li Yuwei, it's best to hide it quietly and not let anyone see it.

Sister Zhu used to be a well-known female frequency author on a website, and later entered the big pit of Salted Fish Novel Network.

For the major female frequency websites now, and what works sell well, it can be said that in terms of vision, it is not much worse than the original owner.

is also Li Yuwei's titular deputy editor-in-chief.

Next, it depends on what Sister Zhu thinks of her revised works.

When she returned to the company on Monday, Li Yuwei didn't have much to do in the morning, because she wanted to know what kind of feedback Sister Zhu would give after reading it. Li Yuwei thinks that she can change it, but ......

After all, different people have different tastes, who knows.

But if she can really get Sister Zhu's approval, then there is no doubt that the first step she took can be regarded as a very success.

Nine a.m.

Regular meeting on Monday.

End of regular meeting.

Everyone is back to their jobs.

The editor in charge recommended Li Yuwei's works and asked if such a buyout could be passed.

This is also one of Li Yuwei's jobs, judging whether the manuscripts recovered by the authors are worth anything.

Generally, as long as she doesn't think it's too bad, Li Yuwei will basically give it.

And soon, when Sister Zhu was reviewing the manuscript, she also saw Li Yuwei's revised manuscript.

Title: "Proud Phoenix"

Buyout price intention: 30 thousand words

Sister Zhu's first reaction was: Ancient sayings? Or is it fantasy?

Then I took a look at the brief a little.

What kind of author is this, I haven't even written a good introduction.

But it doesn't matter, just look at the text directly.

Sister Zhu has a good temper, if she really meets a responsible editor who is very serious and brainless with you, without saying a word, she will give this work a bad evaluation.

Body content:

"The power of fighting, six sections."

Looking at the five big characters on the test magic stone tablet, which were shiny and even a little dazzling, the girl's face was happy.

……

Basically, big things, Li Yuwei didn't modify too much.

It's still Nalan Yanran's own fantasy background framework.

But the small places have been modified a lot by Li Yuwei, and a lot of hateful things have been added.

But regardless of the various online techniques used in the novel, Sister Zhu just read the first little bit, and she had a strange feeling, because ...... Isn't this fandom?

Although, it seems that the name Nalan Yanran is not used here, but the Nalan family is used.

Moreover, the key is that the power of the fight, the sixth stage, this is definitely the setting of the fight to break the sky.

To be honest, if you put such an article on other websites, maybe it's okay, but if you put it on their website, it's not so good.

Because the salted fish novel network basically does not accept the same humanities, which means that it does not accept the buyout of the same humanities.

You can send it, but what to say, in order to avoid copyright disputes, and basically this type, they can't make much money on their website, so it may be difficult to even think about signing a contract.

Other than that......

Another thing that has to be mentioned is that this seems to be the same as the humanities, but it is not like the painting style of the same humanities, which also makes Sister Zhu look a little uncomfortable.

In this novel, the setting of Dou Po is used, and the plot is also very similar, but what I want to express seems to be another story.

This seems to be a story written from Nalan Yanran's perspective, but the author twists and turns, and does not use Nalan Yanran as the protagonist.

In addition, there are many original characters who do not belong to the world of Dou Po.

This kind of feeling of painting cats, but not like cats, is clearly written in the same humanities, but has to create something original, can only be said to make Sister Zhu feel very strange at first.

But......

In line with what the editor-in-chief said, even if you want to spray the other party, you have to read it, take out a little dry goods, and let the other party be sprayed by you with nothing to say, Sister Zhu still continued to watch.

Sister Zhu actually hopes to see the name Nalan Yanran in the future, even if the protagonist is not Nalan Yanran, but she can write a sister or something about Nalan Yanran, or a sister or something, that's fine, because she crossed into a sister, and then she replaced Nalan Yanran to become the object of the baby's relatives or something, to be honest, maybe it's okay to expand like this, but ......

After reading 20,000 words, Sister Zhu was still disappointed.

Because, there is no Nalan Yanran in this at all.

This is really an original story, but it gives people a sense of setting up the background of Nalan Yanran's story.

20,000 words, in the eyes of a familiar person like Sister Zhu, is only less than five minutes.

To be honest, Sister Zhu appreciates the author's writing strength, which is obviously at the level of an old author, and it is absolutely impossible to be a novice, but she doesn't appreciate this novel at all. This is typical of drawing a tiger not like a tiger, and painting a cat not like a cat.

So after thinking about it again, Sister Zhu still took the initiative to add the author's QQ.

"Absent?"