Chapter 118: Live Cut
"Journey to the West" is too classic, and the author Tang Ming Dynasty is also full of expectations for opening a new book, and readers are quickly immersed in the plot without thinking too much.
"The masked old man swung his sword to block it, shouting, 'Don't hurt him!' The ugly woman said, 'They were not so vicious that they killed so many.' The old man said, 'Let's go!' The ugly girl hesitated. The old man said, 'Don't forget Master's commands. The ugly girl nodded and said, 'Cheapen them.' 'Plunge through the woods. The masked old man followed her, and in an instant he was far away. ”
The first chapter is more than 30,000 words, and it comes to an abrupt end.
When netizens finished reading the first chapter, they all began to comment in the book review area, looking unpleasant.
"I didn't expect Tang Da to write martial arts is also very interesting, the language style is very sophisticated, and the plot is also interlocking, exciting, and unstoppable, this is the real sense of new martial arts."
"Tang capitalized martial arts, a great joy in life. "Smiling Proud Jianghu" is very good, highly recommended. ”
"The protagonist is a little sad enough in the first chapter, but he is chivalrous but provokes death, and the entire dart game is cleared. Although there are seven points of willfulness and three points of righteousness in the character, it is not very pleasing. I hope that in the follow-up, Tang Da will let the protagonist or you practice martial arts yourself. ”
"Seeing Lin Pingzhi stand up and say loudly: 'The eldest husband does things alone, and the Sichuan man surnamed Yu was killed by me Lin Pingzhi, but it has nothing to do with others. If you want to take revenge, even if you come to Lin Pingzhi, you will be cut by a thousand knives, and you will die without complaint, you have killed good people again and again, what kind of heroes are you? I, Lin Pingzhi, are here, and I have the ability to kill ...... I really want to give him a thumbs up, but although this protagonist is a little bloody, it looks a little second. ”
The Lin family's swordsmanship to ward off evil spirits is mentioned many times, and the protagonist Lin Pingzhi is written at the beginning of the book to kill the son of the Qingcheng faction Yu Guan Lord, which caused a series of events. Personally, I don't think this matter is a simple vendetta, maybe this evil sword technique is not simple. ”
The Qingcheng faction has been mentioned many times, this Qingcheng Mountain is the birthplace of Taoism in my country, and it is really amazing that it appears in martial arts. It's just that the people of this Qingcheng faction feel that they are all people who kill innocents indiscriminately, and they are not good people at first glance. That Yu Guan Lord must also be a big bad person. ”
"At the end of the first chapter, the masked old man and the ugly girl are probably not simple, although the ugly girl is ugly, but the figure is very slim, and the old man and the ugly girl are brothers and sisters, presumably the old man may have used disguise techniques. Otherwise, the age difference between the two is too great.
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For the plot of the first chapter, everyone will discuss it one by one. As Tang Xin expected, almost all readers think that Lin Pingzhi is the hero of this one.
The launch of "Smiling Proud Jianghu" made Qichuang Chinese Network a little unexpected, because the launch of this one is too capricious, and the website generally has a complete set of promotion plans for god-level authors like Lin Pingzhi. But now, the author uploaded it directly, and no one notified him.
However, the great god deserves to be a great god, although there is only one chapter, it still inspires the enthusiasm of netizens. Everyone passed ten, ten passed hundreds, Lin Da's fans were gathering, and their results were constantly improving, first of all, they first exploded "Flying Knife Jianghu" on the recommendation ticket, and even the number of votes was more than ten times that of the other party. Secondly, the collection has also soared, from the beginning of the upload to 8 o'clock the next morning, its collection has exceeded 100,000, creating a new record for the collection of new books on the Chinese network.
At eight o'clock the next morning, Tang Xin looked at the book review and smiled slightly.
These readers are so funny, and now they all agree that Lin Pingzhi is the hero, but no one knows that the real hero is the white-bearded old man, and one of the heroines, Yue Lingshan, is the ugly girl with a rough and ugly face.
After Tang Xin uploaded the second chapter, he went back to school.
In the afternoon, she will participate in the trial film meeting of "Go Left, Go Right", and the school leaders will participate, and she, as the heroine of this movie and even the singer of the theme song "Meet", naturally has to participate.
The plot of the second chapter of "Smiling Proud Jianghu" has changed a lot, and through the dialogue of the characters, a part of the martial arts group portraits are simply outlined. In terms of plot, Liu Zhengfeng of the Hengshan faction is mentioned, and the Wuyue Sword Sect is mentioned, and at the same time, the dialogue between master and apprentice in Huashan is focused on creating characters such as Yu Canghai, Senior Brother, and Yue Buqun.
In this chapter, Lin Pingzhi seems to be a bystander.
However, at the end of this chapter, the "Sword Technique of Warding Off Evil Spirits" is mentioned again, and at the same time Lin Yuantu is mentioned, Lin Pingzhi's grandfather used the "Sword Method to Warding Off Evil Spirits" to defeat the heads of the Huashan faction and the Qingcheng faction.
After reading it, readers immediately feel that the worldview structure of this book is very free, but it is very real.
"As we all know, there are five famous mountains in our country, namely Dongyue Taishan, Xiyue Huashan, Nanyue Hengshan, Beiyue Hengshan, and Zhongyue Songshan. In the middle, the Wuyue Sword Sect was mentioned, and even some sects were mentioned. For example, the Hengshan faction, such as the Huashan faction. Tang Da's fictional and real writing technique is novel and admirable. ”
"Wuyue represents five sects, and this kind of writing can only be written by Lin Daneng. I still remember watching "Journey to the West" when Sun Wukong made trouble in the Heavenly Palace, my blood was boiling. Now reading "Smiling Proud Jianghu", although it has just begun, but after reading it, I am already a little drunk. ”
At this moment, a reader named Drunken Scholar wrote in the book review area of "Smiling Proud Jianghu": "After seeing the second chapter, I can already be sure that the hero of this book is Lin Pingzhi. Lin Yuantu is Lin Pingzhi's grandfather, and he once practiced the "Sword Technique to Wars Off Evil Spirits", and the heads of the Huashan faction and the Qingcheng faction are not opponents. When it came to Lin Pingzhi's father's generation, it was obvious that Lin Zhennan had not practiced this swordsmanship, or had only practiced the fur and had not learned the essence, so he would be vulnerable in front of the Qingcheng faction. I'm thinking that the evil sword technique practiced by Lin Zhennan may be fake, and the real evil sword technique has not really appeared. Just wait for our protagonist Lin Pingzhi to find the simple score, and then practice the supreme magic and achieve the unparalleled hegemony. I've read countless people.,If the plot isn't what I said.,What do I cut live about.。 ”
This book review has sparked a lot of comments from readers.
"The landlord is talented, as I thought, the landlord has kept it."
"The landlord's speech, most of them agree, Lin Pingzhi is the absolute hero, there is no doubt that the name "Evil Sword Method" has an evil word, I always feel that this secret book is not simple. Tang Da thought, everyone can't guess. Sit and wait for the landlord to cut that. ”
"Agree with the statement upstairs, sit back and wait for the landlord to cut that."
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"Smiling Proud Jianghu" only relied on two chapters to set off a reading storm in the martial arts world.
And Gu Gu, the author of "Flying Knife Jianghu", also called Tang Da the author who was able to create "Journey to the West", and he thought it was difficult to surpass the other party.
Seeing that after the end of "Flying Knife Jianghu" in "Journey to the West", the popularity surpassed that of this Tang Da, but the other party also launched a martial arts, which made him very unconvinced.
With "Flying Knife Jianghu", the ancient city is a god, and he doesn't believe that anyone can write better martial arts than him.
Therefore, he originally despised the book "Smiling Proud Jianghu", and he even thought about the day when he slaughtered the gods.
However, it has only been a day's work, and "Smiling Proud Jianghu" has surpassed "Flying Knife Jianghu" from clicks to collections to recommendations, which made him dumbfounded.
"Is this "Smiling Proud Jianghu" really that good-looking?" With the idea of knowing oneself and knowing that the other side will win all battles, Gucheng read the first two chapters of "Smiling Proud Jianghu".
After reading it, he sighed.
At least in terms of pattern and character building, the beginning of "Smiling Proud Jianghu" has far exceeded "Flying Knife Jianghu".
However, as a martial arts creator, he doesn't think Lin Pingzhi is the protagonist. He didn't believe that the author who wrote "Journey to the West" would write a martial arts story about the protagonist's revenge, and there is another point, that is, Lin Pingzhi's character is not likable. Even if there will be changes in the later stage, they don't have the quality of being the protagonist, at least if he writes it, he won't let Lin Pingzhi be the protagonist.
Therefore, after reading it, Gucheng replied with his author account in the book review area of "Smiling Proud Jianghu" where he was about to cut something: "I don't think Lin Pingzhi has a protagonist, just wait for the landlord to cut something." ”
After Gucheng sent a reply, the entire book review area suddenly exploded.