Come to think of it, let's write it......

This book has been uploaded since June 4th, and it has been more than three months now, and I am very grateful to all the book friends who have accompanied me all the way, really, thank you very much.

Chasing water just started writing a book, and I can also feel the obvious problem of inability to describe the plot and lack of control, of course, I also think that I can change a little, but what is the situation, I can only say that chasing water still needs to be honed.

Let's talk about the situation of this book first, when chasing water and the editor signed the contract, the estimated number of words on the contract was 60 to 800,000 words, and all the works related to and outside the book were planed out, and the text of chasing water plus the final postscript should be exactly about 750,000. Personally, I think it's okay for me to control how far I want to write the whole book.

Personally, I don't think the end of this book is too hasty, and most of the holes that should be filled are almost filled. The reason for the crossing, the final boss, and the things in the initial break have a more reasonable explanation, and the protagonist and the plot characters also have their own destinations. So the main part of this book,I don't think there's a need to continue the mink.,If you write in detail about what who's who's swastika.,Who's who has transformed.,Who's emotional line.,It's not that you can't write.,But write like that.,Chasing water really becomes a fraud of money......

So, about the detailed explanation of the swastika of the ranju swastika , the change of the big dog's swastika , whether the Bombi Aita is dead or alive, and the possible swastika description of this batch of new captains ten years later, including the possible swastika description of Ukitake, Kisuke Yoichi, and Ichigo Haiyan, maybe chasing the water will make some interesting extras, and everyone will just take it as a joke to see.

I had Chado Taihu and Ishida Yuryu thoroughly hit the soy sauce. In fact, there is a section in the outline that makes Chadu break his arm.,And then the protagonist uses the demon heart to re-forge Chadu's arms.,Originally, I wanted to use the stalk of the demon's left arm to directly add the demon armor.,And then the giant's right arm is also set up with a super weapon.,It's the arch that the game turned over.,The giant stick.,It's the one that can only be brought to the entourage...... Even at that time, he wanted to add the soul of the frost giant on Thortham Island, Kastagg......

Then I deleted it all after I wrote it...... Because I found a problem...... If the protagonist has this idle time, isn't it good to take care of his brother, why is he so concerned about other people...... So angrily delete it.

As for Ishida Yuryu, hehe...... I think the only two meanings he has in the original comics are that he gave Nirvana a big move to kill him into liquid...... The other is to use the silver thrombosis arrow to give a certain boss a silence and interruption. I changed both of these scenes, and then, there was no point in focusing on Ishida Yulong......

After the problem of the practitioner, cut it directly, as a trick, it would be good to show your face in the future......

And then the problem of the protagonist's feelings, he designed a "cheating" scene very desperately, or when the empty crane was pregnant, in order to make the plot more conflicting and real...... Chasing water can only say that, cover your face......

When it comes to partners, this book doesn't have original characters with a lot of scenes. So the protagonist's most trusted partners are his two brothers, which is also the reason why Haiyan and Ichigo have more pen and ink. I've been entangled in the plot of the three brothers playing indigo dye for a long time...... What kind of way should be used to make Aizen not as fake as the "failure" in the original book, and finally I thought of the power of the Spirit King in the body of Ukizhu, and by the way, it also allowed Aizen to evolve a god, and the jade was directly combined with the flesh and was unique. This way, I don't have to think about the whereabouts of the broken jade after the blue dye is sealed.

Regarding the issue of Kenpachi, Yachiryu has already been explained in the book review, including Ichigo. It's mainly the problem of their slashing knife.,I don't want to say more here.,Chasing water can only be said.,The original play inside.,Chasing water can be artistically processed.,For example, the last demon battle axe of Kenpachi.,Yachiliu itself is a sword beast.,Ichigo's last transformation into a black crescent.,Even the magic transformation of the Saint Seiya version of Haiyan and so on.。 However, the post posted by Chasing Water in the book review area discusses the setting of the Grim Reaper world, and it cannot be mixed with Chasing Water as a personal processing of a comic book chaser, so Chasing Water can only be based on the setting in the comics, and analyze how things are not for everyone, for example, the knife of Kenbachi is not eight thousand streams...... Up to the analysis here...... If you want to ask what it is, the answer will be given, but the book review area can't give it, and artistic processing is not equal to the actual situation.

The question of the Grim Reaper is basically finished, and now let's talk about the problem of the old roll. It's a lot of fun, even though I've only played Roll 5. In fact, I haven't tried many times to chase water with a lot of magic effects and dragon roar effects, because most of the time it's just the fitters who do it directly, and occasionally put a throwing sound......

So in this book, the elements of Lao Roll are related to constellation skills, dragon roar, and magic. The equipment is equipped with demon artifacts and, of course, dragon scourge.

Dragon Calamity can be said to be the deepest foreshadowing I buried in order to finally cross the Dragon War......

Therefore, from the perspective of the Grim Reaper, the development of the protagonist's weapon is the dragon scourge (shallow state, but the appearance is a sword), → the beginning of solving various demon artifacts → swastika dragon bone set.

From the perspective of Roll 5, it is the problem of Nain's world that Naien solves, so the protagonist's Taidao Dragon Calamity is the key weapon of the final dragon war!

Regarding the brain hole that the dragon descendants of the past generations will not absorb dragon souls, it comes from an interview with an employee of the game company B company, and the employees of B company (the game company of Roll 5) once explained that the original dragon descendant St. Alesia, the orthodox first dragon descendant admitted by Akatosh, failed to have the ability to absorb dragon souls, which may be an unpublished history...... Anyway, it's that Company B is lazy and didn't do this history......

So, I expanded it to all bloodline dragonborns made from the Akatosh bloodline, which in fact don't have the ability to drain dragon souls at all! Only Milac and the Last Dragonborn have it! Therefore, there is a plot where the first and last generations of dragonborns are combined into one.

The problem of the demon artifact, in order to cater to the world of death, a lot of changes have been made, some have appeared through the beginning solution, some are not, I am slowly transitioning the demon artifact from the beginning solution, preparing for the final creation of the demon god......

Of course, there must be a lot of problems in between...... It made you laugh.

In the end, there is also a little blank, interested relatives can think about it for themselves, chasing water will not give an answer here...... For example, who set up the Dragon Whisper Wall of the Broken Boundary, why did Duneville appear in the Tomb of Souls in the form of an undead, why did the vampire come under Alduin, and why was the protagonist able to transform into a Maharaja after being bitten by an ordinary vampire?

I think it's interesting to think about these questions from different angles, and even get different answers, so you might as well imagine that the thinking process is actually our personal perception of the character in the game.

Therefore, whether the protagonist who may be involved in the future will return to the world of Nairn and cut Akatosh and other issues...... Let's guess, maybe chasing the water will be written one day......

Next, we whined about the problem of the plot...... Chasing water can't be regarded as a complete acceptance of the opinions of book friends, but at least chasing water is trying to change, and the first 30 chapters of the real article have basically been revised, especially the first chapter! From the initial 3,000 words, there are a lot more directly, and the change is a very hard process, but it is really rewarding...... At least the reviews in this chapter are much more positive......

As for the embarrassing question, let's talk about it, there is indeed such a problem, and even if it has been changed, it is estimated that it has not been changed...... If this problem is not solved in a day, I guess I will still embarrass the reader by writing the second dimension...... There is nothing to say about chasing water, you can only hone it by writing more books...... By the time the next two-dimensional book comes out, it's impossible to have no embarrassment at all, but at least you have to make some progress.

Then let's talk about the specific book review issues...... Chasing water will regularly read this chapter and say that the opinions of book friends are really valuable, and they have also been changed in these directions. Sometimes I will post some lengthy explanations, which are actually the differences that may arise between the cognition and chasing water of book lovers, and need to be explained. Reading and writing books are actually different life experiences, or different experiences, for the same text, or more detailed, for the way to deal with a certain matter, the feedback everyone gets at the first time is different.

I'll give you a simple example, the capture of Rukia in this world. The plot in the original book is that Ishida Yuryu is seriously injured, Ichigo is seriously injured, and the lock is destroyed, and Koiji attacks Rukia several times and prevents Rukia from contacting Ichigo. After the revised plot, Ishida Yulong was put down without his own strength, and he turned against the plot premise of Bai Ya, and directly beat him to the head and broke the bloodstream, and finally Yulong came out of the horse, calmed down the incident, and everyone went home.

Why this change?

First of all, we analyze the relationship between Koiji and Rukia in the original book, childhood sweetheart, Koiji has a crush on Rukia. Then Rukia enters Kuchiki's house, and Koiji pretends to be happy for her, but actually breaks Rukia's heart...... After that, it was also Koiji who took the initiative to avoid meeting with Rukia, and simply wanted to use the same status to talk to Rukia after becoming the vice captain, and develop again...... Therefore, he is completely reduced to a passerby in Rukia's heart...... Rukia went out of Mao in the second grade, and then joined the thirteenth team, during which it can be said that she had a longing for Haiyan, a longing for Shiraya, and even a longing for Ichigo later, but nothing happened to him in love! He wanted to kill Ichigo from the beginning, and it is estimated that he really didn't want Rukia to be sentenced, and in addition, he was jealous! In the thousand-year-old blood war, when Koiji was carrying Ichigo on his back, he said that when he first met Ichigo, the bond with Rukia was not as good as that of passers-by...... At that time, Koiji would not rebel against the corpse soul world because of whether Rukia was sentenced to 30 years or 100 years.

Then, let's talk about boyfriend and girlfriend. When your girlfriend encounters difficulties, does she reason with the facts or ignore the maintenance first? Men tend to be rational, but women tend to be emotional. As a married man, Chasing Water has been experiencing these problems many times since the beginning of falling in love, and I have also seen many couples who finally broke up because of the facts...... At that time, the kind of state of mind that treated Rukia as a baby was not a simple "won't die" that could let her be taken away. Chasing water, I put myself in the perspective of love, I won't agree to how long Rukia is sentenced, not to mention that the order is still secretly maneuvering, this is not without the chance of a death sentence......

At this point, I will not talk about other points of disagreement...... Everyone has their own opinions in their hearts, and explaining a little is called calming differences, and more is called indoctrination...... Chasing water is written, not an argumentative essay, let alone reportage...... That's it.

Talking about the new book, I originally wanted to continue with the Hokage theme, but this theme is a bit too widespread, and I didn't find a good entry point for a while...... Stranded for the time being, but there will definitely be. The new book fantasy theme has begun to be uploaded, and everyone is welcome to watch it. There will definitely be routines.,But try not to be so cliché.,Write a story about spirit beasts and blood.,I've always had a story of a spirit beast brawl in my heart.,It's also a love story.,The emotional line is discussed with my wife.,So the single heroine is sure......

Along the way, I am very grateful to all the book friends who have supported me, and I really thank you very much. Chasing water is relatively late, and often after twelve o'clock, I hear the voice of the message on the writer's assistant, recommended tickets, monthly passes after the shelves, subscriptions, and rewards, thank you very much. It was the first time to write a book, and I was able to get so much recognition, and I was very happy to be chasing water. It's a pity that this book doesn't engage in a book friend group, and there is a lack of experience in chasing water in many places, and the next book will be improved!

Then, Chasing Water is ready to take the full-time writer route for the time being, after all, you have to consider the family situation, and this decision is based on the family situation, and my wife and I may also be preparing to have children, so it is necessary to recuperate in advance. My wife's job is very stable, and if I choose to write a book, I will have enough time every day to condition the bodies of two people, exercise by the way, and then write a book can be considered a little productive. After entering September, the work of chasing water, to be precise, the industry ushered in an unprecedented winter, I must consider the future of the family, this is not an understatement of the leadership of the sentence "carry the past" can be wiped out of the fact, the final result of carrying is not to earn money, and then the body will be dragged down, which is too much of a loss.

So, Chasing Water is going to write a book first, and then continue to enrich yourself. In the future, even if you want to return to work, you are not ready to do sales business anymore, this bite has been eaten for three years, and you have some experience, and you have done a grassroots management post...... It seems that writing books is still a little helpful for this trainer, and I always feel that my literary literacy will improve...... If you write about the city in the future, should you use a trainer for the protagonist's profession? Belch...... Far away......

Then, here is a blessing to a friend who chases water, a fellow writer who has just graduated, if he has just graduated, he may be younger than chasing water. Chasing water wants to say something to him, now all setbacks are temporary, and you must not give up your optimism about life. When Chaishui first arrived in this city, he and his wife lived a very hard life, at that time they were not married, they couldn't live together, and the cost of living itself was twice as much. At that time, Chasing Water lived in the kind of upper and lower partitions for sixteen people, on the top floor of a particularly famous shared house, 48 floors...... The air conditioner is shared with people, and I dare not turn it on, and the electricity bill is too expensive...... The washing machine was afraid to use because it was found that someone was using it to wash shoes...... In short, it's miserable...... But for a man who lives alone, it's basically acceptable. At that time, the most unacceptable thing was the elevator! The elevator is not a problem, the biggest problem is that the elevator falls down! And it's two or three layers down at a time! There have been a few times when chasing water really felt like I was going to hang...... Fortunately, it was early to move out......

The reason why Chasing Water lived in that kind of place was very simple, at that time, I could only afford the rent of 450 yuan a month there, and other places could not afford it...... Also, where to stay, it's relatively close to my first unit, and it's half an hour to walk to. Two stops on the subway, it will be faster, but it was basically not done at that time. At that time, I was so poor that I had to take the subway carefully......

Not much to say, the title of the book is "The Fool in Death", I think the protagonist has a lot of character, there are advantages and disadvantages that a normal person should have, he will be afraid, he will be lazy, he will be cowardly, and he will get carried away appropriately when he gets power, but at the same time, he will also take responsibility and fight. I think this is an ordinary person in the true sense of the word...... I think we should be tolerant and accepting of ordinary people. The author is also a very humble brother, and those who can know how to laugh at themselves are broad-minded people, at least in this regard, chasing water feels that he is not as good as him.

I sincerely want to say to him, come on! Chasing Water has not added an author group, so this is the first author friend of Chasing Water to write so far!

Come on, come on, come on!!

Rory rambles a lot, it's time to wrap up. Hawkers, in short, thanks to everyone's love during this time, I am grateful for chasing water. The new book "The Evil Phoenix Falling Feathers", ISBN 8480217803535203, tells the tortuous rise of a calm teenager. Advertise a new book, wow.

A genius who sighs, a useless wastewood? I'm sorry, but none of this is me.

Adopt? Mercy? Femme fatale? It doesn't matter, it's none of my business anymore.

Wrapped in darkness, the evil spirit is monstrous, freezing everything in the world? Yes or no, I don't care.

I said, I don't want to save the world, I just want to send you home......

But you tell me that maybe the former is simpler......

Qingqing heard the feather falling, and scorched the phoenix.

Everyone, we're seeing you again with our new book!

New friends rejoice in seeing each other,

The book ends with a long line of meaning.

When goodbye finally has an opening,

Will be back in the sails tomorrow!

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