Chapter Ninety-Three: I Actually Cried!
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Classroom.
Finally, it was Qin Xue'er's turn to read her composition, but Qin Xue'er didn't say a word, and the whole person looked extremely nervous.
"Classmate Qin Xue'er, what's wrong with you? It doesn't matter if you don't finish your essay, you can read as much as you write. ”
Teacher Chu Piaoxue thought that Qin Xue'er had not finished the composition, and she was embarrassed to read it, so she comforted her.
"Hmph. Teacher, Qin Xue'er is a wild child that no one wants, how does she know what parents are, don't embarrass her......"
"Yes, teacher, why do you embarrass Qin Xue'er, it's just a shame for her to read it......"
Several students suddenly burst out laughing, and their smiles were full of sarcasm.
When Qin Xue'er heard the laughter of these people, her expression became even more nervous, and she clenched her fists.
And at this time, a big hand suddenly grabbed Qin Xue'er's Qianqian jade hand. Qin Xue'er looked up and saw Bao Zhengzheng looking at her with a smile on his face.
Seeing the smile on Bao Zheng's face and feeling the warmth of Bao Zheng's big hand, Qin Xue'er's heart suddenly calmed down, and she was not nervous.
Immediately afterwards, I saw her pick up the notebook and read aloud: "The name of my essay is: "Back"! ”
"It's been more than two years since I saw my father, and the last thing I can forget is his back."
"That winter, my grandmother died, and my father's messenger was handed over. I traveled from Yanjing to Xuzhou, planning to follow my father home for the funeral. When I went to Xuzhou to see my father, I saw the mess in the courtyard, and I thought of my grandmother, and I couldn't help but shed tears......"
Qin Xue'er read this, paused, and looked at everyone's expressions.
She found that the entire classroom suddenly became silent, and the pins could be heard. Everyone looked at Qin Xue'er with a surprised expression, including the few students who had mocked Qin Xue'er before, and they also looked at Qin Xue'er in shock.
Teacher Chu Piaoxue, her expression was also extremely excited, and when she saw Qin Xue'er looking at her, she hurriedly glanced at Qin Xue'er encouragingly, and motioned for her to continue reading.
Seeing this, Qin Xue'er continued to read: "We crossed the river and entered the station. I bought the ticket and he was busy taking care of the luggage. There was too much luggage, so you had to tip the porter to get there. And he busied himself with them about the price. I was so clever at the time that I always felt that he didn't speak very beautifully, and that he had to interject himself, but he finally agreed on the price; Just put me in the car......"
Reading this, Qin Xue'er found that all the classmates were very shocked. And Chu Piaoxue and the parents of some of her classmates had tears in their eyes inexplicably.
Qin Xue'er's classmates, after all, are young, although they can also hear that this article is very well written, but they don't know what's good.
However, Chu Piaoxue, as well as the parents of the children in the group of teachers, listened to this article, but they couldn't help but think of their father's image in their minds.
Yes, father's love is like a mountain, our father, isn't that so?
At this time, I saw Qin Xue'er continue to read: "He walked to the car with me and put the oranges on my fur coat. ”
So he threw the dirt on his clothes, as if his heart was very relaxed. After a while he said, 'I'm leaving, I'm going over there to write a letter!' I watched him walk out. He walked a few steps, looked back at me, and said, 'Go in, there's no one in there.' When his back was mixed in with the people who came and went, and I couldn't find it anymore, I came in and sat down, and my tears came again......
In the crystal tears, I saw the back of the fat, green cotton robe and black cloth horse coat. Alas! I don't know when I'll see him again! ”
At this point, this article can be regarded as finished.
After reading this article, Qin Xue'er raised her head and looked around, but found that all the classmates were looking at her with shocked faces, their eyes full of various emotions, whether surprised, or admired, or admired......
And all the parents of the children looked at Qin Xue'er blankly with tears in their eyes.
Some even burst into tears, constantly wiping away their tears, and whispered in their mouths: "Father, father, children are not filial, I have never paid attention to your love for me. Today, after hearing this article, I finally understand your good intentions and your great dedication......"
Even Chu Piaoxue wiped the tears from the corners of her eyes, and after a long while, she motioned for Qin Xue'er to sit down.
After Qin Xue'er sat down, Chu Piaoxue restrained her emotions for a while, and then said, "This article, I really don't know how to describe it." To say that it is well written, I think it is completely tarnished. How can a mere word 'good' describe the excellence of this article? ”
When the students present heard Chu Piaoxue's evaluation, they couldn't help but be stunned. I thought to myself, Teacher Chu Piaoxue, and how could the parents be so excited.
This article is indeed well written, but it is not so gaffe, right?
This group of students, after all, is only middle school students, and they are relatively young, where can they comprehend the great father's love in this article.
Only Chu Piaoxue, only experienced parents, can feel the deep fatherly love from this article, between the lines.
This reminded them of their father, and recalled that their father also cared for them so much.
But they never took it for granted.
At this moment, after listening to this article, they realized how great their father's love was.
"After the course, I immediately went back to my hometown, and I was going to see my father......"
"Me too, I plan to ask the company for half a month off and go back to accompany my father, who has paid too much for me in his life......"
A group of parents, all with tears in their eyes, decided so.
At this time, I saw Chu Piaoxue continue: "Your essay is called "Back", right? Good name, good article, this essay will definitely cause a sensation when it is published and reported. I'm no longer qualified to rate this article. If the perfect score is 100, I must give it a 1,000 points......"
Looking at the stunned classmates, the parents with tears in their eyes, and the teachers who were full of praise, Qin Xue'er couldn't help but be dumbfounded.
Everyone's performance is too exaggerated, right?
Her eyes couldn't help but look at Bao Zheng beside her, because this article was written by Bao Zheng.
Seeing Bao Zheng looking at her and smiling quietly, Qin Xue'er couldn't help but feel sweet in her heart. She knew that this was the article that Bao was writing for her.
"By the way, Qin Xue'er, although your grades are usually good. However, this doesn't quite look like your writing style, this article, it shouldn't be written by you, right? ”
At this time, Chu Piaoxue thought about it for a while, and suddenly couldn't help but ask.
Qin Xue'er didn't hide it, she immediately pointed to Bao Zheng beside her, and said proudly: "This article is indeed not written by me, it was written by my brother for me." ”
In the entire classroom, all the students, all the parents, including Chu Piaoxue, couldn't help but be taken aback when they heard this, and their eyes looked at Bao Zheng beside Qin Xue'er.