First of all, I would like to thank Bai Lianhua, book friend 140513181612452 and visitors for their book reviews. Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 ｉｎfo

I haven't updated it today.,Because the author has been watching other football works since last night.,At the same time, I'm also thinking about the problem of this novel.。

Some book friends have raised the question of this novel writing in a different world without a sense of substitution, and today this question has been raised again. I was thinking, is the lack of substitution really because of another world? If this is the case, why do those fantasy novels and Xianxia novels have a sense of substitution?

The author thought about it for a long time before he figured out what the real problem with this novel was: the structure of the article. To write an alternate world, the structure of the article should be linear or tree-like, go deep from one point, and then derive another point after the reader has completely immersed it. But when I wrote this novel, like the first part of the second division, it was written in a net-like structure, spreading everything out at once, in other words, there was no focus. Maybe everyone only remembers one Youzhou Institute of Technology in the end, but they may not have much impression of Songjiang Meifu, the first supporting role in the second division. So, in the later parts of the First Division and Super League, I will pay attention to this, focusing on the main opponents of the protagonist and reducing the scenes of other teams.

Of course, writing about a different world will definitely affect the problem of substitution to a greater or lesser extent, and the author also took this into account at the beginning, so when naming the team, he also referred to the real team, and the name of the city was also based on the history of the city or another name. For example, Youzhou is equal to the imperial capital, Songjiang is equal to Shanghai, Yangcheng is equal to Guangzhou, and so on. Then for the international arena, except for the more sensitive countries, I will take aliases, whether it is the name of other countries, cities or teams, they will be written according to reality, such as the Hiroshima Three Arrows written yesterday. Finally, on the question of real-life stars, the author can reveal in advance that they will appear in a different form, but it is certainly not the same as reality.

Finally, the update issue that everyone is concerned about, today is guaranteed to be 2000 words, and 4000 for two more, and it is not impossible to write 6000 if it is written smoothly. But no matter what, there must be a more, and the less will also be supplemented, at least 2000 per day, and the supplement will be completed.

Finally, thank you again for the book reviews of the three book friends, thank you!

Finally, the author set up a flag here, this book is by no means a eunuch! In the author's view, writing a bad eunuch will never progress, and the author hopes that this book can become a witness to the author's continuous progress.

Best wishes

2016-12-14, 18:12, written in Beijing