Chapter 23 Submission

After the second story ended, Yan Luo began to write the third story.

Coco is an introverted, shy girl, timid and crying, so kindergarten kids always like to bully her.

On this day, when a group of little boys pulled Coco's pigtails again to make Coco cry, a little girl with short hair stood up and angrily beat all the little boys who bullied Coco, and then a group of crying little boys ran to the teacher to complain.

Just when the teacher was about to punish the little girl, the timid and fearful Coco stood up, although her nervous calves were trembling, and her words were stumbling, she still proved without hesitation that the short-haired little girl was beating people to help her.

The next thing happened naturally, the little girl named Xiaochuan became a good friend of Coco, the two went from kindergarten to elementary school to junior high school, and finally entered high school, they were inseparable for more than ten years, and they talked about everything, but she and Xiaochuan will be friends for life, and the two will never be separated.

But who knew that Xiao Chuan, who entered high school, fell in love, she fell in love with her tablemate, a boy who was not good-looking, which made Coco angry, she felt that Xiao Chuan betrayed the friendship between the two, and then there was a fierce quarrel and conflict, and finally, the two parted ways!

But just after the college entrance examination, Coco received the news of Xiaochuan's death, like five thunderbolts, and at this moment she felt that the sky had fallen!

Hurrying to Ogawa's house, all that can be seen is Ogawa's portrait and a letter left for her.

Trembling to open the letter, Coco learned that Xiaochuan was diagnosed with terminal illness a year ago, but she had been hiding her illness in order to take the college entrance examination with peace of mind, and later she was worried that her sudden death would make Coco collapse, so she found a table mate to conspire to act in a play, the purpose was to make Coco hate herself, and then become self-reliant and self-reliant, accustomed to the world without her!

When she finished writing the third novel, it was already half past ten in the evening, and Yan Luo would normally go to bed around half past nine, so when she found that the time had exceeded her usual sleeping time by an hour, she hurriedly sent the novel according to the submission email left in the magazine "Youth", and then closed the computer and went to bed.

At this time, she forgot that her three novels were in one document, so she sent them all at once.

When Ding Shihua asked her how the novel was written, it was only at noon the next day that she suddenly thought that she had voted all three novels!

Although he regrets his carelessness, there is nothing he can do about it, and can only hope that at least one of the three novels will be published.

In fact, Yan Luo's waiting time was short, and three days later she received a reply from the editorial department of Youth magazine in her mailbox, mentioning that her novel "Leaving You" would be published in a new issue of the magazine.

"Leaving You" is the third novel written by Yan Luo, but I didn't expect the first two novels to be adopted, but the third novel full of dog blood and contrived was selected, which has to make Yan Luo feel a little lost, after all, she has always felt that the first two articles to be written are better than the third one, but the result is the opposite, she wants to ask about the results of the first two novels by email, but she is worried about getting any bad news or bad evaluation, so she simply pretends to be a turtle with a shrunken head and ignores it.

In fact, the editors of the magazine have already quarreled about her first two novels.

Some editors think that the two novels are beautifully written, the stories are told at the tip of the pen, the characters are portrayed prominently and personally, and the tragic ending at the end raises the artistic conception of the novels by several notches, making people feel in vain that this is the reality and this is the youth.

But some editors apparently don't think so.

They admit that Yan Luo's novel has twists and turns, with a touch of sadness between the lines, and it is indeed two very good novels, but these advantages are all destroyed by the ending! Please, you're writing a youth novel, not scar literature, not documentary literature, do you need to force everyone to eat Xiang? It's like if you want to have a dinner and choose a well-known restaurant with high-end decoration, but when the dishes come up, everyone finds that it is a snack in Shaxian County! Yes, Shaxian snacks are also good, but the premise is that Shaxian snacks are to be eaten in the store of Shaxian snacks, how can they be messed up?

The editors who held different opinions did not reach a consensus in the end, so in the end, the email to Yan Luo only said that her third novel would be published, after all, compared to the first two novels, the dog blood of this novel was seen by experienced editors after reading the beginning, and it belonged to the innocent moaning novel of youth, so it was passed without suspense.

But even if you can stabilize the author with the third novel first, then you can't keep putting it off, and if someone else comes to ask what to do one day, you can't always reply that we should think about it again.

So the question was pushed to the editor-in-chief's desk.

The editor-in-chief deserves to be the editor-in-chief, and all he thinks is to seek stability, but novels are really rare, so the ending can be published after being revised! So he finally decided to publish both stories at once in the next issue.

But there is a problem here, that is, the author does not agree with us to change the ending, looking at the author's style, it is obvious that he is the kind of student with a strong literary atmosphere, and if he doesn't force some tragedy on you, it is not the kind of literature.

"Can you tell the author that we need to make a simple change! As for where the changes were, I don't tell her for the time being, I guess she won't ask! ”

Although the editor-in-chief's bad idea is not virtuous, it is also a feasible method, and it is the editor-in-chief who proposes this method, so on the day the editor-in-chief spoke, Yan Luo received an email from "Youth" magazine, saying that her two novels need to be appropriately revised in order to make them better and more moving.

After reading the email, Yan Luo took it for granted that people thought that her novel was not well written enough and needed to be revised, so she sent the agreed email without hesitation. Then, within half an hour, she received the news that two of her novels would be published together in the same issue in May.

At this point, Yan Luo's heart was completely put down, although "Youth" magazine is not a high-end magazine, and the readers for it are just a group of teenagers who have not grown up, but this is at least a good start, isn't it? As long as she persists, after a long period of exercise, she will definitely make greater progress, and maybe one day she will become a writer like her mother Yan Ran!