Although he didn't trust the level of appreciation of Ding Shihua, it was always a good thing to be praised, so Yan Luo didn't bother to revise it, and directly recopied it on the composition paper, and then handed the composition to Wang Lili before school in the afternoon.

Wang Lili, who got the essay, was very surprised for a while, and then cautiously reminded: "Yan Luo, this essay contest is very important, it can't be perfunctory, and it can't be plagiarized!" ”

Yan Luo nodded in understanding.

"Teacher Wang, take a look, and tell me tomorrow if there is a problem!"

"Oh, okay!"

Wang Lili unconsciously agreed, and when she reacted, Yan Luo had already left, so she could only open the composition that Yan Luo gave her with a wry smile.

After reading it, Wang Lili felt that it was good, Zhu Ziqing's prose was quoted very well, the narrative was written with a sense of picture, and the final lyricism was also majestic.

Look at it again and check for any typos or misstatements.

Then Wang Lili looked at it a second time and found no problems.

Let's take a third look and see what else can be improved.

After reading it for the third time, Wang Lili had to sigh that the current students are really amazing, and the composition is written so that the teacher feels that he has no way to start revising it, although I don't know how many people participated in this essay contest and how many outstanding students, but Wang Lili can be sure that Yan Luo's essay will be selected!

The next day, during the morning self-study, Wang Lili found Yan Luo and told her that the essay was written very well, there was nothing that needed to be revised, and now she could seriously prepare for the selection in the county.

Yan Luo nodded after hearing this, and then went back to the classroom to continue reading without sadness or joy, leaving Wang Lili alone in the wind, she is now very curious about whether Yan Luo has mood swings, she even remembered the allusions of the princes of the Beacon Opera, maybe Bao Xi is just like the current Yan Luo, cold and indifferent, no sadness and no joy, so King Zhou You will want to see her smile.

During the lunch break, Zhang Keke handed over the written composition to Wang Lili nervously.

Wang Lili, who carefully read Zhang Keke's composition, always felt that her composition seemed to be missing something, but she couldn't say it when she asked her to say what was missing.

Helplessly, Wang Lili took out Yan Luo's composition and read it again, and then she finally found out what Zhang Keke was missing, that is, emotion!

It's not that Zhang Keke's essay is false, but that her essay is too pretentious, which is also normal, a teenager has no life experience, and he doesn't know what life and death parting is, and he understands what time is ruthless, so they can only use gorgeous rhetoric to express their emotions, which makes the whole article look as if they are moaning without illness.

This is not Zhang Keke's problem alone, this is a common problem for all students of her age, the so-called life, years, and parting are not suitable for them to write, and the so-called my alma mater does not refer to a school, it is a past that a person can't go back to, a journey in life, and an unforgettable worry-free childhood!

So it's not that Zhang Keke writes badly, but that Yan Luo writes too well, the so-called dwarf, if there is no comparison with Yan Luo, there is no problem with Zhang Keke's essay being revised and taken to the competition, but now Wang Lili has preconceived ideas, so she is not satisfied with Zhang Keke's composition, but at the same time she doesn't know how to guide Zhang Keke to revise.

"Coco, in this way, you go and ask Yan Luo to help you revise it!"

After thinking for a while, Wang Lili decided to let Yan Luo guide Zhang Keke, they are all children of the same age, presumably Yan Luo's explanation can make Zhang Keke empathize and understand.

"But, but"

"Teacher Wang, can I not go?"

After stumbling for a long time, Zhang Keke suddenly pleaded with Wang Lili in a low voice.

"Why?" Wang Lili was surprised.

"I'm scared."

Zhang Keke blushed and lowered his head and said with a mosquito voice.

"What are you afraid of?"

Wang Lili asked with a smile when she heard this, although Yan Luo looks like a kaolin flower, well, it is actually too! But don't be scared like this, besides, if you have more contact with Yan Luo, you will find that she is actually a shy little girl.

"No, I don't know, I'm just scared!"

Zhang Keke doesn't know why she is afraid, anyway, as long as she is with Yan Luo, she will be nervous, you must know that although she is introverted and shy, it is only when she is with boys, in fact, when she is with girls, although she is still restrained, she will not feel nervous and afraid, but Yan Luo is an exception.

"Don't be afraid!"

Wang Lili stood up and patted Zhang Keke on the shoulder to encourage her.

"The teacher asked you, would you like to participate in this essay contest?"

Zhang Keke nodded seriously.

"Do you want to win an essay contest?"

Zhang Keke nodded seriously again.

"That's good, whether you can participate in the essay contest now, and whether you can win a prize depends on whether you are willing to go to Yan Luo for help!"

After listening to Wang Lili's words, Zhang Keke finally mustered up his courage, and then clenched his fists and walked towards the classroom with a serious face.

As the old saying goes: When Zhang Keke walked on the road, it was when she was at her peak, but when she walked into the classroom, her momentum was only half left, and when she walked in front of Yan Luo, there was no momentum at all.

Therefore, when Yan Luo raised his head and saw Zhang Keke standing in front of him, the latter was blushing and looked like he wanted to leave but didn't dare to go, and tears had begun to accumulate in his innocent and watery eyes, as if he would cry out in the next moment.

"Coco, what's wrong?"

Faced with such a weak and innocent girl, Yan Luo felt that a soft place in her heart was activated, so she asked in a soft voice that even she didn't dare to imagine.

In the face of Yan Luo's inquiry, Zhang Keke nervously shook his head in denial, but then began to nod his head like a chicken eating.

"Are you okay or are you okay?"

Looking at Zhang Keke's cute appearance, Yan Luo asked again with a smile.

"Something!"

Zhang Keke lowered his head and hummed.

"Sit down, Wang Shuyang is going to participate in the competition, he hasn't been here for the past few days!"

Pulling Wang Shuyang's chair away, Yan Luo pointed to the chair and gestured to Zhang Keke.

After hesitating for a moment, Zhang Keke still sat down nervously.

"Tell me, what's the matter?"

After Zhang Keke sat down, Yan Luo asked.

"I just wanted to ask you how to write a good essay." Zhang Keke whispered.

"Show me your composition!"

Hearing Yan Luo's words, Zhang Keke hurriedly handed his composition to Yan Luo.

took over the composition, Yan Luo quickly read it at a glance and ten lines, and then she found the problem, to put it bluntly, the emotional expression is not in place, just like writing the death of a best friend as if it was just a plant that was raised, or writing the emotion of the change of seasons as if it was life and death.

And Zhang Keke's essay is the latter, at the beginning of the description of the uneasiness and reluctance of just entering primary school, I feel that she is entering the primary school, it is clearly a scum hole! And when describing the graduation of elementary school, it reads like a farewell!