The first time I saw a very long review in the book review section, I was very moved, this book review is all about the problems that arise in the book, I can't deny it. Pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info

There are some problems that are prone to writing and writing, and I have summarized some of them, and I think that there are a few mistakes pointed out in this book review that are the most important.

First: the main line is not clear, that is, the goal of the protagonist is not clear.

Second: There are too many power systems, and they are mixed, such as necromancers and magic mechs.

These two points are the most important, and the others can be solved.

What legends are everywhere, gods and demons everywhere this is nothing, this legend is not a legend in DND, it is just a strength evaluation, not the kind of legend that can fight against gods and demons.

After the subscription was put on the shelf, it has been standing still.,I knew there was something wrong with the writing.,There are several plots that are considered poisonous.,It's just that I realized it after I finished writing.,But it's too late.,Can't change it.。

For example, the chapter where the protagonist took revenge and killed Zhang Tianci, it's not that it's not handled well, but it's a broken chapter of my death, and as a result, many people read this chapter and thought they guessed that the next chapter didn't take revenge, so they didn't read it.

The second, the copy of the tide of terror, that is, the talent copy of the mind mastery was not written, if you delete the paragraph about the magic guide mecha, don't mind master this talent ability, just get a few mind spells, this is a little better.

The third, the plot of Su Yueying's death was not arranged, it's not that she can't die, it's just that the foreshadowing is a little better, it's so sudden that some people can't accept it.

Fourth, the protagonist's strength is too strong now, and it's too invincible to write, although the invincible flow is also very cool.

The above are a few major shortcomings that I have summarized for the time being.

But it's not impossible to solve it.

The biggest problem is that the protagonist's current strength is too chaotic.,I have a way to solve this.,But it's going to take a while.,Don't worry, it's not the kind of forced disappearance.。

Writing a novel is a continuous accumulation, and there will always be some problems when writing alone, such as forgetting the equipment or skills that the protagonist has obtained, which is the norm, and there is a skill that the protagonist has never used since he obtained it

So the protagonist always gets very little equipment, and it's rare to see explosive equipment, and when it explodes, it's either not used, or overlapped, or it's the most suitable for the protagonist.

In fact, I am not a qualified author now, according to a certain god author, a qualified author writes works that do not like themselves, but cater to the tastes of readers.

And now most of the authors are unqualified, like me, what they write is what they think in their own hearts, think, and substitute themselves into it, so the readers who like this book have a similar personality and outlook on life as mine.

Every time I write for a period of time, it is an accumulation of writing experience, and a few days ago I watched a lecture by one of my editors, and I suddenly had an epiphany and found that it was a miracle that I could write so many words.

There is no clear main line, the power system is so chaotic, it is a miracle that it has not collapsed until now, and other authors like me are almost eunuchs in less than half a million words.

So I had an epiphany, writing a novel is to tell a story, and I need a goal, a goal for the protagonist, a goal for me,

The goal of the protagonist is to keep getting stronger in the reincarnation space, so what happens in the middle and how to get stronger, this is what the novel wants to write, arrange a main line, the main line from weak to strong, how many stages of this line become stronger, how to become stronger in each stage, how to change this is the plot I want to write.

This is what I have only summed up in the past few days, and it turns out that this is how I wrote a novel, no wonder the last book collapsed later.

Although this book has the experience of the previous book, the most fundamental point was not expected at first.

Fortunately, it's not too late.,I'll sort out the plot in the future.,I won't make the original mistake again.,Otherwise, this book will end in a hurry like the last one.。

I'm posting this post so openly.,It's a self-defeating ugly.,I guess no author dares to do this.,This Nima is absolutely dead.、

However, there are problems that must be faced squarely in order to make progress, and I also have a goal, which is to make more money, but if it continues to be so muddy, this book will definitely hang.

This can be regarded as a reminder to oneself and a monument to remind oneself that this kind of mistake must not be made in the future.

Finally, please rest assured, this book will not be a eunuch, as long as someone reads it, it will be written, and it will be written better and better.

In addition, I hope that there will be no comments in the book review area about I want a eunuch, I have a good character, it is impossible to be a eunuch, from writing the book to the present, I have never stopped changing, I have never lost my words, this is obvious to all.

I am a high-quality author who belongs to a cherished animal, and it is rare to see it~v~. (To be continued.) )