The second part [Beauty Army] is finished until chapter 111, and the third part [Ghost-faced Assassin] continues to play!

After each book, I want to say something, first, to talk about what I have learned, second, to sort out my thoughts, and third, to complain about my life......

1 Regarding the number of words, I would like to say that:

I didn't expect this to write nearly 200,000 words, which was very unexpected to me, more than the 170,000 words in the first part, and if you write it according to the outline, there is still a lot of content that has not been written, and in desperation, you can only leave it for the third part.

But due to work reasons, the number of words updated every day, this month is really not good, and next month, is it all better, I hope so.

2 What I would like to say about the plot:

The second part is in a hurry to highlight the characters of the five heroines.,Too much emphasis on ambiguous feelings.,And it's lacking in fighting monsters and fighting PK.,So in the second zuihou chapters.,Without destroying the emotional drama.,I tried to add more combat scenes into it.,In order to balance the points.,I hope it's not self-defeating.。

Another point is,I want to break through the routine of online games specializing in fighting monsters and upgrading.,I hope to add a little something else into it.,But after reading it today.,It feels like it's a little off track.,I'll turn back to the third part.。

3 Regarding the improvements, I would like to say that:

At present, the four voting records of this book, ambiguous aiqing and bloody battles are evenly ranked first, and the funny language and intrigue are not very good, so I will follow everyone's meaning, and the third part strengthens aiqing and combat, and downplays the funny and tricky aspects.

There is also data that needs to be diluted, when I wrote the first part, I was still thinking about using a semi-data stream, but the second part was changed, and the data used was very small, and the third part will be more diluted, except for some necessary data, I will try to use Arabic numerals as little as possible, so I will not take the data flow route later in this book. (I admire Ye Da here, the data god, who can do it!) There is also an improvement to be made: most of the readers of online games are some young friends, and what they need is true white, simple and cool, and now, maybe the text is a little difficult to write, off track, so I will try to write as straightforward as possible in the future, maybe this is one of the reasons why I can't be fast.

4 What I want to say about the heroine is:

The five heroines of this book have all appeared one by one, although it is not a shining debut, but it is also linked to the protagonist one by one.

I hate it when the female protagonist appears on the stage, "sigh yes" and falls in love with the male protagonist obsessively.,So the female protagonist and the male protagonist in my book met and fell in love.,It's written very rigorously.,This may not be suitable for young friends YY.,But it will be strengthened in the third part.,However,I'm still a little biased that aiqing still needs to come step by step.,Push the female owner down at once and lose a lot of feelings and imagination.,So,I'll be responsible for the aiqing in my book to the end.,Of course,It's still YY when the time is right.。

I want to write that the five heroines have their own personalities: the troubled times are more powerful, the thousand mountains and twilight snow are more cold and arrogant, the smile is more kind, Nalan Ruyi is more straightforward, and Yun Zaitian is more mysterious (the latter two scenes are not many at present), but if you want to outline them all, it is a big project, and you can only take your time in the back. The reason why I try to write them differently is because I can't even read the heroine of a thousand rules.

5 About the male protagonist, what I want to say is:

The protagonist Tian Qi has gone from hating the world in the first part to respecting the demon in the second part, and his character is gradually calming down, and the reason is naturally affected by new emotional factors. Although this book is known as the leader of the Demon Cult, I will definitely not write a hateful and murderous and bloodthirsty demon who comes out, if I really write like that, it will become an underworld novel.

Please don't say I'm digressing, Zhang Wuji is also the leader of the Demon Sect, but look at his kindness and thickness, I'm really ashamed of these four words, but my Tian Qi character will never lean on his road, and I plan to write him as a person who can play some tricks in the later stage, because there are more and more opponents in the game, and if you don't "smart" a little, it won't work.

6 What I would like to say about the members of this book [Demon Cult] is:

The position list of the Demon Sect in this book, among the twelve zodiac killers, there are now [Sheep Killer] Su Ren, [Tiger Killer] Xianzi, and [Dragon Killer] Phantom are in place, and I will let them appear as soon as possible in the third part, these people will be the elite of the Demon Sect in the future, and they will dominate the rivers and lakes with the protagonist in the future and dominate the world. (It's not just a show of face and it's gone) The rest of the positions are still being recruited.,I'm not going to call out loud.,If you're interested, go to see the first chapter related to this book [This book Demon Cult was established.,Recruit the world's heroes].,It's useless to break my throat if I'm not interested.。

The advantage of online game novels is that the enemy and himself can be resurrected with full blood.,So in the second part, I used the enemy of the first part as well.,And the third part will also be on top of the original enemy.,Plus a new big shili opponent.,So the protagonist's enemies will be more and more.,There's going to be a big war after all.。 And Nalan Ruyi and Yun Zaitian will also add more scenes, revealing that the two of them want to help Tian Qi.

The reason why the third part is called [Ghost-faced Assassin] is because the protagonist secretly gradually changed from a swordsman to an assassin. A book friend left me a message in the front, saying that I should strengthen some martial arts in the novel, and in the third part, I will strengthen the skills of the protagonist in all aspects.

Another point is,The third part of me will become a 2K-party.,Because now a day of nearly 4000 words of a change,I suffered a big loss on clicks.,I weishenme don't become 2000 words a day for two more.,If you have time,,There will be three more.。

Also, after the second part, I will try to use the name of the game for all the characters (including the heroine), so as not to have too many names and too messy, which will affect the reading.

Alright, that's it for the second postscript! The National Day is coming, I wish you all a happy holiday in advance!