I saw someone in the comments this morning that my plot was unreasonable, to be honest, I wasn't angry at all, but very excited, you may not know, my last book was passed down from one book to another, and that one was written to 100,000 words, not to mention that no one criticized, not even a single one, this feeling is not disappointment, it's just despair. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

There are a lot of plots in my book, if you think it's unreasonable, please put it forward, I'm very willing to discuss it with readers, many plots in my book may be really unreasonable, you put it forward and I'll correct it, even if I rearrange the outline, I just hope that more readers can recognize me, I built a QQ group 292697998, readers with ideas can discuss with me, if you don't want to deal with me, you can say it in the comment area, as long as I can see it, I think it's reasonable will tell you, If it doesn't make sense, I'll correct it.

Let me tell you about the setting of the protagonist, the protagonist is first of all a student, this kind of person has not been trained by society, so many ideas are still very naïve, from his rescue of Lin Qian, it can be seen that he left angrily regardless of He Guang as soon as he was squeezed, but the protagonist's personality will change with the increase of experience, and you can slowly see it later.

On the issue of plot setting, a lot of time for the game, I will make changes to the plot successively, don't worry too much, my work is not a history, just a book, please don't take it too seriously.

Thank you again to the readers who gave me their comments, and I hope to make progress with your encouragement. Thank you.

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