100 pieces of feedback
1. The current plot progress of this book is almost in the middle of the story, so it's time for a round of feedback.
2. The title of this volume is "The Depths of the Soul".
3. In fact, after writing these, you can also see some metaphors, the main plot of this volume is that Lorenzo recognizes himself, who is this lost witcher?
4. Of course, I think the ending will be quite interesting according to my conception.
5. I had a previous discussion with another author about how to write a good story, and at the end of the day, the story is about making the reader feel emotional.
6. For example, cool, such as funny, but these two emotions are easy to elicit, I want to challenge and write something different.
7. After all, I consider myself a more aspiring author.
8. So the highlights of this volume are probably just beginning.
9. By the way, this book is expected to be between 200w and 300w.
10. Actually, I don't really want to write too long, so I try to condense the plot as much as possible, in fact, the plots of this volume at present, except for the transitional chapters, they have an echo effect on all the plots in the future.
11. So I think that what I wrote is not water, after all, the black angel has been opened, and the plot of directly water a Gundam to fight demons can be a lot of water.
12. It's a bit unnecessary, though, you say.
13. I'm an aspiring author, again.
14. So I wanted to write something different.
15. I also tried a lot of new writing ideas in this book.
16. For example, online taboos, interpolation! flashback!
17. Actually, I was very hesitant when writing this volume, because from a certain point of view, this volume could have been written as a prequel to this book, but such a large flashback must have hit the street, but in order to recall the past, and move forward in parallel with reality, so that the reader's senses are not so bad, I made a new attempt.
18. For example, the plot of Uncanny Valley.
19. This is a memory of the past about ten chapters long.
20. But I think it's definitely not good to write "Lorenzo fell into memories" at the beginning, and then barabala, and insert a plot by force.
21. So here I suddenly thought of some scenes of detectives solving cases in American dramas.
22. The protagonist states the murderer's motives and methods in front of the camera, and the scene in the back changes at this time to simulate the crime scene at that time, so as to achieve the parallel of memory and reality.
23. But that's a film and television drama, and that's text.
24. Fortunately, after writing it, everyone's senses are also good, and it seems that the experiment was successful.
25. I like to paraphrase some of the images into words.
26. You may not believe it when you say it, but I am a student of art, and painting is a dead end.
27. However, I am invincible.
28. You say I write poorly, but I'm a painter!
29. Back to the character here.
30. I wanted to write something different, like focusing on the plot and characters.
31. Online writing is an extremely long creative process.
32. So in this long process, it is easy for something unexpected to happen, such as some characters that you can't control, also known as writing and writing collapse.
33. So I don't want to set what heroine and what final boss at the beginning.
34. Because this thing is a foundation, if it is set, it will be bound, and it will not be determined in advance, and everything will be determined according to the direction of the plot to confirm the final identity of each character, but there may be some new tricks.
35. I also want to create some interesting characters, like a "group portrait" that tries it and dies if you touch it.
36. Just kidding, try it a little, and finally come back to life, you can't play yourself to death, right?
37. Speaking of uncontrollable characters, in fact, there are many in this article, and the results are surprisingly good.
38. For example, Sabo, I just thought there should be a mini-boss battle at the time, and writing this is out of control with the original idea, but it's not bad.
39. By the way, the creative process of this book can easily get out of control.
40. The birth of this book was purely accidental.
41. In the beginning, there were no witchers, and the era was not Victorian, but a group of superpowers who lived in modern times and were called the Crooks.
42. I've always felt that there is a more important category missing from urban abilities.
43. It is very rigorous, low-magical, and uses the only ability to carry out a battle full of calculation and suspicion.
44. And, of course, a group of cheerful, contemporary superpowered college students.
45. I think this category is quite interesting, because it is more or less a bit of a hamster attribute, I think I have enough manuscripts to send again, and then I wrote almost 20w.
46. The plot of the first volume, to be exact.
47. After all, people have dreams, and I want to write as perfect a volume as possible, tricking you into it first, and then what cover does not match the real thing...... Hey, hey, hey.
48. It's a pity that this one didn't even get signed.
49. It was actually quite a loss at that time.
50. My roommate and I had a whim, and being idle is also idle, I asked Brother Cai, why not the whole game?
51. Brother Cai: "Whole!"
52. As a result, it is so difficult to make a game, it requires a lot of money, and you can't even make a demo.
53. Brother Cai said that he should not outsource.
54. It takes money to outsource.
55. So I became an idol for the 600 yuan full attendance reward.
56. So the question is, what to write?
57. It seems to have been mentioned in the group, this book was originally a cyber detective.
58. Watson is a top hacker beautiful girl nestled in a rental house, and Sherlock Holmes is a mechanical transman who carries a plasma shotgun with him when he goes out, and under all the surveillance, he is an unrecognizable mosaic.
59. But ah, science fiction, if you don't write it well, it's very earthy, so you give up.
60. Then change the setting of the superpower book, and the ember of the gun was born!
61. Applause!
62. Then, then......
63. And then Ember Gun is still serialized, but the game's unity engineering hasn't been updated for months......
64. Life is a ruthless carving knife~
65. Back to the book.
66. I think every character should have a past and a future, not a simple showboard.
67. The protagonist is too, he should have a vivid personality and not be a tool man who drives the plot.
68. Of course, if you write about the psychological activities of some characters and some ideas in depth, it is easy to be accused of being young and hypocritical.
69. So where is the boundary between civility and hypocrisy!
70. Of course, it's just an online article, why is it so profound.
71. I'm very pursued, okay!
72. But it can't be helped, he gives too much.
73. Just kidding, crowdfunding to write a book, crowdfunding to write a book.
74. But to quibble for yourself, this is my second book!!
75. I have quite a lot of weird ideas.
76. For example, the beginning of several new books was conceived.
77. Of course, I'll write about embers well!
78. But also wanted to write some short stories, currently conceived one, with a vague approximation.
79. Then there are some stories of practicing pen in high school, which now seem a little immature, find time to delete them.
80. Then I made a whole public account, and I will probably update some strange stories randomly.
81. Its name is called!
82. Chocobo Breeding Center!
83. That's right, the name of the official account is Chocobo Breeding Center!
84., that's my pen name plus 00r.
85. Even though I talk about 00r, I prefer Unicorn Gundam.
86. Orewa Gang Big Wood!
87. By the way, the data is currently in the 5w collection, and it has barely climbed to the average order of 1800, which is still 100 million points away from the boutique badge!
88. Crowdfunding to write a book, knock knock.
89. Then, again, it's about this book, because unlike regular online texts, the cool point of this book is not one fragment after another, but a whole volume of stories.
90. So ...... So...... Crowdfunding to write a book!
91. Actually, I want to put together 9 more 100 pieces of feedback, but is it interesting to see my water 9 pieces?
92. Anyway, this is a free chapter, so it's a waste of everyone's time.
93. I think it's funny.
94. Do you say roar or not!
95. And thank you for your support up to now, after all, this book really crawled out of the street step by step.
96.4!
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98.2!
99.1!
100.0!
Bedtime, good night.