Recently, I haven't been in a good mood, since the beginning of the month, first I have a cold, pharyngitis, and then my wife and daughter have also fallen ill one after another. My wife's wisdom teeth have pericoronitis, low-grade fever, can't eat well, and has a toothache that hurts her head. Then my daughter had a cold and cough, and a few days later developed pneumonia, and now she has mycoplasma infection, and she has been hospitalized for a week, and she can be discharged tomorrow, but she still has to take medicine for a month, and then she will be re-examined.

To be honest, physically and mentally exhausted. I don't have the time or mood to code, so this week's updates are really slow. I apologize again.,It should be fine after today.,Tomorrow's update can be back to normal.,I'm trying to break out for a while.,Please forgive me.。

But I am writing this article today, mainly because I want to talk about this, but because of the cliché issue of 'water'. Since Xiaoyu code words, many readers have said the problem of 'writing water'......

To be honest, Xiaoyu sometimes really doesn't know what water is and what is not. Isn't any novel a foreshadowing, a climax, a trough, a foreshadowing, a climax? Without troughs and foreshadowing, how can the climax be reflected? Dry and walkable plot? So what do you see? Shall I just paste the outline up? The outline must be dry, and it is absolutely not mixed with any water, but is that kind of text good-looking?

Then take my brother's diary as a model (fortunately, he doesn't read my novels). That's what he wrote at the time.

Today, the weather is fine, I get up in the morning to eat, after eating I go to herd the sheep, and after herding the sheep I come back for dinner, and I play for a while and sleep. ’

That's concise enough, isn't it? More than a dozen words, all the things I did in one day were written. But is this the kind of book that everyone wants to read? Can't I really write it? This is how the last chapter of the peak of martial arts is written. Why is it that a reader at the peak of martial arts scolds me TJ, unfinished?

Because this is a novel, I try to portray enough pictures to make everyone feel happy or sad when they enter the story, but I always hope to touch everyone a little bit with words. And this requires pen and ink and portrayal.

'It's a beautiful woman. ’

This is a very beautiful girl, she is wearing a pale yellow short-sleeved T-shirt, white shorts, slender and round thighs without stockings still look very delicate, no pores can be seen. There is a pair of crystal high heels on his feet, and his round toes are like mutton fat and white jade, which makes people breathe rapidly. The long black wavy hair on her slender shoulders was casually put on her shoulders, and she smiled slightly, but there was a kind of amazement that went straight to the hearts of the people. She came with a smile and attracted everyone's attention.

The same is to say that a beautiful woman came over, the former is undoubtedly much more streamlined, and the latter is probably going to be said 'procrastinating' and 'irrigating'. Actually, the former is too much to describe, and I don't need to think much about what this girl looks like, what clothes she wears, and what her figure is, just a sentence of 'she is a beauty'. For the rest, the reader will make up for it himself.

As for the latter, I must now sketch out the image of a beautiful woman in my mind, and then describe it in words, clothes, dress, hairstyle, figure, and even temperament, I have to think about it first, so as to accurately convey the image of the beauty in my mind to the minds of readers...... Believe me, it's not an easy thing to do. Creating a character from scratch, even if it's just the appearance, is actually very brain-intensive.

It's a lot of hard work.

According to the former description, I can indeed save a lot of time and effort. But if this is also saved, then it is also saved, what else to write? What do readers look at? As an author, I don't use pen and ink to reinforce the impression of a character, do I ask the reader to make up for it on their own?

Back to the recent plot. If the rules are not clearly written, the reader does not have a concept in their minds, and when there is a series of conflicts because of the rules, will everyone feel abrupt? Feeling baffled?

Not to mention anything else, if I let Zhou Linhui suddenly kneel down in front of the protagonist and cry and beg for mercy now; Cheng Wei suddenly became a silly white sweet, panicked in trouble; Leng Yujia suddenly has a tough personality and is as irritable as fire; Ye Xiao suddenly looked like the first Lao Tzu and the second in the sky...... Is it acceptable?

I'm sure you can't. Why not? Isn't it because a lot of ink has been spent describing their personalities? put a few chapters on the shelves, letting everyone know Zhou Linhui's forbearance and the city government; In contact with Ye Xiao's smile, everyone knew Cheng Wei's scheming and wrist; In this process, Ye Xiao also has his own ideas and calculations; And in this process, Leng Yujia's silence and gloom also illustrate her character and foreshadowing......

These are all things that need to be written and inked, and I hope that you can feel it between the lines of my words, rather than me putting it up directly. Otherwise, how much less is the story to watch?

And then I will pull the question of 'twinkle in the eyes'. Everyone mentioned it, and I gladly accepted it, and it was true that there were too many flashes. I will pay attention to the follow-up and strive not to dazzle everyone again. Because of the relationship between level and vocabulary, as well as the relationship between my own inherent style, I do repeat some words a lot, which is a matter of level. I strive to keep improving.

I know that my level is limited, and there are many unsatisfactory aspects of my writing, such as too much ink in some places, and problems such as overdoing it. I know, and I'm also learning and improving. If anyone really can't stand it, then I'm sorry, I have a problem with my ability to tell the story, this story can't attract you, you want to leave, I'm sorry, but I don't force it.

I strive to improve my storytelling skills in subsequent chapters and even in future writing, so that one day I can attract you and be recognized by more people. But be assured, from the bottom of my heart, no one wants this book to be wonderful and engaging more than me.

Finally, on the issue of piracy/copying.

To be honest, the results of this book are actually unsatisfactory, not to mention the peak of martial arts, but also with the ultimate inheritance, the Sword Emperor of Rebirth in the Otherworld, there is no way to compare. Maybe it's an audience problem, maybe it's something I'm really writing about, so it's not worth some readers spending money to see the book.

I even thought about turning on anti-theft before, that is, making a bunch of garbled characters or duplicate chapters during the first update, and then modifying them into official updated chapters after an hour or two of uploading...... Many authors are opening it, but I thought about it for a while, and in the end it didn't open. On the one hand, it's too troublesome.,So anti-theft/version for me.,For genuine readers,It's a troublesome thing.,Especially for APP readers.,If I click on it before I upload the official chapter.,Then you have to re-download the novel.,Although it's only a matter of a few minutes.,Or even tens of seconds.,But I think it's very troublesome.,So,I didn't open it.。

On the other hand, I also think that readers who watch pirated/editions are also readers. Some of you don't think it's worth spending money on this book, and some of you really don't have money to read it...... While I want everyone to come and see the original, I also know that at this stage, it's unlikely.

But for readers who watch piracy/editions, I would like to say a word...... Look at piracy/version, I don't say anything about you. You can watch it if you want, I can't control it, and I can't control your behavior. However, if you watch the pirated/edition without spending a penny, and after reading it, you still come to the genuine book review area to talk about it, what is 'too watery, I can't stand it', what 'garbage' and so on, then I can't agree with it.

You have to give advice, yes, reasonable advice, I agree, and will accept it. I'm not someone who can't stand criticism and can't listen to other words. But if you don't agree with each other, it's 'garbage' and 'too water', sorry, but the genuine book review area is not a channel for you to vent. If you look at piracy, then please post these comments in the piracy section. Watch pirated/edition or come to the genuine book review area to disgust me? Or 'don't subscribe because you don't want to waste money'? What is your mindset? You didn't plan to spend money in the first place, who don't think you can see?

Rinima is disgusting.

At this point, my daughter is still hanging the bottle, she is in a bad mood, she is a little bit talkative, and her words are a little sharp, but she doesn't plan to modify it. Tomorrow we will resume normal updates and strive to break out more. (To be continued.) )