Well, from Ark Fortress to Dawn, from Dawn through the Mottled Forest and the Merol Mines to Azur Harbor, and from Azur Harbor to Hurengel, the first volume of the story ends here, and the title of the volume is a bit of a topic in the last few chapters (laughs).

Since it is a summary written after the end of the volume, let's start with the beginning of the story.

At the beginning of the story, due to the lack of preparation when we first started writing, we chose to imitate the plot development techniques of overload (the king of the undead) and Lao Roll 5 (The Elder Scrolls V), and the result was naturally a lot of complaints about the sense of discovery (of course, I believe everyone is kind, haha).

Next,Chapter 4 of the story,At first, we were not prepared enough, we originally planned to use DND as the power system of this book.,It turned out that the kobold in the DND system was hacked again.,When it was pointed out by a book friend, it was really stunned on the spot.,Later, there was a mystery of "20 power = 10 power x2 so the protagonist's strength is about twice that of ordinary people" (the attribute value of the DND system seems to use a multiple-increasing algorithm), and finally gave up the idea of imitating DND after thinking about it, Instead, he began to build on most of the Western fantasy settings. Don't pick up unfamiliar things and use them indiscriminately, this is a lesson we learned in the creation of this volume of stories, and I hope we can remember this in the future.

Generally speaking, the bigger problem in the first volume should be the bug in the original power system setting, this defect must be very dramatic for DND lovers who are familiar with the rules, but this book has been written for almost 40w words, and it is not very troublesome to change, but it will definitely take a little time...... Well, if we have time, let's think about whether to fix it.

In addition to the problem of the setting system, since it is the first time to write a novel, there must still be various flaws in the description of the scene and the shaping of the characters, but at present, we are basically satisfied.

The grasp of the rhythm of the plot still needs to be learned slowly.,The ability to choose words and form sentences is barely handy thanks to a little bit of literary illness.,The text on the battle plot seems to be a little too much.,If you need to, you can reduce it a little.。

As for the update speed...... Grandpa of the audience, it's really not intentional to have a handicap, we are also very sad about this thing of hand speed, and the little angel of Kaneki on the ghoul set on the other side of the sea is still sad (curator's face)

Why don't we wait for it to be put on the shelves, let's try to see if we can change it twice a day? If you don't mind, let's compress the number of words in each chapter, about 4.5K words a day, and the workload is not much more than about 3K words a day now.

If you think about it, you can try it and see how it works when it hits the shelves.

That's pretty much the harvest from the first volume.

Next, the title of the second volume is "The Obsidian Codex", and the story of this volume will revolve around the legacy left by the half-elf witch king White to the Fourth Age, and by the way, some necessary characters and plots will be introduced.

In the second volume of the story, the young people will be divided into two groups, Fain, Lilith, Arya, and Camussa will first present their adventures through the dagger jungle to the Scorpion Valley, while Arroyo, Raymond, and Tina's itinerary will lead to the appearance of the nobles of the Violet Kingdom.

As the time of the story draws closer to the date of the Tide's arrival, what will the undead leaders of the Dark Alliance do? Will the kingdom on the west coast of the St. Flen Sea be facing the scourge of war for the second time? Will the movements of the Templar Church affect the plans of the young people? And the protagonist of the story, Finn, will be able to get ahead of everyone else to get the Obsidian Codex as he wishes?

Stay tuned ^_^

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