A book friend told me the only one, saying that someone complained about me in Longkong, and the only one who went to read the post on the Longkong forum, the book friend who posted in Longkong mentioned a few points, although the language is aggressive, and I don't look very well at this book, most of them are indeed complaining, but the only thing I want to thank this book friend is!

If you can put forward these points, it means that you have read this book carefully, which is a kind of respect for both this book and the only me, you respect the fruits of my labor, and I also respect your remarks, even if you are complaining about me! If you can find the point of complaining, it means that you are still lacking.

Maybe when people see someone complaining about their posts, their first reaction is disgust and they don't want to accept it! However, the only difference between me and me, after reading the post carefully, I was full of joy, and someone carefully read the beginning and gave me advice, so that the book has a direction for improvement!

A novel is not written for the author himself, but for the reader!

Whether the reader likes the article, or complains, even if you scold me, this is your right!

As long as you respect my rights and the fruits of your labor, I will certainly respect your rights as well!

Therefore, if you have any comments on this book in the future, you can put it forward in the book review area, the only thing I often read, as long as it is reasonable to accept it humbly, it is indeed a shortcoming in this book, of course, complaining or something, the only one I will not mind, but I want to say one more thing: I can complain about the only one, don't pull it on the only one of my relatives and friends!

What follows is the only explanation I have for which person to complain about:

1. Shen Lingyun's problem of swearing at the beginning:

The only thing is to create a living character, and it's also the main character!

As a modern young otaku, it's normal to be excited to play games, and swear words pop out of my mouth, and the only thing I and my friends around me have such a habit when I'm excited to play games.

For this point, it is even more prominent that the protagonist is a true temperament and a down-to-earth person!

It's not a hypocrite who talks about benevolence and morality, but acts like a villain! (You will naturally learn this in the future plot)

2. Regarding Shen Lingyun's identity after crossing over, the most important point for that Longkong's book friend is: why Shen Lingyun and his father are the only ones in the other world of a European group are of the yellow race.

In this regard, the only thing I want to say is that this is indeed not a big loophole, and it must be corrected at the same time, the protagonist Shen Lingyun is a mixed-race child after crossing, and you will know if you look carefully at the beginning of the article, as for why his father is a yellow race, this involves the development of the plot, and now I will talk about spoilers, and you will naturally understand in the future, from the plot that has unfolded now, Fa Sheng Black also mentioned that there is a Chinese clan (that is, a yellow race, as for why it is called this name, hehe, sell a pass, let's take a closer look) This group, It will also appear slowly in the future.

3. The biggest problem is Essence Jump, isn't Ezreal's Displacement Skill Arcane Jump? ~ This, the only thing I can only say, I'm sorry, it's my cheap, I should have sent a revised draft, but I sent the original manuscript, the initial setting and now a little deviation, the result is this kind of mistake that seems to be common sense, has been modified, and the book friend with obsessive-compulsive disorder on the mobile phone deleted it again The next time is, this kind of common-sense mistake will appear again in the future, you can put it forward in the book review area, give me a face, don't hold it in your heart!

Finally, I would like to mention one more thing: Some unreasonable is the only thing I deliberately wrote like this, and the conflict is the pit dug (friendly reminder: don't fall into the pit, people say that my brain hole is a bit big!) This article is full of suspense and mystery, and this is not a simple book, there are strategies, thoughts, conspiracies, and blood!

Not much to say, in case it leaks, it will be a spoiler!

In short, thank you to all the book friends who read this article!