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A few days ago, I said a lot of testimonials on the shelves.,This book,The biggest problem is the plot.,Writing the other world ended up writing infinity.,Up to now,I'm also quite speechless.,Probably my ability to create the plot needs to be improved.,

There are a lot of slots in the book, all of which were brought up by the brothers, and there are some places, and indeed I go back to read them now, and it's quite. Egg,But in some places,There are still some differences with everyone.,For example, the conflict at the beginning of the protagonist's growth road.,It's very impulsive.,But let's think about the background of the protagonist at that time.,An otaku.,Lived in a place like the Colosseum for a year.,There must be only brute force.,To say that the overall situation and the way to act after planning.,I don't think he has it.,These qualities are aside from talent.,If you want to cultivate the day after tomorrow.,You must have a sufficient environment.。 Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 ｉｎｆｏ

The protagonist was an otaku before he crossed over, and he was a slave after he crossed, and such an environment and encounters can hone a tenacious mentality and indomitable spirit, but to say that like an emperor, everything is expected to be the enemy first, and things are interlocked, I think it is impossible to cultivate in that kind of environment

Let's talk about the slaughter of the city later, maybe this way of writing is a bit extreme, which makes many brothers uncomfortable, which is also the reason why there is a problem in my description, and there is not much foreshadowing, but I still take the protagonist's growth as an example, the protagonist at that time had just opened the big summoning system, even if in a year of life and death training, the character became tough, but at that time, I had just obtained the opportunity of the big summoning system, and in terms of mentality, there will definitely be some more complacent changes. On the road of grassroots growth, there will always be this kind of emotion, I think this is a very normal change, just like a beggar who suddenly became a billionaire, from extreme inferiority to have a huge energy after the self-esteem is very high, it is a truth, at this time, when encountering shady scenes, suppression, it is natural to resist vigorously, and then cause a series of evil consequences after cynicism

And the person who came out of that environment had to dance with death every day, and wanted him to have a savior heart, I don't think it's realistic, I pity the world, so did the world pity me when I was sinned? In that case, since the means can be revenged, under the extreme mentality at that time, I think the matter of slaughtering the city may be a little dark, but it still makes sense.

Of course, this is a family statement, I was thinking in this direction when I wrote it, I didn't think in other directions, it may be a little incomplete, and now that the writing is finished, even if you are dissatisfied, you can understand it, ha

There's also a failure.,It's the city hunter.,It's really not a good match with this book.,I didn't think much about it when I wrote it.,I'm chasing another book.,Writing here.,It feels very emotional.,Of course,I didn't copy it.,This point should be seen by brothers who have read it carefully.,Regardless of the plot or writing techniques.,But it's the same copy.,Just want to write this plot.,After all, for many readers,,The movies of that era may be a little unfamiliar.,But I grew up watching the movies of that era.,Some resonance, But when I read it later, this plot was a little out of place with the whole book, especially when I went to fill in the pit later, this feeling was especially spit out.

These are probably the more controversial places, I didn't fight with you at the time, because I didn't think it was necessary, no matter whether my truth stood up or not, the problem appeared, it was all what I wrote, which brought everyone an uncomfortable feeling, and if you win, you can't get anything back, now that I'm done, I'll list these problems, and tell you my own opinions, the book review area will read it every day, no don't pay attention to it, as for Jianqun, it's honestly not that I don't want to build, but I always feel that I'm still almost, and I don't have the face to see everyone, In case one day as soon as you enter the group, you will be scolded by everyone, and the feeling of a day is gone, well, there is another reason that I am lazy, I have been playing the identity of a diver for ten thousand years in all the groups, and WeChat is read once a week, for fear of being scolded if you don't show up when you build a group.

Anyway, the book is over, the new book wants to prepare for a while, and by the way, take a break, count the previous one, there has been no disconnection between the two books, and now there are a few good beginnings, but which one to write has not yet been decided, and it will be advertised in the two old books when the time comes, and it will start writing in early August, thank you for your continued support (to be continued.) )8