About the unfilled pits
The book is over, although the ending is not very ideal.
But I think that the national war has already been carried out at this point, and it will be meaningless if South Korea and Japan are resurrected and fought again.
It's my fault that I didn't have an outline at the time, so I've got to finish it now.
Next, some of the parts of the book that have not yet been shown are supplemented by the original settings.
1. The protagonist's ability: This lightning ability has only been revealed in a small part so far. In my original scenario, the protagonist would use the weak electricity of the game helmet to amplify his lightning ability. Later in the book, a world of supernatural abilities will be revealed, and the scene where they go on an outing to Nanshan is a foreshadowing for the future. Through the upgrade of the ability, the ability can be separated from the spirit body and enter another spiritual world, and this world is very similar to the game world, so it is used as an extension of the game world. Then there is another great war in the spirit world (similar to a national war or something). If this setting is followed, the book cannot be finished without five or six million words.
2. The Mysterious Girl: According to my original idea, these are all paving the way for the spiritual world to follow. This girl is the key, and her appearance is to guide the protagonist to finally change from a gamer to a supernatural player, and participate in a "game world" created by the creator god zào. And Professor Yang's son is the mysterious person who pursues the girl, because they are carrying out a god-making plan, and they have spied on the heavens. In a vain attempt to use the genes of the guò girl to modify ordinary humans, mass production of ability players. This point is basically not mentioned in this book, but a little shadow has just been released.
3. God-making project: A scientific research company led by Professor Yang inadvertently created a supernatural person with thunder and lightning, and finally came up with a formula through research. But because this would bring ruinous consequences, Professor Yang and others withdrew. But his son stole the formula and applied it to the game helmet through guò hacking. The Tongguò game helmet is a weak electric stimulation of undeveloped areas of the human brain to achieve the purpose of cultivating abnormal people. This is the God-making plan. Later in the book, it will become a paranormal novel (about this, it has been criticized by many people, so I won't talk about it.) 4. The fall of the divine realm in the game: Although it runs through the whole book, it is only a few strokes, and many people may not feel that this setting has any effect. In fact, this setting was a prelude to future abilities. The so-called fall of the divine realm actually implies the fall and disappearance of the "divine realm" (the world of the supernatural) in real life, which is inseparable from the research of Professor Yang and others. In the end, when the player explores the secrets of the fall of the gods, they will discover the game's passage to reality, and smoothly transfer to the real game.
5. About the Dark Dragon: It's a tragedy of love. The entire plot mission of the Dark Dragon revolves around the story of the Dark Dragon's desire to break through the shackles of the world and pursue the woman he loves. Because the needs of the task have been divided into several segments, and so far they have not been fully demonstrated, but they have only just begun. If it is not finished, the Dark Dragon will eventually break through the cage with the help of the Avatar protagonist and become the protagonist's mount and companion.
6. About the ending: Some readers may think that this ending is too hasty. From the perspective of the national war alone, the national war has been completed. Korea has only the last main city left, but without elite medical records, it is only a matter of time before it is captured. No need to write it. Japan, on the other hand, is mainly talking about Japan in the last few chapters, and after the melee in Korea, Japan's forces are almost exhausted. And the most difficult battle of the battles, the offensive and defensive battles of Yokohama Castle. Japan has already taken out the last elite to fight. The capture of Yokohama meant that it would be difficult for Japan to organize an effective resistance. So it's not interesting to write any more. The war of attrition between the Eastern Route Army of the Northern Alliance and the East Asian Alliance has basically dragged down the strength of the entire East Asian region, and the Chinese players who have reaped the benefits of the fishermen have become the strongest forces in the region. The outcome of the national war is self-evident.
7. About the attribution of the protagonist: Most readers scold this piece, which is too sloppy. Or maybe it doesn't meet their expectations. All I can say is that, judging by the structure of the story, this ending is actually quite certain. I'm not a casual person, and I think the same goes for the protagonist, to be responsible. So he chose Shangguan Wan'er, basically there was no suspense.
8. About this book: Readers who may have read it have also discovered, "Does the content of this book have anything to do with NPCs?" Where is the date? "So, it's too far off the topic. This is also the reason why the book can only end like this in the end.
9. About the new book: After summarizing the shortcomings of the book, I began to focus on the role of the dà gang. Run through the main line of the whole text and master the rhythm and cool points. I believe that the new book can give you a completely different feeling.