Commenting on "Heroes and Invincible Titans" - Forgotten Love

First of all, this title is very loving, at least old book lovers who watch bad online games will be attracted. The hero is invincible.,It's still a titan.,Uh.,It seems that there was an online game before the starting point.,It's also written about Titan.,It's not bad.。 Well, I'll admit that I was also attracted to the title of the book to take this book.

Only this expression is dedicated to the author. Your work is so joyful. It's been a long time since I've seen such a standard textbook-style work. Let's take a closer look:

The protagonist is a waste of wood,

Mildew over the broom star,

The account is stolen first,

All members mutinied,

Go out and step on shit,

The computer was struck by lightning,

The beautiful young woman on the road,

Save the United States and be killed.

Crossing into a child,

The little sister sits beside her,

double no pseudo-waste wood,

In fact, all of them are connected,

Magic polishes the eyes,

stall to buy artifacts,

Alms a copper coin,

In exchange for a magic roll,

Fighting like flowing water,

Babies can win too,

Otherworldly such as a stand-alone machine,

The little brother came automatically,

Pick up a torn belt,

It's a new artifact again.

Go to school and take an airship,

Sorrow drives off the cliff,

One drop for four or five days,

Scrolls to save lives.

There is a master under the cliff,

The 10,000-year-old monster is powerful.

Once dominated the semi-universe,

Now I can only survive.

Titan Angel Particle Cannon,

The dragon Beamon Hydra.

We used to make it,

It's a pity that they were all robbed.

Three years of training and upgrading quickly,

As soon as it came out, I met a snowman monster.

Dig a pit and dig out the god and monster master,

Ten thousand years of cultivation has been reduced.

A few more steps ahead,

Meet the Mini Warriors again.

Sell the garbage at will,

Tens of thousands of gold coins in the pocket.

Fight a group of monsters to collect the little brother,

The fierce men are all my brothers.

The road meets the evil waste wood team,

Three times and two times to save the Holy Maiden.

The artifact is full of hanging,

It's a pity that they don't work.

digging pits and encountering injustices,

It turned out that the author sent the younger brother.

The black dragon is hard to guard the end of ten thousand years,

It's only for the protagonist to take over.

There are a few more in the back, but unfortunately I am really powerless to write poems, so I can only barely make up these words. "God of Heroes and Titans" can be said to be a must-read textbook for newcomers. Here, you can discover Xiaobailiu's standard writing techniques, you can appreciate the charm of ancient YY novels, and you can find a sense of intellectual superiority without any Yali.

I prefer the introduction to the content, it's just two grades.

The author again started the way with the most popular pseudo-waste firewood flow at present. The protagonist is so miserable at first that he can't do it.,Uh.,Otaku is a must.,But it's also fake.,After crossing over, he runs around the map.。 Let's take a slow test of the poison.

The protagonist crossed over and was only ten years old. The parents go on an adventure and disappear when the protagonist is two years old. Grandpa is not responsible for throwing this underage Zhengtai at home, taking advantage of urgent matters to escape, life and death are uncertain. The protagonist who has survived for two years still didn't survive and hung up. After he died, he was pulled out by the author and whipped the corpse, and he was crossed, and he was sent two breaths by the way, so as not to have two lives in one corpse.

After crossing to live, he can only rely on the apple sent by his little sister to hang his life. Fortunately, the author was merciful and gave him a golden eye, no other magic is effective, only this one can dig treasure. Take my little sister to Taobao and buy artifacts on the stall. On the way out of the village, I met a mob, and after killing it, I picked up the artifact. The Academy of Magic wants to recruit students, and the waste materials immediately become superhuman, and the talents of the whole department exceed 100, which has never appeared since ancient times. It's not easy to break into the world, but the author is afraid that he will be fast and fall off the cliff for a long time.

The content has been a continuation of this pattern since then. Maybe some authors will say that anyone can write about it. But in fact, many authors overly mix their own ideas when writing, and as a result, they write works that are originally very smooth, which is extremely tangled. If you want to write a little white stream, this book is the best example, don't think about anything else, just follow two steps and dig up a treasure; Take two more steps and collect the little brothers; Fall off a cliff and pick up an invincible master; If you take the artifact, you must limit it; Covered in invincible equipment, all decorations; The heroine must be cultivated from an early age, and the roadside wildflowers must also be picked; If the plot is too fast, you can dig a pit and irrigate water; The protagonist is too strong, and the enemy is even better!

As long as you follow this model, process it a little, polish it, and twist it a little, and a smooth little white text will be freshly baked. Take a good title, write a good introduction, recommend a little more, PS a little miserable, and the results will naturally be there.

This review is not written to satirize the author. It's just that I feel when I see such an original ancient text. Today's novel authors always feel that their ideas are the best in the world, and they always feel that the IQ of readers must be negative, and the website editors are all brain-dead. As a result, a good little Baiwen has to be divided into four. The results are not good, and the readers do not know how to appreciate it, the editors are blind and do not give recommendations, and they complain that their pearls are secretly thrown in the wrong place. But I never thought about whether my work could be understood by others.

"Heroes and Invincible Titans", although it is extremely white, can be called a textbook. However, any reader, the little white old bird can easily understand. The various cool points are also obvious. I think it's totally worth learning from new authors. Your work may be really creative, but the expression is not right, and the readers don't buy it, so how can it be successful. And this book is your guiding light!! Write according to this technique, don't worry about it being too white, it's nothing more than a retouch, change a little more profound, and then whiter can it be whiter than this one? Shenma! Your book is whiter than this?! @大哥, you've become a god!

This book can be used directly as a template for other books in the future, but the expression really needs to be improved. The online article is nothing more than a war between the connotation and Xiaobai. But the templates are actually the same. When the expression technique is improved and there is a realm, everyone will say that what you say has connotation and is a good book.

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